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This is a review of chapter 1! The first three scenes between perspectives of Ash, Pikachu, and Jenny set up an interesting field for what was to come. It seems, based on the narrative, that Ash was going to be the one to fight against the Team Rocket uprising that was happening ever since the...

Yep, I plan on going over some of these earlier chapters a bit more thoroughly one day, maybe some time soon come 2023, but otherwise, it's been nice to see you enjoy these chapters! Hopefully you'll enjoy what's to come soon. -- Chapter 144 – Triple Luck There was no way Star had given...

Chapter 143 – Fly to the City Cipher Castle was strangely lonely. There were very few guards actually patrolling the area inside, and all the halls were far too large to be considered anything but excessive. Owen walked down a now-familiar passageway that was at least ten feet in width and...

Heya Vray! This is a review for chapter 1, crossposted from FFN. Interesting opening, starting with some intrigue and context less exchanges, but I was able to follow just enough to get into the scene. This is a decent opener despite the lack of context, so good job there. Also, bonus points...

Chapter 3 Ah yes, our first somewhat antagonist or at least opposing force. It's interesting just how big and wide this facility is, actually. It makes me wonder just how much funding they're getting and what the ulterior motives would be for it. I suppose that's somewhat for the prologue in...

Chapter 142 – The Life They Live “Xerneas… What an awful god,” Trina muttered under her breath, riding atop Alex’s greater head. The Hydreigon wasn’t really sure how he’d wound up as the Snivy’s noble steed, but as he flew down from the Voidlands’ portal and toward the ruins of Hot Spot, he...

Chapter 141 – Final Wings There he stood, the final remnant of Rhys, mindless and operating on the basic instructions that he had left behind. His battle stance was the same; Owen knew it all too well, even though the memories would be even more painful and prominent to Team Alloy. But Owen...

Chapter 140 – The Last Remnant Sun. Sky. Warmth. Light. It was approaching winter, and yet somehow even the bitter cold felt warm in the afternoon daytime. Because it was the first time many of them had truly been able to experience daytime at all. It didn’t matter that it was just outside of...

Chapter 139 – Gone, and Remembered “You must think you’re perfectly clever,” Qitlan said, sneering, but Owen could see the hostility in his eyes. “I’ve already figured everything out.” The Charmeleon slowly got up from the wall, glancing at his shoulder that now had a hole going through it. “I...

Chapter 138 – West Null Village Two-thirds of Migami were nervous about where they were flying. In a patch of barren land that interrupted the featureless black forest, there were mountains and empty fields of rock and dust. Those were the same fields that had left Demitri and Mispy stranded...

Wow, this must be one of those old times where random species weren't a random cameo! I think the next time I edit this chapter I'll change it to be one. Glad you enjoyed yourself, Fobbie! There are some tests that are designed to be impossible to 100%, so it allows them to get a more...

This one's for chapter 2- Ah, so she only thought she could say it. I guess that's something I should have expected, though it would have been interesting if the story was following some kind of prodigy and how that was even more different, but following the typical exploration is fine, too...

Hey Jackie! I'm gonna be coming at you with a triple-threat. Three reviews for three chapters! The first chapter (after a refresher with the prologue) was a good opening that helped me get situated into the story. I really liked in particular the segment where Salem was starting to really...

Chapter 137 – One Hour It was more awkward than he’d wanted, but soon, he was nodding at guards and walking into the castle. Cipher City was behind him, and Qitlan was just ahead, like he knew he’d be back, smiling wryly. “Good to see you. What wonderful timing,” Qitlan said. “Your prize with...

Chapter 136 – What Time Has Done They really just let him out of Cipher Castle. He walked free. The guards even gave him a firm nod when he walked. It was surreal. If he wanted, he could, potentially, walk out of the city. But that wasn’t something he truly could do, because it would endanger...

Chapter 135 - Reconnecting It had been several days since the battle against Dark Matter had ended. The strange creature known as Nate was starting to recover and gather up the many little wraith-like things that crawled around Kilo Village. Rebuilding efforts were slow and steady. All was...

Chapter 134 – Incompatible The cell doors opened. “Well,” Qitlan said, gently closing the door behind him. He curled his fingers together, tenting them in a mock-prayer. “I believe you saw all of that?” In front of the Inteleon was a Mew, bruised and chained to the wall. A specialized metal...

Thanks for the thorough feedback, Fobbie! I had replied to it on discord, but glad that you're picking up on those hints I've been sprinkling around! Now then, as for the next chapter... Chapter 133 – Six Chips Chasing Gahi down was hard when Demitri was so slow. But, thankfully, Gahi was not...

Chapter 132 – The Hardest News Dialga sat in front of the Radiant Tree, still thinking about the letter he had sent to Arceus. Elder… He tried to meditate, tried to reach for those little bits of memory of him as a Lucario, but they were so frustratingly distant. Dark Matter really did a number...

Chapter 131 – Half Death Cresselia smashed through the door to the bathroom and locked eyes with Spice. The only reason the Salazzle wraith wasn’t immediately torn to shreds was because of some quick thinking with a black Protect barrier. Instead, whips of pink energy twisted the metal of the...