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A quick run through of Chapter 11! I've been skimming these bc I definitely read at least 11 and 12 so I wanted to drop some surface level thoughts. I like this little detail, its a cute way to show their relationship and his awareness of her needs! I'll take "words you'll eat in a few...

I decided I felt like reading back a little and picking up where I left off for reviews so, here we go with Chapter 10! Just quick thoughts. So all through the fight it seems like you swap capitalization for pokemon. Which, big mood, I was stuck here and kept forgetting which variant I used...

Thank you so much for your reviews and comments! I really appreciate all of them. A few quick replies: Lost Tower: Yeah at the time of writing I was definitely going more game-y as an approach. If I were to provide a lore answer... Probably ghosts gather there because of spirit energy, but the...

The Mawile and Houndour were still going at it, everything Houdour said only made him more concerned. He wondered for a moment if it was possible any of these people were from his world. Marcel's gaze shifted to the newcomer. "Are you another human as well?" And then all of a sudden, another...

Marcel stiffened, his gaze locking onto the Houndour. A killer... unconsciously his hand clenched into a fist. There was no telling why - perhaps it had been justified self defense. Or something more sinister. But he couldn't act yet without knowing more. He'd have to keep a sharp eye on the...

Definitely sounded Kalosian, something he made note of just in case. He still didn't trust her but she seemed experienced in all this, if he assumed she was real. He rubbed his chin as he considered her words. "My initial theory was some kind of dreamscape or psychic hallucination. But this...

Before Marcel could ask anything else, the Charizard was gone, to his disappointment. His eyes narrowed as another figure emerged from a house, a Servine wearing actual clothes. But if he said they came from a far away place, either it was another piece of the dream, or something much much...

Marcel decided he didn't like or trust either of these two. The Houndour sounded outright dangerous and the Mawile girl seemed not all there. Then again, they could either be dream constructs or psychic apparitions. But dreams were supposed to be based on the dreamers subconscious, right...

Marcel jolted awake, blinking, taking in his surroundings. A rush of information all at once that he rapidly sorted through. He wasn't in Orre anymore. By all rights he appeared to be on some kind... it sounded like a train? Sky rushed past overhead and he sat up, sweeping the area. He was...

Name: Marcel Benedetti Age: mid 30's Gender: Male Species: Machop Misc: Marcel is from my spinoff, Blood is Thicker Than Poison. He's a detective from Orre who is very kind and a stubborn pragmatic optimist. He's not naive but he also believes deeply in the power of kindness and good but also...

Scoliopede! All of it's line actually. I always forget about it when I think about bugs, since my brain defaults to flying bugs, but it's truly a fantastic pokemon, the whole line is a gem. Little bug, rolpoly bug, and then a sick horse bug. Peak.

Q: So what's Blood is Thicker Than Water about? A: BITTP is about the loyalties that we have, where we put them. It's about trauma, healing, and the hold toxic relationships can have over your life, how they can warp you and change you little by little. It's about learning to grow and change...

Seconded, and I wasn't even in this one! (Or was I :copyka:?)

I'd be interested in judging as well! (And writing but it remains to be seen if that will happen)

What is the deadline to ask to judge and how long (and when) is the judging period? I'd like to help judge but I want to make sure I have enough time to commit

I'm actually a bit lost on the past/future theme. Does that mean it should be a story that takes place in the past and then future? Or somehow be set in that time period? (presumably relative to the vaguely 'present' setting of pokemon?)

Given I've already hit up Irreflections, here I am! Okay so after reading this a couple times I figured the most fun approach would be to give what is basically a bunch of commentary and thoughts and impressions, since its short but its very rich! Diary format can sometimes be tricky, easy to...

Chapter 27: Iron Chains Finally, the penultimate chapter of this arc! Without further ado, I present Iron Chains. In which things take a 'shocking' turn and danger is just around the corner... Echo (Male Crobat) Hazard (Male Joltik) Rascal (Female Tyrunt) Anubis (Male Houndoom) Scrapper...

Chapter 26: Iron Claws Chapter 26! Koa has repaired his relationship with Scrapper, but more trouble awaits... Koa lay awake, listening to the sounds of wild pokemon in the night. Two days of training had passed since his encounter with Fossie, but the memory still lingered - not because of...

[[ It was awesome having you honestly. I believed you were innocent the whole time :mewlulz:]]