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Jess had prepared himself to snap some photos, when -- Rayquaza shot across the sky. Jess froze, beak hanging open - until he realized he had to take a picture. But as quickly as it had come, the green dragon had disappeared. "Fuck!" Jess shouted, nearly throwing his phone on the ground before...

"Sheesh, alright," muttered Jess. "How about some pics, though? Anything's good."

"Watch out, comin' through!" A pidgeot with a pouch strapped onto his body dove down from above, landing right beside the mixed group of mon and humans as the portal behind him closed. With nimble toes, he dug his smartphone out from his pouch, checked his reflection off the dark screen and...

been itching to participate in something lately so may as well Name: Jess Age: I don't know how bird years work but young adult? Gender: Male Species: Pidgeot Misc: Comes from the setting of Seiren, so a Kanto where pokémon can learn to speak and become equal citizens. Former ace battler, now...

Hey! Here for Catnip, read the first chapter. Here are my thoughts. This beginning scene was pretty confusing to me. I understand that it's probably partway intentional with how otherworldly the events happening are, but a lot of it for me was due to stuff being hard to parse, like here and...

Oh! In that case, you might actually enjoy Seiren, a story that comes before Hunter, Haunted. It's practically goreless (hence its lower rating), much lighter in tone and Red's phobia of technology (due to PCs being basically death machines on his original journey) is a major plot element. Helix...

Here's your Smeargle Swap! Sorry for being late. Here's Elliana carrying an injured Crest away from his crash site!

The opening line is something that has been kind of a thorn in my side for a longer time. The thing is that it is supposed to be "breath", the noun, since it's meant to be observation/narration rather than an instruction he'd be telling himself, which using "breathe" makes it seem like - but a...

Hey there! Here for Catnip. Very sorry for being so late, it's been busy over here. Anyway, I've read Chapter 1 and here are my thoughts. Commentary So, reading this chapter, I felt like the prose got redundant in a few places, this being one example. The boy is described as being in...

September 20th Game! Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Thursday, 23rd 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens: once...

Hey! Here for Catnip, picking up where I left off, the third chapter. out of context this becomes very frightening i got bad news for you kid it was only at this point canis realized this was, in fact, a journeyfic >starts conversation unprompted >unloads huge rant >leaves before the...

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Chapter Two italian swearing On the one hand this is thoughtful, but on the other I'd expect a lot of morphs named ShadowBlood DarkFury walking around With how much description this scene had of Salem's sensations, I was expecting a mention of the floor being cold but it didn't come...

Not all pokémon speak the same! Canine language is indeed limited to canines. It's also not just any canines, but sapient ones - only sapients can use complex verbal language like ours. Completely wild houndoom and other canine pokémon communicate like our wolves. I think my intention with the...

Hey! Here for Catnip. As you requested, I've read the revised first chapter. I skimmed the prologue for a recap as well, but I didn't pick up much that had changed so I have no comments to give there. As the second half of this chapter also seemed to match the content of the corresponding scene...

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It was basically different paths the conversation and Red's freaking out about the spider would have taken. So both in a way, I suppose. Well, I would argue that she was trying to de-escalate the situation once Red apologized and seemed to come more to his senses, which made the situation seem...

Hey there! I'm here for Catnip. I have to say, though, that this review might not hit 250 words - the story is very short, and I'm very unfamiliar with the source material. I hope it's alright. Missing another row change between these paragraphs. The characters seem to talk mostly in a...

I'm really glad to hear that went well! I spent so long going back and forth with that. Probably about half the outtakes I had for this chapter were the spider parts done slightly differently. This is true and it annoys me, but it is indeed because of plot reasons. I also think of Jordan as...

EDIT: I've been thinking about some things and I've decided I want to put up a disclaimer regarding the psychiatrist scene and about Red's "diagnosis" in general. Catch it under the spoiler. --- IT'S BEEN FOUR MONTHS AHAHA how did that happen? well, i guess summer job and a really difficult...