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Did a review of Fledglings (off site due to not caught up here). 3 chapters/922 words. I've reviewed before, so 4 points.

One review for Eternal Shadows And one review for Dream Eater

Tenative turn 3 actions -Triple Axel -Triple Axel -Max elixir + silver spike Powergamers can change this if needed.

One more! Eternal Shadows. 1 for length (320 words), 1 for theme

Hey bench I've been meaning to read the story for a while unfortunately I haven't had a lot of time so hopefully I'll get to the rest soon but this is just going to be a review of chapter one. To begin, I really like the way you've adapted the personality test into your story. It has this very...

Logging one review for dream eater. 1 point for length and 1 point for new fic. I may or may not be able to squeeze one more before the deadline, we'll see!!

Hey Zion. I remember reading this a while back and never reviewing it. Well, I reread it and I’m fixing that now. First off, I love the surreal feeling of this scene. I think you capture the feeling of dreams and nightmares quite well. There were some really, almost poetic visualizations in...

Turn 2: Psych up highest attack. Psych up highest evasion. Eat cautious seed and speedy seed

Rematch Turn 1 Psych-Up Brisa's speed. 2x Blast seeds on rayquaza

"Gone," blue reported, flicking his tail over to the hat and scarf. "Probably dead. What's not clear though is if he was murdered-" he gave the other Pokemon a hard look "-or if this was an unfortunate accident. Regardless, I suggest we start investigating immediately." Oh how he wished Yellow...

Blue crinkled his nose as he looked over the absolute farce of a mew. He hated it when gods behaved like irrational children. HIS new would NEVER. He ignored her and instead approached the oshawot, gently flicking him with his tail. "Hey, listen. It's going to be okay. We'll figure this out...

The End. (2 chapter review)

The End. (2 chapters, 580 words. +1 point for theme)

Been a while since I read any of your stuff. I remember liking what I read before of your Sonic fic, so let’s see how I feel about your pokemon works. This review will cover the first two chapters. Chapter 1 So one thing that I really liked about the opening of this chapter is that it’s not...

Three Chapter Review of PMD Stargazers be (one chapter is off site)

Wrote a review of the first three chapters of PMD: Stargazers (note that the third chapter is off-site, but I included it in spoiler brackets). Total review length is just shy of 800 words, so that should be 3 points +1 for theme adherence.

Three chapter review of FIghting Nature

3 chapter review for Fighting Nature, about 950 words. Meets the weekly theme, so 4 points.

Hey there Cynch! This is gonna be a review over the first three chapters, since that seems like a good break point. Let’s jump right into things! Chapter 1 I like the dynamic you’ve got set up with Sid and Raskin. They really do feel like friendly roommates. The entire opening passage, and...

The vaporeon stepped inside, casually looking the building over with a cool, neutral expression. His gaze landed on the TV, and the end of his tail twitched siltly. "What strange technology you have. Perhaps it would be worthwhile for me to look it over later. My society is always looking for...