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Actually, I would argue that trying to go for this many epithets is already not good for the prose. I would much rather read a name and the Pokemon species over and over than have a character referred to by their type when their type has no relevance to the current conversation. For all of my...

Fic Information Title: Hunter, Haunted Summary: Thinking he'd successfully gotten away with yet another ritualistic murder, Ichiro "Red" Akai is shocked to discover his latest victim roaming the earth once more - as a yamask. To keep his crimes from being exposed, he seeks to kill her again...

He actually gets a much larger role towards the end of HH! He even has a extra chapter from his POV that I'll post after the main fic is complete. He's also the human in Whine-Yelp under his first name, Mark. Ah, my bad. Looks like the formatting didn't work as I thought it would. Changed it a...

Hey, here for Catnip, and sorry for the lateness. Figured I'd continue with this story since I'd looked at it before in a previous round. Quote Comments Typo. It feels like you're using "bemused" to mean "amused" here, but that's a common mistake. "Bemused" means "puzzled, confused, or...

a standing ovation for a new record in time between chapters everyone. five months. couldnt have done it without you. no but seriously i do have pretty good reasons for taking so long this time - working on Judgment, working on my contest oneshot, working on another oneshot, summer job...

July 3th Game Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Thursday, July 7th 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens: once...

happy smeargle! we hope you find this pic goes hard

It's been a long time coming, but here I am, reading Wandersword! I wasn't sure at first if I was gonna do one chapter or two for this batch, but I really wanted to continue after the first so I read them both. Here are my thoughts. Quote Comments I found it a little strange that this...

Hey there! I read chapter 2 for Catnip, and here are my thoughts. my bet's on dungeon madness! "Suddenly the area all around him took an ominous tone to it" is pretty vague. I'm not sure how I'm supposed to interpret it. Typo in Farfetch'd. Missing capital at the start of the final sentence...

Hey! Read chapter 3, here are my thoughts. weird vistas? pog lol l o f e This paragraph confused me at first, and then I realized that by "slunk" it meant that Hiro had jumped down. To "slink", though, is to "move smoothly and quietly with gliding steps, in a stealthy or sensuous manner" or...

Hey there! Now that I'm no longer busy with the anniversary review challenge, I'm finally here with the review for the last chapter. I wasn't sure how I was supposed to understand this since these two claims seemed to be contradictory. funny image: jungs coat gets caught in the car door and he...

May 8th Game - Happy Mother's Day! Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Thursday, May 12th 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review...

id like the custom sprite attached to this post (joanna) as a companion

Reviewed chapters 6-10 of Of Sand and Shadows!

Hey there! I chose OSAS for the fic to review for the anniversary challenge, and I've read chapters 6-10. Quote Comments (6-10 combined): today were dancing for no reason. someday well disappear for no reason. wes coming in with SHE ASKED FOR NO PICKLES energy Missing space. Missing capital...

gimme one with ghost type things!!! im now the ghost type person!!!

big review i quag :quag: I'm pretty poor at history generally, but I'm trying to go for a roughly 1800s setting. Dracula by Bram Stoker was written in 1897, it seems, though I chose 1800s more on a vibe and the vague knowledge that it's when the literary genre of horror began. Oh, you'll...

Signing up with an excerpt of Judgment and excerpt from the first chapter of Batty for those that prefer not to read about capital punishment or just generally want something lighter. Judgment - Excerpt Source: Here Context: This story takes place in trainerverse, though a version of it where...

Does the "100 words per chapter" part mean that there must be at least 100 words concerning each chapter or just that the total word count of the review has to be the amount of chapters x 100? Like, for example, would a three-chapter catch-up review of 400 words not meet the requirements if...

hey new chapter here or part or whatever. im gonna be honest and say that the next part is probably gonna take even longer to write since i dont even know what its gonna have. lol rating for this chapter is teen for an emotionally abusive mother and not really anything else i think. enjoy ---...