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I reviewed the first two chapters of Postcards! Requesting a review for a chapter of Casting Off.

Hey there, I’m here because of review tag! Since I noticed your chapters aren’t super long, I decided to review two of them instead of just one. First off, props for writing 2nd person! I know there are a few others fics that do it, but it’s still something you don’t see very often and I...

I'm fine with splitting RP and Mafia. I think the purpose of RP Mafia kinda gets defeated if some people play it as "Mafia, but with a tiny bit of RPing on the side", so if there's enough people who don't care about RPing it might just be better to give them their own game in the form of regular...

Chapter 10 Huh, I actually never realized that Pidgeotto are larger than Houndour until I looked it up. Seems like you learn something new day every day. Hey, looks like someone else is learning stuff as well! Jade ordering this reminds me of that episode in the anime where Totodile and...

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Tales Of Arrival Base: 3 points Weekly theme adherence: 4 points Word count: 3 points Subtotal: 10 points Total: 20 points Given that I reviewed chapter 1 on Serebii a while back, this should mean this review counts for the weekly theme if I'm understanding it correctly.

Crossposting from Serebii: Well, I am glad you are considering changing it, though chapter 2 still had the same issue I’m afraid. Missing a space between these two sentences. I think this part could have used a bit more description, since I had to read this twice to understand that you...

Not sure how much I'll be able to do for this event, but might as well log any reviews I post this month: The Legendarian Chronicles Base: 3 points Weekly theme adherence: 4 points Word count: 3 points Total: 10 points

Chapter 8 I don’t know why I find something as simple as Firestorm helping Jade up sweet, but I do. Well you definitely did a good job at making this situation with the bombs seem terrifying. Also Jade mentioning having no water Pokémon while the ship is sinking is giving me anime flashbacks...

I’d like to sign up with Cabot! Like Sike did with Karo, I’ll refer to his mafia sign up for a description of his personality.

Ah didn't realize Chibi was currently "it", but I reviewed chapter 7 of LC about two weeks ago. Requesting a review for Casting Off!

I'd like to sign up as well. Will pick the Victini bag.

Chapter 7 It’s sweet to see Jade caring for her team like this, even if Chibi makes a pretty good point. You can’t keep your Pokémon out of harm’s way if they get blown up by a bomb. I can tell you did a good amount of research into ships for this arc, so props to that. I know you said in...

Hey, happy to see you back! Your review was a treat to read, just like your first one was. :D I made some edits based on your feedback, though I’ll respond to a few things more in detail: That’s definitely not meant to happen, so thanks for pointing it out. I did my best to avoid it after you...

Alright, back for chapter 5 and 6! Looks like the first of the two is indeed a breather as I expected, which is definitely nice after the craziness from the last few chapters. Anyway, let’s get right into this: Chapter 5 First paragraph of the chapter and Specer’s already here with the snarky...

I'm more than happy to submit my story! <div class="charatitle"> <span> <p>Casting Off</p> <p>Chaptered • Complete • Adventure • G</p></span></div> <div class="charahover"> <p>A three-shot about a young Cranidos joining the navy in order to fulfill his desire to go on...

Chapter 4 Pretty interesting how TMs work in LC. Since canon is so vague about TMs are applied, it’s always fun to see what different interpretations authors have. Even more interesting! I see LC subscribes to the “Pokémon don’t instantly master TM moves” school as well. Well that’s not...

Well, Eevee has always been a personal favorite of mine, so I could see that happening. Then again, assuming I won't just become a random Pokémon but one that actually suits me and I'm comfortable with, it might very well be something else since the perspective of being a quadruped for the rest...

(Crossposting from Serebii) Heya! Been a while since last time, but here to review chapter 2 and 3 just like I said I would. Chapter 2 Well you did just see them doing something illegal, Jade. Whelp, that escalated quickly. From kidnapping to worse. Though given that Jade saw buildings...

"Though if Dave is the final Mafia member... what do we do next?" Cabot asked. "How do we get everyone back who disappeared?"

Cabot blinked and stared blankly at Dave. Throughout most of his stay here he was convinced Dave was innocent, yet he turned out to be as crazy as Psyduck! Had he been like this the whole time? Did the Mafia brainwash him on the third night? Regardless of what had happened, it was obvious who to...