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  1. unrepentantAuthor

    Marowak Dojo ~ Hidden Quarters

    Having walked back up from the beach chatting to Curio, Brisa felt the urge to secure some private resting place for herself before it was too late. The urge to find somewhere to escape to if she got caught in another group conversation was making her fur crawl. "Mind waitin' for me while I...
  2. unrepentantAuthor

    Grass Continent ~ Treasure Town Beach

    Brisa studied the symbol in the sand. "I'll remember it," she said, solemnly. From the sounds of it, Necrozma's experience with World Ender, if that was the threat at hand, had been cataclysmic. With no strategic advice forthcoming and a potential rockslide of grief present, she felt entirely...
  3. unrepentantAuthor

    Grass Continent ~ Treasure Town Beach

    "I'll do my best," said Brisa, acutely aware that she still didn't have mastery over her electricity in this body. The novelty of being so small again had worn off in a bout a minute flat, and she was impatient to regain her prior capabilities. "What's your take on our situation, anyway?" she...
  4. unrepentantAuthor

    Grass Continent ~ Treasure Town Beach

    Brisa's face contorted with a mix of pity, awkwardness, and a small measure of disdain. "Be seein' ya, Cynthian," she said. She made a note to keep an eye out for that one. He might need a speech like that if he were ever badly hurt. Then to the prismatic entity, "Well met, Necrozma. Can we...
  5. unrepentantAuthor

    Grass Continent ~ Treasure Town Beach

    "Nobody's hittin' anyone. That's what the dojo is for." Brisa surprised herself by interjecting like that. She supposed she was just now learning how she behaved when in groups. "Is everyone ready to fight 'Sushi' then?" she asked, eager to change topic. "I'm afraid I don't have much command...
  6. unrepentantAuthor

    Official Actions

    Logging review trifecta for all five tiers for the first wave. I think, lmao. https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-legendarian-chronicles.48/post-5772 https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/in-search-of-haven-contest-oneshot.353/#post-5756...
  7. unrepentantAuthor

    Pokémon The Legendarian Chronicles

    Hi Chibi! I actually read chapters 5 and 5.5 a few weeks ago, but I got sidetracked before I could read on or review. Gonna drop my review now before the memory of them stops being fresh. Looking forward to reading more!
  8. unrepentantAuthor

    Grass Continent ~ Treasure Town Beach

    Brisa allowed Curio to pipe up with her own personal introduction. "I'm Shinx Brisa," she said afterwards, "from... from Frontier Town in my home world. This sort of thing is a first for me, but it seems real enough, and where I come from, heroes travellin' between worlds and havin' new bodies...
  9. unrepentantAuthor

    Grass Continent ~ Treasure Town Beach

    Curio's vocabulary was a little unfamiliar, but Brisa got the gist. It sounded... different. She thought of her daily routines. Days and days passing without note. Then finding Gil, making that journey, finding herself here. "You wouldn't care for my old life, I expect. In fact, I used to see...
  10. unrepentantAuthor

    Grass Continent ~ Treasure Town Beach
    Threadmarks: R1 – Day 1 Late Noon ~ Brisa and Curio

    Curio let Brisa catch her breath as they walked. By the time Brisa was physically comfortable enough to speak, she'd become emotionally uncomfortable with it again. So much for burning off anxious energy in the dojo. Maybe she should talk about the fight? No, she'd sound conceited for having...
  11. unrepentantAuthor

    Pokémon In Search of Haven (Contest Oneshot)

    Hey Cani! This was a fantastic read, and I'm so pleased to have finally got around to it. As promised, I was highly invested in the main character duo, Annie and Patch. Patch's characterisation is spot-on throughout, with her anxieties being specific, justified, and shown. The way Annie does...
  12. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    Brisa allowed herself a minute to catch her breath before replying. "Thank you," she panted. "And yeah, that sounds good. I'll be restless until I figure out this situation." And it's good to have a friend to do that with, she didn't say. She followed Curio out and looked over in the direction...
  13. unrepentantAuthor

    Pokémon A Mew Me: Kuki's Tale [DISCONTINUED]

    Hi there, Adam! I've just finished reading the second chapter of this fic, and I have some loosely assembled thoughts. You asked me to comment on narrative structure, prose, dialogue and stuff like that. I can't say I have strong instincts for narrative structure, but I have two particular...
  14. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    Brisa wriggled and crawled out from underneath the zangoose, exhausted and near her limit. One good shock was all she'd had in her. Fortunately it seemed that receiving it was all Zane could handle, too. Having extracted herself from his bulk and gingerly checked herself over for genuine...
  15. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    At least the plan had worked, after a fashion. Even if it had resulted in pain and indignity. Well, there was certainly no point in holding back now. Brisa yowled as she unloaded the full force of the electric attack she'd been holding back since midway through the bout with Curio. From the...
  16. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    Brisa ducked under the clumsy blow, bunched up, turned on the spot, and tackled Zane's leg, hoping to fell him. He'd have weak spots aplenty if he toppled. Her claws sparked but she held back from channelling any energy. Pure kinetic collision should be enough!
  17. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    What was that stance he was using? Some strange fighting type technique she hadn't seen? She was pretty sure zangoose were normal type... She would have to be very careful or very bold in the face of uncertainty, particularly as she'd already tired herself out. She sized Zane up. He was about...
  18. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    Brisa took a minute to realise she needed to get off from Curio, on whose torso she still had her paws firmly planted. She dropped off her, and sat back heavily with a huff. "You made me work for that," she managed to say. "I feel better. Appreciate it." She looked over to the zangoose, whose...
  19. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    A good thing about being a quadruped was the ability to leap. It was good for climbing, pouncing, and it served as an excellent way to dodge. Brisa sprang away from Curio's punches, allowing her use of fighting energy to wear her out. Simply evading without using any moves didn't seem to be...
  20. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    Brisa growled in her chest. She could lose this, easily, but... what if the same de-powering affecting her affected Curio as well? That could give her a chance. Not that the stakes were high or anything, just that she hated to think- she didn't want- ...It would be good to make a good impression...
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