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my gosh this is an absolutely glorious read like. priceless. I have such an asbolute love for flawed products and spend more time watching 'bad' shows than good ones, so this is my jam (not this is bad necessarily) its so entertaining I love it. Mark is such a weird kid, so little makes sense...

Koa withheld a snort at the comment, though his gaze remained grim. He didn't agree with Bahamut. But even thinking about Soda caused a strange twist in his chest. He hated him- Do you? He flinched in surprise at the mental question from Echo. His starter cast him a look of concern that Koa...

Chapter 1 and 2 (I'm going to crosspost my Ao3 review and then add further thoughts as well.) Some additional thoughts: -Hooray for Ho-oh cameo! -The use of the Trainer card to describe Hana is actually cool! Normally it'd be odd, except trainer cards are huge part of Galar culture, so it...

Well, that caught him off guard. First, the moon was destroyed right after they barely escaped. Which was bad, but good. They'd stopped that super cannon or whatever, but now the moon was in pieces except it wasn't, it was somehow reforming. Which was good, he was pretty sure. Except somehow...

He had to move fast, there was no time, no time- Koa swept the area, quelling the panic inside him, taking reassurance in the ever unflappable and determined presence of Echo. Was anyone still behind- Owen. The Charizard had been injured. Although even injured he looked like he was preparing...

Chapter 8 oooh this was a fun one! Steven has a little run in with early Team Magma! As usual, love Steven, his team, and even Dusty, even though I also want to throttle Dusty. I loved the bit of worldbuilding idea that Routes are patrolled safe zones and going off them is like a wilderness...

Echo fluttered anxiously near Eien's fallen form, checking her over for injuries. He'd tried his best to slow her fall, even if the effort hadn't amounted to much agaisnt her massive size. Koa watched him for moment, thankful he was alright. As the storm cleared, the sky returning to some...

Ah! very glad I got to read your story for catnip! I'd been meaning to read chapter 1 and this is excellent timing. To begin with, I really enjoyed the first chapter! Your writing, and this story, as a really sweet and quaint feel. Reminds me of a chill sort of slice of life anime, full of...

Chapter 6 AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I'm sure you can guess this is easily one of my top favorite chapters of the whole story. Perfect. Flawless. This would honestly make for a superb poketoon short or other single episode. It stands on its own exceedingly well. I...

Koa surged out of that storm, shadows fading behind him, leaving the dark memories behind. Right now he needed to reach his friends, make sure they were ok - Brisa, gods she'd fallen was she ok? The rest of the team? Were they all trapped as well? And the suddenly, he was no longer running...

Ever so gently, Koa nudged Echo and scooped him onto his back. "Rest for now." A new, invigorating power filled him. There was a lot to think about, and a lot to talk about. But right now... the others needed him. "I'll buy you the biggest jar of honey when we get home," Koa said. "I promise."...

Shadows still ripled around Koa, but he held Echo close as he spoke. It's okay. He had to believe that. Eien had done this? A flash of anger tore through him. How dare she- No. Not now. He drew Echo close with one paw, tears dripping onto the familiars amorphous body. The Crobat gasped once...

See? You'll never be perfect. Never be good enough. He heard Echo's wingbeats, thundered in his ears. He braced himself, half expecting another attack. And then- They gave out. His head jerked up. Cyrus had faded, and Echo lay on the floor, limp. "Echo!" with cry of despair he raced to his...

Failure. Pointless. Koa gritted his teeth, clamping his jaws shut even as his fur darkened more and more. No no no- He struggled to breathe, his entire body trembling as thoughts corroded his mind. You're a failure. You're nothing. Nothing but a monster. You spend all your time trying to...

Next thing Koa knew, Echo screeched in pain and was knocked back, nursing his injured wing. No no no- Koa froze. The attack had been meant for Cyrus why had Echo- Before he could react, Echo's powerful screech rang in his ears. He flinched, feeling some of his strength drain, but shook it off...

Okay so this story almost feels like really really high-tier, subtle satire/parody fic. Like elite tier. The writing is still good enough to justify it feeling genuine and some might read it and just think its a story, but people familiar in the fandom and pokemon... it just takes on a whole new...

Echo's attack cut Koa to his core. Physically it only stung, but the attack made it clear - This was real. Real enough to hurt, at least. A pit formed inside his stomach and he stepped back, staring at Echo pleadingly. This couldn't be the real Echo, he couldn't believe that. Unless it was and...

Koa swayed on his feet, sounds fading, distant roars and cries of something. His vision blurred at the edges and seemed to narrow. He could feel his heartbeat, he was aware of his body, stiff and heavy as lead. All he could see was the hazy figure before him, flanked by a Crobat. His Crobat. His...

This wasn't right. He'd just been in the storm and everything went wrong. Brisa had fallen - oh by Ho-Oh where was she? and now he was here. In this building that didn't make any sense. Had he been rbought here? And what about Echo? He'd heard his starters cries of pain just before they fell-...

Koa glided in, carried by Echo, who was particularly serious. Determination was painted across the dark Crobats face. His eyes widened as he took in the sight. Dread filled him, mixed with surprise and a bit of wonder. "Huh." Was all he could think to say. Was this even the weirdest thing...