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Chapter 5: Humans and Monsters "Wait!" But the drawbridge did not wait. Link skidded to a stop, teetering dangerously and threatening to topple over into the moat below. Navi bumped against his chest, giving him the slightest of pushes back towards stable ground. He fell back with a thump...

Chapter 4: Cracks Using a warp rune was a new experience for Link. It felt different from a skull kid's teleportation magic — or the closest approximation he knew. His attempts at trying to use the skill always felt cold and empty, like trying to push through a solid wall of nothingness. Skull...

Level of Prize: Forum Companion Type of Prize: Mawile. If I get a chance to customize it I'll edit it in here. Preferred Method of Contact: Discord Level of Prize: LV 1 Type of Prize: Art (Planning to get a humanoid character, if that makes any difference) Preferred Method of Contact: Discord

I stumbled across this while looking for something short and sweet to review before the end of this year’s review blitz. While if I remember correctly you’ve pretty much completely shifted away from fanfic, I hope that some of the stuff I bring up here might be useful for you, none the less...

Hi Walrain! I’m trying to pick up a few last-minute points for review blitz and realized I haven’t reviewed anything by you yet this year. But reading your stuff is always a treat, so here I am! To start off, I think the way the story is framed, with us unable to hear Nida’s side of the...

Was someone looking for a quick, dive by review? Alright, I'll bite. One thing I do want to mention is that I noticed quite a few sentence fragments. I wasn't quite sure whether or not they were an intentional artistic choice so I'm not going to harp on them, but I wanted to at least mention...

I heard it is (or was, oops) someone's birthday. Hoped to get to this a little sooner but life got busy. But I'm still here! With how short and sweet these are. I think I'll try to cover them all. The Original One Okay. First off. I love the use of what appears to be a fully benevolent Arceus...

Hi Fobbie. Figured I should try to return the favor for your review, so here I am. I'll be covering at least a few chapters, but it may end up being more by the end. We’ll see. With that out of the way, let's jump right in! A Guarding Dragon I think that this sentence could have used a...

HI Sind! I'm here for your catnip review! So. To start off, I think you do a great job of implying a lot about the traumatic event without getting deep into the details. There may be storytelling instances where going into more detail would be warranted. But honestly, in this case, I think...

Yeah. If you remember your type advantages right (do they even matter in this game? This is still just a game, right?) then you're in big trouble here. Waking up these other pokemon seems like a good idea! (...hopefully)

Hi Blackjack! I'm here for your catnip review! Man. The first scene does a great job of showing off Nanu’s apathy. Is Team Skull illegally squatting? Yeah. Does he care? Kind of. Is he going to do anything about it? Not if he doesn't have to, no. But even so, there are hints that he cares about...

Yooo second person pov? I have a soft spot for it when written right, and I think it really works well here. I honestly got pretty hooked into this. I think it just happens to scratch a itch I have for stories about lab-created characters questioning their humanity and/or who they are. And...

Blitz review, lets gooooo! I’m glad I thought to look up the meaning of the word Peregrine, as I’d only previously heard it with regards to falcons, because if the themes of the story weren’t already clear enough, it really tied things together. I like the idea of Wes taking all the pokemon...

Hi there! Hitting this one up for review blitz. For "No, you can't go to work with me..." Man you really did a great job of capturing the vibe of a person and their pet they're particularly close to. And the vibe of a cat and how much it can feel like they're silently judging you if you don't...

Oh man, I've kind of wanted to do a drabble-dex idea (or something similar) myself. So I'm pretty excited to check this out! -The Bulbasaur drabble is cute! It does a great job of capturing the nervousness and inexperience of a new trainer just starting out. Given that it's the first pokemon in...

Oh no, not again! Your increased ALCOHOL LEVEL makes it difficult to get the thought out of your head. Who is Pourygon? What is Pourygon? Why is Pourygon? You waste several minutes zoned out thinking about this. It looks like everyone has left except for Zor. He runs the local daycare and...

It's weird, you don't remember going by Ingo. You're not sure where that name came from. Maybe you knew another sneasel with that name? That's right, you did insist people call you Bloodclaw at one time. But it was never your real name. But that DOES remind you of something important. That's...

You shimmy closer, balancing on two legs so as to not spill your drink. As you get closer you begin to make out words. (Sneasel): ...Bit off more than I could chew in a fight. (Sneasel): I apologize that you had to see me like this. (Hawlucha): But how did you end up in this fight? If there's...

>Hope you don't look delicious. >Take up a defensive position.

Content Warning: This update contains blood. Oh. This is concerning. You find Fuse standing in front of the regigigas statue, supporting a strange, injured sneasel. Sparkles is nowhere to be seen, but a small crowd is starting to gather. Besides the two that are at the center of...