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Hey! I read everything that's up so far for our exchange. Here are my thoughts. Shiny! Cool. I like this line. The "and yet" makes it seem like the thought that's to come is something motivating Chappie to go instead of stay, but then it's said that the thought terrified her. I was expecting...

ladies, gents, enbies, here we are. after two years, we have reached the end of the story. this is the final chapter of hunter, haunted. i will still be back next week to upload the extra chapter that's from samson's POV, but the main story ends here. though red's story will continue in the...

Red recoiled at the giant black sky-serpent arriving. "Fuck," left his mouth. He wondered why Rayquaza was black instead of green, but the human boy beat him to asking about it. The serpent didn't seem to pick up on the question being about color, so it must have been ordinary for her. Then...

"Boy, you're slow. Yes, you're not home anymore. If you're wondering how to get back, we're in the middle of figuring that out. Word is that the trick is somewhere in a storehouse, and we're on our way there."

Red rolled his eyes. "You're in a place called Obleta. We're all visitors from different universes. Is that clear enough for you?"

Red turned to the lucario. "You're a long way from home, bluepaw."

Hello everybody! It sure has been a while. July 4th Game Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Friday, July 7th 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or...

Hey there! I'm back for more for our exchange. I've read chapters 5-10. Here we go. You'll want "if I was" instead of "if I'm" due to the tenses. I don't think either of these commas should be there according to grammar rules. Ooh, a radio. I wonder if it works through some kind of magic or...

NOTE: this post is in the wrong spot. this post should be after chapter 14, but i misremembered that it should be between 13 and 14 and posted it here. come back to this post once you're done with chapter 14. posting here to say that the midquel oneshot vivarium has been uploaded in another...

hello everyone! this is vivarium, a oneshot midquel of hunter, haunted that takes place in the middle of chapter 14. i'm putting it in its own thread to keep things more organized. if you're wondering whether you can read this if you haven't read hh, the answer is "sure, but don't expect...

"What can I say," Red said. "Word gets around."

Red held a stare. "Everyone's a critic," he muttered.

EDIT: The events of this chapter have been revised somewhat since its first upload, mainly related to Red's hospital stay and how the police handle him. Nothing crucial, but still worth mentioning. so my breakneck speed with revising continued, and i have now completed this fic (save for the...

Red humphed. "Well, I'll be. A universe not tainted by the existence of Arceus. I guess you must have some other creator god. Or phony creator, but all the same." He sat down. "Arceus is the apprentice and lapmon of the Third Being, the creator of reality. He was a diligent student and thus...

Red turned to the new... Giratina. Hm. "Hello, Violent One," Red greeted. "Heard about you and Arceus. Respect. Us psychos gotta stick together."

Back for an exchange! Here are my thoughts on chapter 2. Ooh, a teleport service. It makes sense to be scared of fearow. A bird of that size wouldn't be a threat to a human in real life, but Pokemon are superpowered. Sentence ends abruptly. Graveler, with one L. This spelling kept consistent...

Red's eyes widened, then narrowed. "Oh, you would go there, wouldn't you."

Red grit his teeth. "Don't you talk about my god. Mareep like you have no right."

"Damn," Red said, smiling. "There go my plans for tonight."

Hi! Here to review this, as per our review exchange. It took me a bit to figure out who Leviene was since they were the only one not introduced with their species Missing period at the end. Wrong fi- aw, Ambyssin already made this joke. Missing periods at the end. You want "she" in...