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Brisa considered this. She climbed into the bed which she deemed the comfiest, and appraised Dave anew. With the knowledge that he was human, she realised that there was something distinctly un-poochyena about his expressions and mannerisms. Sure, he scratched like a dog, but that was just the...

"We get by well enough without hands," mused Brisa. "Hence the architecture. Wait, pokémon don't talk? Is that just a way of saying we're deeply antisocial where you're from, or are we not sapient?"

"I could use some peace and quiet tonight," Brisa confessed. "Thank you. I suppose you must be a human, usin' words like those. How are you findin' this world? It's more or less like where I come from, not that this ain't all deeply weird and distressin' for me..." She inspected each bed for...

Triple review. That's another wave of challenges complete, I believe? https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-legendarian-chronicles.48/post-5873

Triple review, motherfucker. Review policy at present is to make note of any scenes that leave a particular impression and comment on those. Looking forward to seeing how Midnight training goes! Great stuff so far, Chibi, hype for more.

Having walked back up from the beach chatting to Curio, Brisa felt the urge to secure some private resting place for herself before it was too late. The urge to find somewhere to escape to if she got caught in another group conversation was making her fur crawl. "Mind waitin' for me while I...

Brisa studied the symbol in the sand. "I'll remember it," she said, solemnly. From the sounds of it, Necrozma's experience with World Ender, if that was the threat at hand, had been cataclysmic. With no strategic advice forthcoming and a potential rockslide of grief present, she felt entirely...

"I'll do my best," said Brisa, acutely aware that she still didn't have mastery over her electricity in this body. The novelty of being so small again had worn off in a bout a minute flat, and she was impatient to regain her prior capabilities. "What's your take on our situation, anyway?" she...

Brisa's face contorted with a mix of pity, awkwardness, and a small measure of disdain. "Be seein' ya, Cynthian," she said. She made a note to keep an eye out for that one. He might need a speech like that if he were ever badly hurt. Then to the prismatic entity, "Well met, Necrozma. Can we...

"Nobody's hittin' anyone. That's what the dojo is for." Brisa surprised herself by interjecting like that. She supposed she was just now learning how she behaved when in groups. "Is everyone ready to fight 'Sushi' then?" she asked, eager to change topic. "I'm afraid I don't have much command...

Logging review trifecta for all five tiers for the first wave. I think, lmao. https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-legendarian-chronicles.48/post-5772 https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/in-search-of-haven-contest-oneshot.353/#post-5756...

Hi Chibi! I actually read chapters 5 and 5.5 a few weeks ago, but I got sidetracked before I could read on or review. Gonna drop my review now before the memory of them stops being fresh. Looking forward to reading more!

Brisa allowed Curio to pipe up with her own personal introduction. "I'm Shinx Brisa," she said afterwards, "from... from Frontier Town in my home world. This sort of thing is a first for me, but it seems real enough, and where I come from, heroes travellin' between worlds and havin' new bodies...

Curio's vocabulary was a little unfamiliar, but Brisa got the gist. It sounded... different. She thought of her daily routines. Days and days passing without note. Then finding Gil, making that journey, finding herself here. "You wouldn't care for my old life, I expect. In fact, I used to see...

Curio let Brisa catch her breath as they walked. By the time Brisa was physically comfortable enough to speak, she'd become emotionally uncomfortable with it again. So much for burning off anxious energy in the dojo. Maybe she should talk about the fight? No, she'd sound conceited for having...

Hey Cani! This was a fantastic read, and I'm so pleased to have finally got around to it. As promised, I was highly invested in the main character duo, Annie and Patch. Patch's characterisation is spot-on throughout, with her anxieties being specific, justified, and shown. The way Annie does...

Brisa allowed herself a minute to catch her breath before replying. "Thank you," she panted. "And yeah, that sounds good. I'll be restless until I figure out this situation." And it's good to have a friend to do that with, she didn't say. She followed Curio out and looked over in the direction...

Hi there, Adam! I've just finished reading the second chapter of this fic, and I have some loosely assembled thoughts. You asked me to comment on narrative structure, prose, dialogue and stuff like that. I can't say I have strong instincts for narrative structure, but I have two particular...

Brisa wriggled and crawled out from underneath the zangoose, exhausted and near her limit. One good shock was all she'd had in her. Fortunately it seemed that receiving it was all Zane could handle, too. Having extracted herself from his bulk and gingerly checked herself over for genuine...

At least the plan had worked, after a fashion. Even if it had resulted in pain and indignity. Well, there was certainly no point in holding back now. Brisa yowled as she unloaded the full force of the electric attack she'd been holding back since midway through the bout with Curio. From the...