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Second chapter! It really had been a while since I read the first, so thanks again for the cliff notes, much appreciated. While I did also skim it again for a refresher, I didn't go line by line, so apologies if I complain about something here that was settled in the previous chapter. I looked...

two months this time, huh. well, i shift part of the blame on the oneshot contest. and most of it on my mental health that seems to have had the stability of a house of cards lately. anyway! first chapter of act 2. we have reached the fun zone. and another milestone: in this chapter we meet...

March 10 Game! Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Friday, March 12th 23:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens: once...

As fate keeps pushing us together, I have read the first chapter for Catnip and these are my thoughts. We definitely move away from the tone of the prologue in this chapter, getting something much slower and grass-roots than evil lairs and monster kills. I'm a fan of that as it lets us take in...

February 19 Game! Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Sunday, February 21st, 23:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens...

*grabs your mask and pulls it off, revealing dr sigmund freud* aHA it was YOU all along Oh you know :) Actually, it isn't (unless I reread it wrong 10 times as I just made sure): the greater omentum is a curtain-like anatomical structure that hangs in front of the intestines, covering them...

Hello there! I've read Shelly Episode 1, which I think you meant for me to look at (you didn't give me a number). As this is not the first chapter in the thread, I will probably be missing some context that chronological readers would have, but I'll trust your confidence in submitting this and...

Something I totally planned because I am a genius yes. Well, the reason I stay away from italics for thoughts in this story for the most part is that the line is so blurred. Drawing it in one place would make me have to draw it everywhere else and I'd end up debating myself forever on whether...

I went back and that does sort of happen in Whelp, though Red's since managed to get over the thought of killing another intelligent being and doesn't need to mask it for himself anymore. *pops champagne because hunter haunted has now been called kafkaesque* super meat boy: the untold story...

There it is, the fic that gave me the idea to start learning Spanish! And two years later... I've quit it in favor of Russian. How embarrassing. Anyway - it's definitely as you said, this first chapter is certainly not the same as the one I read all that time ago. I didn't get far enough with...

I wanna sign up as a judge this time! I need to make myself better at reading, and I'm likely to read many of the entries anyway.

Reviewed the first chapter of Legendary Adventures. I'd like a review on my favorite child, my beloved son, Hunter, Haunted. However, I understand that it is quite graphic and contains things some people would like to steer clear of, so I'm also putting up Seiren as an option. I'd really prefer...

Hey there, read Chapter 1 for the Review Tag. Here are my thoughts. So, first off, I have to be open about my bias. I've never been interested in journey fics, so I'm clearly not in the main demo for this fic, but I'll try to look past it and be as fair as I can with my review anyway. The...

it's only been one month this time! we're slowly getting better. anyway, here we go with the last chapter of the first roughly defined act. very excited, not just because of the content of this chapter, but because we'll be getting to the real good stuff after this... the revision ended up...

Responding to your reply - sorry that it took so long. I'm glad to hear I could be helpful! And in general, I'm happy that you took the review well. In hindsight, I feel like I was harsher than necessary and jumped to some pessimistic conclusions when I should've given more benefit of the...

Heyyyyyy I'm here for chapter 1 and it's not late at allll I swear. This entire scene is an oof and then finding out it's happened multiple times just elevates that into a mega oof. me when im in the zone drawing and my dad tells me its time for bed >:( Establishing the feathers as...

Thank you all from reading and reviewing! Line edit suggestions have been taken into consideration, but again, it will take some time to get to them. I rejected this idea primarily on the principle that having to give up your homeland because of unjust persecution, but there are also those...

Reviewed the prologue of Black Swan, White Swan with all too many words. +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 25

Decided to try this out and read the prologue. Here are my thoughts. I will have to be direct from the beginning and say I did not really enjoy this. I will, however, try my best to be informative about why rather than discouraging. The beginning half of this prologue feels much like something...