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Alright, let's take a look at both parts of Dendemille’s Brawlers, since it seems like a good idea to review these together. To start off, I absolutely loved the little story in the flashback. It was adorable, sad, and such a nice little worldbuilding touch. I love seeing legends and stories...

Fiiinally got around to doing this like I've been planning to for like... 2 months? Anyways... Username: Windskull Author Alias: Wind Story: Places We Call Home Time period: Through chapter 9

Review Replies! First off in general, thanks for pointing out any typos you come across. I'll fix them up next time I do a round of revisions. @NebulaDreams @canisaries @kintsugi @Umbramatic Chapter 11: It's Just a Question Every part of Nip’s body ached. He was no stranger to...

Reviewed Legendarian Chronicles again. About 300 words Base: 3 Weekly Theme: 4 Words: 2 total: 9 running total: 182

Alright, let’s talk about chapter 6! Looks like we’re starting something new here, so it’ll be fun to see how things work out. Oh no, will her journey end before it can actually begin? … Nah we got tons more chapters I think we’re good. Joking aside, good job portraying her anxiety. I even...

I’ve read a few more entries. So here are a few more thoughts. Starting with Toucanon, which is where I had most of my thoughts. Huh, I think you may have mentioned real-world animals in a previous entry. But I guess this one in particular really cements the setting as an alternate Earth. The...

1.7 here we go. The more little tidbits we see about Genesis’ religion, the more I get a feeling that “Genesis” is a very religious name and relates back to the belief system of Xerneas followers. On that note, I have a feeling we’ll get more information about that sooner or later...

Another review! This time it's another review for The Mainframe Saga, ~300 words. Base: 3 Weekly Theme: 4 Wordcount: 2 Total: 9 Running total: 154 Edit: Another Review! This one for Broken Things. >500 words Base: 3 Weekly Theme: 4 Wordcount: 3 Total: 10 Running total: 164 Another Edit...

Moving right along to chapter four. Here we go. Heh, pretty fancy outdoors area for a prison lab. Guess the staff has to have somewhere to go to enjoy things though. Out of the Chaotix, Espio is definitely the one I could see being good at something like hacking. Of course, “good” is...

New review for Seiren. Should be about 450 words Base: 3 Weekly Theme: 4 Words: 2 Total: 9 Running total: 145 Yessss back in second but can I hold that lead? Will I ever catch up with Namo's mad skillz?

Kids these days with their may mays. I’ll just be covering chapter 4 in today’s review. Hopefully, I’ll have time to read more later though. This is a bit of a nitpick, but I kind of feel like, since Red and Shirlee have been sending letters to each other for a little while, that he’d have...

Good news, everyone! With this chapter, Thousand Roads is ofically caught up! From now on, everything on here will be totally new. Speaking of new, this chapter starts what I would consider a new arc of the story. Enjoy! Chapter 10: A Fractured Sense of Normalcy Century. Decade. Year. Season...

Another review on Broken Things. This one was about 400 words Base: 3 Weekly Theme: 4 Words: 2 Total: 9 Running Total: 136

Ooh, another Pixie chapter. This should be fun! Once again, I can’t help but love all the names that Pixie has come up with for the humans around her. A special shoutout to Growlsleep, which really got a kick out of me. This sentence is worded a bit oddly. And as a result it kind of took me...

So Places We Call Home essentially came from the idea of being dissatisfied with life, and finding a place where you can be satisfied. This is perhaps most literal with Nip, who left his home because he couldn't consider it a home anymore. But on a more figurative level, most of the main cast is...

500+ word review for The Legendarian Chronicles Base: 3 Weekly Theme: 4 Words: 3 Total: 10 Running Total: 127

I’m only reviewing 2 chapters this time, since 5 has a nice cutoff point, but I also looked over the bonus scene afterwards so it ends up balancing out. Onwards! 4 I like what you do with TMs. Not only do you acknowledge the fact that TMs from earlier games break but newer ones don’t. I also...

@The Desert Cat @canisaries We're nearly caught up with off-site chapters now! But before we delve any deeper into the main story, I'm going to sidestep and post the first of what will hopefully be many bonus episodes. These aren't going to be required to understand the main story of...

Hey, Namo, thanks for dropping a review on this. I really appreciate it and I'm glad you found it fun. While I zeroed in on gender for this, I actually would like to go back sometime and write something longer that deals with more of Anti's general identity and self-confidence issues. It's...

Since I previously read and enjoyed Outside the Frame, I figured I should get to this eventually, and now seems like as good of a time as any! Wow, now that a pretty good prelude. It has just enough intrigue to hook the reader in right away and leaves a mystery to solve throughout the course of...