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Level of Prize (Forum Companion, Level 1, Level 2, or Level 3): Forum Companion! Type of Prize (Art, Review, or Misc): Charcadet (Shiny if possible?) Preferred Method of Contact: Discord DM's (May I request that my Orbeetle also be switched to a shiny?) Level of Prize (Forum Companion, Level 1...

I just wanted to say how dare you make me tear up again, I reread this on a random whim:screm:. eviscerates me everytime

I did briefly think it odd that Phoebe is called she here instead of using her name, but also your characterization and dialogue writing is so freakin good I immediately thought it was her, so NBD Awww I like this idea that it started in Sinnoh (or took off) due to the winter weather I like...

First of, WOW I have to say, I adore this concept. Legends Arceus concept but in modern day Alola with Ultra Storms in place of distortions and fallers everywhere and crazy Alpha's with adash of post apoc vibes?? Amazing. It's honestly peak and I can even see why it would mesh well with the...

An absolutely fantastic fic that I think superbly achieves its goal. There's great characters, great pacing and most imporantly, great whump! My favorite kind, where we beat some blorbo up and see what lovely gems come out. Its a great study of Kieran and what makes him tick and a fitting...

As all fics should :okgon: I want to try and hit the last chapters if I can but I wanted to get this review out as well. Fantastic work and a peak character whump study :okgon:

gud fic pls update.

Well I said I'd come back to this later but I am a liar and wanted to read the rest immediately, one thing turned into another and I went ahead and finished the whole fic. I wish I'd stopped to do line commentary on some bits I really liked, but oh well! There is a lot to unpack and talk about...

Part One: I feel like the 'had' in the last sentence is just begging to be italicized but maybe thats me and my love of italics hah Ohhh interesting, looks like she's got some kind of complex about inconveniencing others/making a mess. This is a fun and suitable turn of phrase, i think it...

oh my gosh THANK YOU for saying this lol I kept thinking about this CONSTANTLY during the playthrough. Cackling madly at this mental image. Also so true though like surely it can't be good to have a bunch of spiders and snakes trying to bite me and cripes, what if some rat or Sableye digs up...

For anyone curious all of our menu options remain available and qualify for week 4 except Legendary Adventures

Weekly fic rec: A roaring rec for @GingerTheBarnOwl 's excellent crossover fic Adventures of a Raptor Trainer! All of us have, at some time or another, sat down and pondered one of life's greatest questions. What would happen if a Velociraptor from Jurassic World (1) ended up falling through...

I'm baaaacckkk!! I reviewed a few times in the past but now I'm gonna get to do it again! With all new fresh thoughts. Love me a good prologue, and this keeps it nice and succicnt. Very isekai/PLA energy, also reminds me of PMD in a good way. Get yoinked Echo! Hello Arceus! Looking back I...

I decided to hit up this fic after seeing some fic recs for it and then it coming up on discord as well. I've been meaning to, I think I just had some trouble mustering the brain energy, but boy am I glad I finally did. No commentary this time, I'll just share my thoughts as I read this and some...

I have GOT to rec @Phoenixsong 's Storms Wake as a peak slice of under <1k one-shot for the weekly Rec 890 words of pure, punchy, evocative prose that focuses on a glimpse of Raikou's role in the world and their situation. Despite this story's short length, it does a great job of telling a...

Ohhh this opening bit of prose is so good. very evocative and sensory, paints a striking picture. his is so CRUNCHY. It really rolls through the tongue in a waythats fun to read. It's almost poetic, without the rhyme aspect. There's a fantastic sense of motion and momentum to the prose, like...

Okay personally, splitting the chapter was great Imo. It made it really nice to read just this one chapter since I had to tend to other stuff. Now I know exactly where to come back to, and its a solid stopping point! Ohohoh this was really fun. Its delightful to see all the little changes...

This made me go check how long I've been writing for and if we count since I started properly posting writing, then I've been at this since.... 2013. Thats not counting that I did write before then, 2013 is simply when I started doing so more prolifically and storing it on my G Drive. I feel...

Heck yeah we love to see this My number one tip is that even on my lowest days, I would aspire to "the stupidest sentence". Basically set out on purpose, intentionally, to write one bad sentence/paragraph etc. If I felt like garbage I'd write: Thats my sentence or my work for the day. I...