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First of all, curse you for your lovely banners. It’s not fair that other people have multiple artistic talents. I’m going to have to file a complaint over this. Second, when I started writing this review, my plan was to discuss both the prologue and chapter one, as that’s what I usually like...

Question, if you read and review multiple chapters, aren't you supposed to pick whichever gives you less points between word count and chapters read? Or did I misunderstand that? Anyway, prologue and chapter one of Double Edged reviewed. 1162 words.

Hey, Luker. Excited to check out your stuff. It’s pretty late and I’m a little loopy so hopefully this is coherent, lol. I always find stories based on roleplays fascinating. They tend to have a bit of a different rhythm to them, even when they’re rewritten for more of a traditional novel...

good criticism is: Specific. Actionable. Contextual.

Reviewed the first and second prologue of Stargazer Chronicles. +1 theme 911 words

Reviewed the prologue and first chapter of Ties of Fate. +1 for theme 1026 words.

Eh, what up, Fuse! Excited to hang with your characters here, since I never really had the chance to in Blacklight. I’ll be covering both the prologue and the first chapter. <3 So it looks like the prologue is our fairly standard ‘open with a quiz’ beginning. It does have a slight twist in that...

I reviewed the prologue and chapter 1 of Do Psychic-Type Pokemon Dream of Electric Sleep? Technically it fulfills the theme of the week, although I don't remember if that only counts once or not. word count: 1257

I can’t believe I’ve never reviewed your story before. Hmmst’ve. Let’s fix that. Is the voice talking to Espurr at the beginning Mew? Or maybe the VoL? I’m sure we’ll find out eventually, but that’s curious and curiouser. There’s something almost wistful about the way they speak to her. Since...

I appreciate the double meaning behind the title. Fighting nature as in fighting your own innate tendencies and fighting nature as in literally engaging in honorable combat with the elements. It tickles my punnier sensibilities. Although Fight Club is an obvious point of comparison, I was...

Reviewed chapter 1 of Death is Lonely. 1539 words. Reviewed chapter 1 of Fighting Nature. 1067 words.

I’m trying a slightly new style for Catnip. IDK if I’ll stick to it but you get to be my guinea pig. >:] Strong opening line. Good hook. I might’ve swapped out ‘touch’ for ‘brush’ since it’s alliterative with ‘branch’ and starts with a softer consonant than a hard ‘T’; sounds cleaner when...

The Writing University Podcast and the Odyssey fantasy/science fiction workshop podcasts are both super useful as well, with interviews from a number of talented writers. The Odyssey Podcast however is fairly short sessions for the most part that they usually cut off around the 15 minute mark...

I totally forgot I wrote this. Welp. Better late than never. Written for the PMD Writers Union May writing prompt. General: Write a story from the perspective of the villain. Specific: The Hero and Partner, or the Team, are forced to camp out when a mission keeps them out later than expected...

Hey, Adam! I'll be reviewing the first chapter for catnip circle. The opening is very cute, and the ending rather foreboding. I already have some idea of what'll happen since I looked over later chapters, but still, I can't believe you'd even think about being so mean to two sweet little...

I can't remember the last time I read a chapter this close to flawless. The way you set up conflicts, establish character dynamics, introduce exposition, and seamlessly blend these concepts together and build them toward an inevitable conclusion is incredibly satisfying. Lance--Wataru in this...

That synopsis is the most anime thing I've read in quite some time. Lmao It’s been a while since I’ve picked up a story basically from the beginning. While I’m aware more chapters have been uploaded to ffnet, I’ll just follow the version updated here. Makes me feel all special and stuff. So...

I rate this prologue 0/10 for the pun alone. Or maybe 10/10. I haven’t decided yet. Jokes aside, I’m genuinely excited about this story. I’ve always been a touch reticent when it comes to using pokemon as parallels for real-world events, but real-world events have reached such a point that...

@OldschoolJohto Oh yeah, love the soundtrack.

I'm late as usual. I have no excuse. Please forgive me. :Wigglytired: "Some Letters for Ove Linström" -loved this one a lot. the way she described her father's addiction and how it ruined his life was on point and gut-wrenching. everything is just dripping with melancholy and regret, and a...