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Looking for new fics to review for the Blitz, I decided to check out this one. I read the first chapter, and here are my thoughts. Quote Comments When using "as" to link together simultaneous events, do not use a comma. Using a comma changes the meaning to instead express that the former event...

alright, here we go! Fic Title: Weaversong Link to Fic: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/weaversong.937/post-50813 Number of Chapters: 1 Weekly Theme: Yes

Hey! Been meaning to check this out, and Blitz was the perfect excuse. Quote Comments I read "spread out and huddling together" as a contradictory statement for a few times before I realize you may have meant that the branches in the same tree were spread out while huddling together with the...

I'll do some self promo too if that's fine! (No reading lists from me, I'm afraid, since promises make everything a lot more stressful for me.) Here's a rundown of my works.

Did this for Red now but will probably add more characters later! (Also leaving out the footstep sounds thing because I have no clue how those are supposed to be different for different people.)

Hey! Here is my Catnip review. I originally went for the prologue, but about halfway through I actually realized I had indeed read and reviewed it before, so I just skimmed the rest to complete the recap and then read the first chapter. I don't think I mentioned in my previous review whether...

December 14th Game - Pre-Blitz Warmup! Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Friday, 17th 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review...

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it took four months to revise a chapter again. wahoooooo. well, let's get to the point. this is the last chapter of act 2! and boy do things happen. read on to find out what. rated mature for extreme psychological distress, fear of death, body horror, blood and generally disturbing imagery...

posting mine under the spoiler

The bird had left, but his words had been true - Red really had no energy to stand. At least he could talk. That was the only thing he could do now. "Odette!" he spat. "This isn't over! Sooner or later, I will taste your blood! There will be more games, and even if you evade me there, ascension...

Victory seemed certain -- until Odette shouted something which made her blood glow once again. Before Red could ponder its meaning, the dragon crashed onto his back, throwing both onto a nearby wall. Red turned his head with a hiss, but flinched as he saw the dragon had grown again. What is...

Hey there, here's your Catnip! Sorry that it's late, I got more busy than expected. This was a fun read. I believe all the jokes land, the structure is solid and the pacing is suitable all throughout. I actually don't really know what to say about the work as a whole beyond that - I feel like...

Red flattened his spines along his back to avoid them breaking as he rolled - another built-in instinct of the body, it seemed. Once stopped, the dragon pulled away her head and tried to stab the side of his neck, but he turned away to take the hit with the back of his hood instead. The wingtip...

Red saw the many reactions to his new form - nearly all of them fear, disgust or both. Fear was correct, but disgust showed once again how ignorant, how narrowminded the pitiful mareep were. By all accounts, this body was superior - larger, more limbs, comfortable on land and water, protective...

Red stopped, wide-eyed. He felt feelings that were very familiar and then feelings that were extremely unfamiliar. It only made him want to change back even quicker. So, while Clovis surely would have liked some more time to adjust to the effects of his potion, Red didn't have enough to spare...

Red's tail flicked from side to side as he watched the braided women return to his silver-haired target, who looked like he'd forgotten all about Miss Scarlet by now. Damn. It looked like that was a waste of time... he'd have to find another way to get back at them. If there could be one before...

You couldn't even begin to imagine how experienced I am at mutilating people, Red thought, somewhat saddened by the fact that he would not be able to tell him all about it. His tail bristled again. "Well, you see, that's because, uh..." "Oh, would you look at that, it's another drink for me,"...

A humorous thought flashed in his head, but quickly he realized it may actually work - this was a friend of Odette's, after all. "Thank you, but I'll survive. Their balls won't, though." The fur of his tail bristled. "Oh, no, you misunderstand. 'Straight' is... just catgirl slang. For a...

Red turned to Selene and nearly hissed before realizing that was far more of a cat than a girl thing to do. Instead, he gave an expression of shut the fuck up, you're ruining my plan, and then turned back to Clovis as if his smile had never left his face.