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Some good questions here! I tend to be flexible in my canon interpretations based on what the story calls for, though after some reflection I guess I've pretty much always treated the food question the same across my stories. Canon has seemed to do its best to pretend like it never mentioned...

@NonAnalogue I am so sorry it took me so long to get back to you on this! I wanted to have your posts ready to go before I left on my trip last week, but obviously that didn't happen. The story's up in the library now, and your feature post will appear on Tumblr tomorrow. @Umbramatic Thanks for...

Yyyyup, there it is. :( At least the news doesn't have any mention of rampaging blackeyes, so hopefully nothing monstrous happened yesterday. And hopefully Fiamatta's hiding out at TimesTabled's place and doing relatively okay. Not sure if Desta knows TT at all, though... Might be a little OOC...

Whoah, Squirtles! What's up? Hope you enjoy your stay. Even if you don't want to read much, hopefully you can enjoy some world/character discussion. You're always welcome to try some of the Worldbuilding June prompts if you want to flesh out a world you've been thinking about a bit.

oH SHIT, I guess Fiametta didn't get meteors on her birthday, but I don't like that one-day inactivity at all. I think it might be a good idea to... check the news. :( > Open: AXSIS News

Oh man, I'm ALWAYS here for Orre fic, and throw in pokémorphs, too? It's like a dream come true! Loads of really cool ideas in this story even just in one short chapter. Some more picky sentence-level comments first, and then I'll get into the meat of the review. one *that comes Did you maybe...

Glad to see you posting Seiren here! It'll be a little while before you catch up to where I've read, but I look forward to getting back into the story.

Sup, just wanted to say I really appreciate you making a point to review new members' stories. It's really nice of you to give them a warm welcome, and it helps me out a lot!

Hey, welcome! I know you a little bit, of course, though I wasn't aware that you did any programming. That's cool, and I'm always surprised by how many fanfic people also dabble in code. It's great to have you, and I hope you enjoy your stay!

Hey, roule! Glad to see you around. Hope you're had fun returning to writing.

This turned out great! I love how managed to net us two badges in the very first post and then it took all the way in part seven to get us back on track. Also love the "duct taping pokémon together" leitmotif that managed to continue for about half the story before disappearing completely...

Is... is that... MoThErFuCkInG mIrAcLeS? :o) > CHAT: MiraclesMatter

A couple of short chapters! I'm glad to see Kenya again, of course. It's great that she's just been casually continuing her journey while the rest are all off getting sucked into ultra beast fights and whatnot. Of course, she can't escape the plot forever! It's also very telling that her first...

On to Chapter 2! It's "bolt upright." I think this would sound a little better if you rephrased it so you aren't repeating "the wall" near the end. One thing to watch out for is that when a character calls another by their name or title in dialogue (e.g. "Hey, Tim!" or "Whatever you say...

Welcome to the forums! Thanks for posting your story. Just reading the summary, it's like, whoah, this is going to escalate quickly, heh. I don't have any familiarity with Voltron, so I'm glad this story doesn't require it! I'll let you know if I manage to get lost anyway. One thing to watch...

Nice to see the next chapter up! Hope the writing's going well on the next. *afterwards One thing to look out for in dialogue are cases where a character refers to another by name or title. This is called a direct address, and you always put a comma before the person's name. Like here: There...

Aww, Desta. :( At least it seems like we were able to cheer her up a bit. Also, hmm, those potential SuburbanSprawl game devs dying in lightning-related incidents... Subtle! AXSIS is just kinda subtle like that. Classy. I like this game more already! Although it's probably pretty dangerous to...

Feeling a bit nostalgic and a bit wistful, so I thought I'd make a thread on the off-chance anyone here wanted to talk fansites with me. Are there any fansites (pokémon or otherwise) that you enjoy visiting, or did in the past? Have you ever made a site, or wanted to? I've run a fansite of my...