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Ooh, it's been a while since I read something in the present tense. That's such an intense line. I love it. I don’t really have anything to say about prose that I haven’t already said, so I’m just going to jump in and talk about the plot and characters. I really, really love the concept behind...

Posted a review for Tales of Arrival. If I counted right, it's about 650 words after excluding quotes. Base: 3 points Weekly Theme: 4 points Word Count: 3 points That's a total of 10 points for this review.

Prologue Huh, you know, I think this is the first pmd fic that I’ve read that makes use of the quiz at the beginning. I’ve come across a couple previously, but I haven’t had time to read them. I kind of feel like in a general PMD story, it tends to get in the way, playing too close to game...

@NebulaDreams And now, on to this week's chapter! Chapter 8: Race to the Finish Haru found it difficult to sleep that night, her dreams plagued by nightmares of Shimmer, Muse and herself dying in increasingly terrible ways. In one particularly nasty dream, she found herself ripped apart by an...

7: Scheming in the Evening “And so that’s the story we were given and what we plan to do about it. Crazy, right?” Toshi trembled slightly before stretching out in the straw bed, the action interrupted by a wince. “Wow, that’s… a lot’s happening, huh? You’re so lucky to get to go do something...

Name: Nip Gender: Male Appearence: off-colored sneasel with a nick in his ear and a slightly-tattered ear feather. (My icon is a more visual reference) Personality: Fairly serious with an occasional hint of sarcasm. Typically, he tries to remain calm, but he can be a bit of a grump and has a bad...

Now that November's over, I'm ready to get back to upadating here. Before we get into the story, replies to comments, of course. @Negrek @NebulaDreams Nip is a lot of things. Smart is not always one of them. Most of what else I had to say was already covered when I spoke with you over...

I haven't finished this world craw yet but the month is nearly up so I'm going to post what I have done and hopefully have time to finish it in the next couple days. 178 144 (sprint) 301 336 (sprint) 281 387 197 (sprint, caught alolan meowth) current total: 1824

I wrote 200 words in the first sprint, and 223 in the second. After that, my metapod evolved into butterfree. I continued with 412 words in the third sprint and 238 in the fourth, finishing with a total of 2880 words in this round. Current Team: Poplio, Buneary, Butterfree

Just finished up a review for the whole of Casting Off. Requesting a review for Places We Call Home.

I wrote 171 words in the first sprint, 172 in the second, and 204 in the third. I went left and wrote 362 words in the final sprint, finishing with a total of 2252 words. Current team: Poplio, Buneary, Metapod

Alright, so to preface this review, I’m reading this after having read Fledglings, so I do want to say that my previous knowledge could color some of my thoughts in the review. General Thoughts: Jumping right in, overall I really enjoyed reading through this. It started off slow, but it had a...

Not to be discouraged by that loss, I did 171 words in the first sprint, and managed 328 in the battle sprint. After that, I did my training and chose to evolve my Caterpie into Metapod. I ended up with 168 words in the last sprint, and finished the section with 2019 words. (Bringing my total up...

I managed 179 while riding atop Tauros' back. Then, after a short battle with Hau, I managed 208 words in the next sprint and caught myself a caterpie. After a tough battle with a totem where I wrote exactly 300 words, I headed back, I wrapped up by using a bit of deception against Gladion, and...

I got lucky, only having to fight a single yungoos. With my team of Buneary and Poplio, we weren't exactly the quickest searchers. In the 10-minute sprint that followed, I managed 256 words. And after a hard fight with Hala, I finished up part two with a total of 1559 words. (And an overall...

Finished the first challenge! I kept accidentally going over the word count because I write in googledocs and it doesn't have live word count, oops! Oh well, the more words, the better. Anyways, I ended up picking Poplio as my starter. During my five-minute sprint, I managed 152 words and chose...

I'm split on participating. I'd love to, but I seriously doubt I can dedicate the time to a full 50k words with the last few weeks of my semester coming up. I am at least planning to write a minimum of 20k words, but if I manage to surpass that I'll likely try for the full 50k. Either way, I...

As my fic is is PMD-based, I'll only be answering 3 of the questions. Does the four move limit still exist? Do moves themselves exist? Sort of. It's more of a soft limit than anything. A pokemon typically has four moves that they keep in practice, but they can still use any move they've...

@Adamhuarts Thanks for the review! I'm glad to hear Muse has her fans. She tends to be a character that people don't have strong feelings on. And thanks for pointing out that typo, I'll get it fixed later. Note: Edited 7/31/2020 Chapter 5: Into Sunglow Thicket “Ah, finally a nice, normal...

Alright, It’s about time I got around to this. Let’s just jump right in! Adding this retroactively to the beginning of my thoughts. At first, I thought maybe it was an office that he was sneaking into. Oh how wrong I was. Even though this is grammatically correct, the end of this sentence...