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Hi! I was looking for oneshots to review for the blitz and thought this one looked worth checking out. You do a good job of conveying information in very few words. And I feel like each part has its own unique voice. I love the way you handle Zorua’s thought process. It feels a bit human, but...

Another! Title: Speckled SIlver Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/oneshot-speckled-silver.435/post-51801 Chapters: 1 Theme: yes

Hi Inke. I just checked this fic out on a whim. I don’t think I’d ever read any of your oneshots prior to this, so it was nice getting to check one out. And overall, I liked it. It introduces us to the partner character and fits in well with their canon personality. I like that you’ve found...

Title: White Swan, Black Swan Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/white-swan-black-swan.551/post-51798 Chapters: 1 Theme: no

Hi Sind. This is your catnip review! I’m only covering chapter 4 right now, but hope to pick up a couple more later this week. This chapter doesn’t have a lot of action - which makes sense, since it provides a breather after the slightly intense previous chapter. It gives us a cute little...

Title: A way to reunite Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/a-way-to-reunite.737/post-51770 chapters: 1 Theme: yes

Hi Bench! This is my blitz/catnip review! I do have some critiques for this story, but I did find the premise cute and heartwarming overall. This felt like a cute story about friends separated between worlds trying to find a way to be together again, without causing problems for their own...

Title: Pizza with a Slice of Pain Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pizza-with-a-slice-of-pain.744/post-51620 Chapters: 1 Theme: Y

It's been a while since I read one of your fics, Zion, but I'm glad I picked this one up. It oozes charm, and the sheer absurdity of the situation made me giggle. But at the same time, it has its emotional moments, too. Like when Eloise is talking about her family's pizzeria. While the...

I wanted to get a chapter out during the blitz so here we are! Don't expect this update speed to last. Thanks to Kint, Pen, and Pano for checking this out. I honestly kind of expected that I'd be throwing this into the void due to being one of those tiny fandoms. Anyways, Review Replies...

Title: In Ghostly Fashion Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/in-ghostly-fashion-one-shot.976/post-51557 Chapter: 1 Theme: Yes

Oh, this was a charming little slice of life story. The premise is simple and sweet, but it still has something to say. Its a story that benefits from being in the pokemon universe, and makes me stop and think about what it would be like living with pokemon. Sure, there are some similarities...

Title: Delivery Deferred Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/delivery-deferred.983/post-51515 Chapters: 1 Theme: Yes

This was actually the first thing of yours I read. I read the original version of this back around March of 202 to discuss it with a couple people in a PMD server, but I never got around to giving it an actual review. So I’m excited to see it touched up. It’s also just great to see some good...

Title: Champion at Last Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/champion-at-last-one-shot-ficlet.925/post-51482 Chapter:1 Theme: yes

This is the plot of One Punch Man, right? Hi Tetra. I picked this up to read during my break and thought it was cute. As it is something short, a few of my comments might come across as nitpicks, so please take any critique with a grain of salt. You do a great job of getting across the feeling...

Title: Dark-Clothed Small Human Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/dark-clothed-small-human.743/post-51472 Chapter: 1 Theme: Yes

Hi Phant. I just happened to see this while scrolling the recent list and realized I never read it. Now seems as good of time as any. And I'm glad I did, because it was an absolutely adorable story that made me feel good. I love the way you describe things through Null's perspective. There are...

Title: sample size Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/sample-size.659/post-51447 Chapters: 1 Theme: yes

Despite the fact that I knew this was going to be an April Fools fic going in, I still got tonal whiplash like. Two, maybe three times. The beginning of the fic plays things relatively straight. In the battle between truth and ideal, Hilda lost. But then it all leads up to that first punchline...