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Treasure Town ~ Main Square
Brisa's lips drew back in a growing snarl. "Well I hope you've been preparin' for the fight, then, like we have. Or have you just been puttin' down team members and lappin' up rice?"- Word Count: 35
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #356
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Treasure Town ~ Main Square
Brisa's attention switched from the absent Curio to that last remark. How... cruel. This coming from the litten she saw the previous day cowering at one end of the Dojo covered in rice. "What's your heroic record like?" she snapped. "Save any innocents lately?"- Word Count: 45
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #347
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Treasure Town ~ Main Square
She snapped upright from her sleeping repose, immediately frantic. The vibrations-- Landslide in the ravine! No, this was Cibus, earthquake-- the fish, it was the fuckin' fish-- she looked around wildly for Curio-- where was she? She wasn't in her bunk. Right. She left the hidden quarters and...- Word Count: 150
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #344
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Official Actions
Three reviewed chapters! https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/seiren.115/post-6511 https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-legendarian-chronicles.48/post-6513- Word Count: 27
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #78
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Pokémon The Legendarian Chronicles
Aight, here's a double billing for chapters nine and ten! Alright, next chapter(s) concern a real mission and a legendary pokémon! I'm almost as excited as these rebels are! See you then!- Word Count: 34
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #129
- Forum: Fanfiction
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Pokémon Seiren
There were two great big punchy successes of narrative in this chapter. I'll get to the second. Let's start with the phone scene. I spend half my life these days on my phone or computer, but reading Red's sustained anxiety and suffering as he tries to struggle through accepting his gift of a...- Word Count: 410
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #56
- Forum: Fanfiction
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Sharpedo Bluff
A wink, huh? A wink was good. A 'yes' to sharing the hidden quarters was good, too. Brisa tried winking back. It came out like a sort of lopsided blink. Oh well. Time to go. <><><><><><><><>- Word Count: 36
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- Post #61
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Sharpedo Bluff
Brisa thought for a moment, tracing mnemonic doodles in the dirt with her tail. "At a speed that high, the images would appear to be continuous," she mused. "I suppose your world's technology would allow you to display 'em in an appropriate way at the required speed... you'd appear to be...- Word Count: 450
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #59
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Sharpedo Bluff
Brisa's spark of jealously was immediately extinguished by a gust of curiosity. "I don't really know any shinx besides Ma. Am I anything much like this fella? What kinda friendship do the two of you have?" She sat up on her haunches and turned to listen attentively, ears perking.- Word Count: 50
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #57
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Sharpedo Bluff
"Sounds like your world is pretty different from mine," Brisa observed as Curio explained about her own mother and her wildness. "Where I come from 'feral' is just a dirty word the townies use for folks who live the traditional way out in the roughlands. They're just like you and me, just not so...- Word Count: 280
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #55
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Sharpedo Bluff
"Yeah, only child." Brisa winced. It wasn't like she could just say 'but Pa could've got around, for all I know.' "Never thought about it too much, I guess." Well, that was a lie. Brisa approximated a lopsided shrug. "Well, 'sides being the same species, Mum and I don't have all that much in...- Word Count: 420
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #53
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Sharpedo Bluff
"Oh my goodness," said Brisa, stifling a giggle. "You're a lot of fun." Oh, she meant that. Huh. "Uh, anyway, thanks. I really do feel better. And it's good to talk to someone about this for once, I don't think I've had a proper conversation about Pa since not long after he vanished. That was...- Word Count: 350
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #51
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Blacklight ~ Art & Doodles
Happy birthday, @Tanuki! Scene here.- Word Count: 5
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #12
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Sharpedo Bluff
It... didn't make much difference to how he treated her. But it made a difference to how people might treat her now. Or how she treated herself. "Spit? Uh, sure." She let Curio demonstrate the technique, and then copied as best she could. It didn't come naturally to her, but there was...- Word Count: 130
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #49
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Sharpedo Bluff
Brisa listened and nodded as Curio recounted some of her own experience. She didn't know what to say, but this was good, right? Curio trusted her enough to share something like this, and sympathised. It sounded like her experience had been worse, but... there wasn't much point in judging that...- Word Count: 220
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #47
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Sharpedo Bluff
Brisa tried not to stare too hard when Curio drew attention to her eyes — yes, they were green! and... nice! — and nodded in concession at the point about better and worse. It was fair enough. She sighed. It had only been a few minutes since she'd last explained this, but it felt like days...- Word Count: 170
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- Post #45
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Sharpedo Bluff
Brisa tried to relax a little, and hold everything Curio said in her mind to respond to. It wasn't as hard as she expected — the riolu's earnest interest was immensely reassuring. "I'm afraid a lot of what everyone here says is gibberish to me," she confessed sheepishly. "I do my best. Dave...- Word Count: 340
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- Post #43
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Sharpedo Bluff
Not like they gave me a choice. What? Was it not a prosthetic? Brisa's head fizzed. "Oh, it's not so different from here. Just pokémon. Well, sometimes we have humans in pokémon form, like Dave and I think some of the others here..." Fuck, that was the whole reason she'd wanted to head...- Word Count: 180
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #41
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Sharpedo Bluff
Brisa sat with Curio, still agitated and tail thrashing from her awkward departure of the dojo. "Home, huh? So, uh... I hadn't got round to asking," began Brisa, haltingly aware that she'd now embarrassed herself in front of Curio several times today, "but are you from a world like mine? Like...- Word Count: 67
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #39
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign
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Marowak Dojo ~ Hidden Quarters
"Yeah. That sounds good. Quiet would be good." Brisa followed Curio out, tail thrashing against the ground. On the way, she heard some telepathic communique about that zangoose causing trouble, and shut it out. Too many people, too many concerns. It would have to wait. <><><><><><><><><><><>- Word Count: 47
- unrepentantAuthor
- Post #40
- Forum: Blacklight Campaign