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The last thing Odette remembered was leaving the Lumiose Center for Performing Arts and walking toward her motorcycle. She'd set her bag down, then suddenly...flash. Everything went black. She didn't have any time to react...but how was she supposed to react? What had even happened? The sound...

Chapter 2: The Audacity... Special thanks to Pen and Flyg0n for beta reading this for me! Odette had never wanted to trade her motorcycle in for a flying-type pokemon. Noel, when he wasn’t going on and on about how his braviary partner Elton didn’t listen to him, always claimed flying was a...

Alright alright alright! Got around to chapter 2, and I can say with full certainty I know what Colress' plan was now! I will say, I'm a huge "show, don't tell" fiend, so I'm not normally a huge fan of prose that doesn't have a lot or even any dialogue at all. However, I really really really...

782 Words for Chapter 1 of Home is Where the Hoenn is. +1 for Chapter, +1 for theme. I think that has me at 9 points? Edit: Also did a review for Chapter 2 of Only the Truth. 436 words, 1 chapter, so 1 point. That should bring me to 10, I think?

Hey hey! I'm finally getting around to reading this and returning the favor for your kind review! I really love how this story is starting. My hopeless romantic butt is always reading romantic relationship fics, so I don't normally get around to reading trainer/pokemon bond fics. That being...

Name: Sinderella/Sind/Sin Interests: OC-Centric, OC x Canon, fakemon, neat lore and world-building, angst/comfort, fluff, pokecentric, realism, journeys, crack/humor...I'll consider reading most things, if I'm honest! Restrictions: None. I will literally intake anything that's legal. However...

Hey canisaries. Thanks for your honest review of the prologue. I'm really sorry you didn't enjoy it, but I appreciate you taking time to review anyway. I wanted to get back to you on some of your points, though, as I had a couple of points of my own. I will be putting Spoilers on some of them...

Reviewed Chapters 1 and 2 of Of Sand and Shadows! 700+ words, 2 chapters, and theme...so +3!

Hey HelloYellow17! After seeing all the banter about OSAS on Discord, I finally was able to get to starting it...and now I understand why everyone calls it "Of Sand and Bacon" :ROFLMAO: I read through Chapters 1 and 2, and got halfway through 3 before my eyes started to hurt from staring at my...

Hey there Flaze! I really appreciate your review, and some of the things you pointed out to me that I didn't think of before. So right now, that was my intention. My goal was for you to be more scared of Venira and Gulattive than you are of Team Enigma, because my aim is for the threat of Team...

Hi Umbramatic! I appreciate you giving mine a read, even if you're not that much into darkfics. That makes your compliments all the more sweeter! :veelove: I'm excited to read this, and I can't wait for you to see how truly awful he is 😂 Thank you so much! I went back and forth for two days on...

Hi Flyg0n! Thank you so much for your review and the line-by-lines! I'm glad I was able to get you to read something you wouldn't normally, and hope you end up enjoying what is to come! Sorry I'm responding so late, but I wanted to get back to you on some of your thoughts! I agree with the...

Hey Nubushi! Thanks for your review, and welcome to you too! (sorry, I'm getting around to these replies a little late!) I super appreciate your kind thoughts and critiques, and I hope I'm able to keep you reading! :) So...I will admit, I didn't know Pokemon Genesis was a thing, and I didn't...

Left a review for chapter one of Only the Truth! 1073 words, +1 for theme, +1 for one chapter!

Hi Nubushi! Here for Blitz, and wanted to return the favor for your review on my story! Thanks again! So far I've only read Chapter 1 because I'm a sucker for Hurt/Comfort stories, and I think you really hit it out of the park. I will hopefully be able to get to the second chapter for the last...

Whew, I'm joining in! Luminary Chapter 1 Review, 2,252 words,+1 for theme I think? Then...+1 for one chapter reviewed? I think I did that right. I hope I did that right

Hey there! I'm here from the Review Blitz, and saw this story as a recommended one for the theme this week. I was really interested in the summary, so I took a look at chapter 1! First of all, I loved the opening lines. I loved how, in a short little drabble-esque prologue, you kind of gave a...

Hey Pen! Thanks for your review! I made some much needed edits on some things based on your pointers and I already feel much happier with it! (I'm so traumatized I was interchanging "seize" with "cease" like I can't believe the audacity of my brain) :ROFLMAO: So just to answer some of the...

Name: Odette Cinq-Mars Species: Human, turned into a Indeedee for the sake of this game Appearance: Despite the fact she is a female, she resembles the male Indeedee form more than the female facial wise. Instead of the smiling lips and wider eyes, she carries the frown and narrower eyes...

Chapter 1: A Lot On Her Mind Odette Cinq-Mars’ eyes were locked on her news app. She leaned against the backstage wall, tapping her clipboard lightly against it, keeping with the orchestra's tempo. She was humming along to the actors' singing while her eyes roved hungrily over the words on her...