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"You have a god as master as well?" Kohath asked. Must be some powerful spirit. It cannot be a real god - there are only three. "That would explain your... powers."

"Of course," said Kohath. "I've known him since I was a boy. He was the one that helped me escape slavery and lived with me in the wilderness for years. With his guidance, I formed the Helixian tribe and fought until it became a kingdom. Nowadays, he lives with me in the palace." He quirked a...

Kohath smiled, flashing his canines. "You have good taste," he said. "This is the finest wool in the kingdom, sown together by the greatest seamstress." "It is the kingdom of the Helixians, located in the Aava desert," Kohath replied. "But I sense that you two come from somewhere far away...

Kohath took in the strange sight and felt a wave of apprehension come over him. This being is not lower-human - not entirely, anyway, he thought. So this place has inhabitants with powers I did not expect. I should adjust my behavior accordingly. Now, how to yield without losing my pride...

hi all! here we are again, a few months after the last chapter. i don't know, though, if the next one will take as long, as i actually do have the outline finished by now and should know what to write. well, i guess we'll see! this chapter is rated teen for non-violent death. enjoy! --- Part...

Kohath glared back. "To cower just to be polite is the brainless action. A Helixian acts to get what he needs, and he will use force if necessary."

Kohath slammed his hand on the counter and leaned in. "I call you only what you are, lower-human. Now, explain. Or would you like me to beat it out of you?"

Kohath noticed one of the men look at him, and his look was not respectful. Kohath narrowed his eyes and walked up to him. "You, lower-human," he started. "You will explain this place to me."

Hi there! Here for Catnip, reviewing chapter 17. A note not specific to this chapter - I skimmed the previous chapter to recap and I like that you put in some small reminders of things, like mentioning Rui still thinks Wes was undercover in Snagem or that Duking doesn't trust Wes. It's been a...

a) I wanna write for the Deathly and Mary Sue corpses b) I should be able to write any time c) I'd rather not be the first in any corpse.

Kohath should have known there was something off about the letter he had received. He'd never have thought speaking out the word given to him would have actually resulted in anything happening, but now he was here, wherever 'here' was, and no longer at the palace. What was the meaning of this...

I don't know how much I'll participate, but I think I might wanna pop in. Name: Kohath I Age: Forty-something Appearance: Two meters tall, bronze skin, dark brown hair and beard, physique like a Greek statue, extensive body hair, piercing yellow eyes, enlarged canine teeth. Wears white robes...

August 1st Game Sign-ups open until Friday, August 4th 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens: once your assignment is...

Hey all! This is that mystery dungeon -centric PMD oneshot I've been talking about. It's my first time writing an actual mystery dungeon, and I hope I did the concept justice. Special thanks to @GumPlum for betareading this! His insights were really valuable. A note on content - this story...

hi there! here we are with chapter two. it should be noted that the next one may take longer than a week to upload as i have not yet finished it. here's to hoping it isn't months. as a shock to everyone, this chapter has no specific content warnings. still going to rate it as teen, though, due...

hey everyone! just popping in to say the first chapter of the sequel story has been posted. have a good day!

EDIT (22 May 2025): This thread has been retired. Find the newer version of this story in this thread. Thanks! --- Hey everyone! Here we finally are. This story's been in the works for a good five years, but I just haven't been able to plan it out... until now. For those unaware, this is the...

Here for chapter 5! Since it's past of the past, you'd want "hadn't been a dream, none of that had been". Introducing him as hyperactive is kind of telling rather than showing, and since you do show it well later that he is hyperactive, this addendum could be omitted. I think it's unnecessary...

hi all! here i am with the extra i promised. this is the first thing i wrote from samson's perspective, so i had to go back and tweak it a little according to how i wrote samson in judgment. anyway, rated teen for some violent imagery. see you next week for the upload of the first chapter of...

Hey there! I've been reading more of this fic at work when it's slow. Here are my thoughts on chapters 3 and 4 for our exchange. This "it" is pretty far from the word it's referring to ("door"). It could be replaced with "the door" to read better. As a demonym, Unovan ought to be capitalized...