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Yes and no. The whole thing about water going into a river too hot after being used for server cooling is very real, though, and it got a company in trouble and they had to stop and find other ways to fix it (because it was messing with the fish population.) Anyway, I'm really glad you enjoyed...

Half of this is theorizing and I'm all for it! I'll clarify a few things just so it doesn't send you too far off the beaten path, but in general I'm loving the speculation that's going on here, This is the biggest one, and frankly it's my fault for following the "Southern Tradition" for...

Thanks for the review, Fobbie! I replied to you elsewhere for all of these, but I may as well briefly state that I'm very happy that you were interested in the plot more now that you're getting into chapter 5 or so. That's usually when it picks up, and I do wish I could have made it pick up...

This is an interesting start, opening with an explosion that was only in their head, so to speak. But at the same time there's talk about it being normal and just some kind of thing that someone has. Maybe it's because of all the other stories I've read that deal in mental health lately, but I...

This'll be a bit of a stream of consciousness review, but overall thoughts will be near the bottom. The first big paragraph has a lot of word repetition and I don't think the effectiveness of it quite shapes up to anything worthwhile in terms of thematic use. Floor, tile, wood, in particular...

Thanks for the feedback, Zion! And yes, you certainly analyzed some of my tendencies when casting certain characters and plotlines for what I like to write when it comes to smaller stories. I hadn't even considered the care-justice dynamic. I oughta look into that because it definitely sounds...

This is an interesting sort of semi sci-fi existential horror sort of fic being written here. I don't really know how else to properly describe it, but it does have that typical Espy feel with messing with the interface while crafting the story. These are one of those kinds of works where...

I'm upset that I knew what this was going to be about within the first few paragraphs and the title. I suppose it also helps that I'm familiar with the authors sort of humor when it comes to this sort of story. All things considered I'd very easily recommend your work of this genre to people...

This was a fun one! The presentation, especially the opening paragraph, was very strong in establishing what kind of story we would be reading. I get the feeling it was inspired by, or is at least coincidentally similar to, SCP logs and things of that nature. "Found footage" documentary style...

Catnip for you too! This was a cute story! It was very predictable in terms of the beats that would happen if only for the meta reason of the story's length. Once there was a cry in the forest, I knew exactly what was going to happen by the beat. That doesn't mean the story was bad, though. In...

Catnip time! I really liked the transition from being so ignorant of what his situation was to eventually showing the relation of our perspective to humans and just following orders. But showing little hints now and then of exactly what happened by the time we got to the midway point...

Heya! This is gonna be a review of the prologue through chapter 4! Small note, you used the wrong "than" in your opening statement/legal disclosure. The opening prologue was a very far zoom out of the state of affairs for the world, very much like a cinematic prologue without dialogue. I...

Hey there! This will be a review for the prologue and first two chapters. This is a strong opening line. It's basic and doesn't describe too much, but it does start right in the action. Something I can appreciate in particular about this story is how it doesn't really idle around for much...

Alright, time to give this one a look. This'll be for the first two chapters! We're opening with a somewhat standard quiz with the twist of something clearly going wrong in the process. Very clearly this is going to be important down the line, so I'm curious on where that will go. One thing I...

Hey there, Luker! It's finally time for me to take a peek at this one! This is going to be a review of chapter 1 and the prologue. I'll give some stream of consciousness thoughts as well as end thoughts. Interesting prologue. It seems slightly too detailed to be just a throwaway setting, right...

A story about a Pikachu and an Eevee is definitely drawing upon the classics! The way the prose is going for the opening is interesting. Third person present, but the italics seems to be for when things are happening in the scenery, but no italics if it pertains to dialogue? However, there are...

Oh, interesting! This time we're looking at something of a look at Gladion escaping from Aether, are we? I thought it was very clever how you skipped right to the actual escape plot and how it all happened instead of trudging through the actual plotting of it. You could have started at some...

Chapter 145 – Unexpected Life The doctors had insisted Zena stay in bed and recover from those wounds, which were still bleeding mildly despite her Mystic healing. Being struck by the Judgement of Arceus, as it turned out, was more difficult to heal. But Zena insisted a little harder that she...

Personal goal is to get enough for a sprite companion as is tradition. I think 6 is the cap, so this may be it until I do either replacements or find some other milestone goal!

Review made! Have a HoC.