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Personal experience had taught him that luring the altruistic away from their passion was a tiresome process that usually backfired more often than not. And even if an asset was culled they lost something of their fire, their drive, once pulled from their preferred causes. The moral shift of...

An: Some profanity, talk of extortion, and general bitterness. Also, Zia is supposedly Italian for "aunt". “Silver’s running out of people to get to.” Green confessed. “That leaves Mask, Lance, and me.” One in three odds, with things slanted in her favor. She’d run a hand over her face...

AN: She’d ran until running burned, ignoring the people around her, darting around someone who’d tried to slow her down… And only slowed when she hit the beach. It wasn’t her training spots, there were no boxes or Rockets, but Sevii was an island, all you had to do was run long enough, fast...

AN: Trigger warning, discussed child abuse, assault, Giovanni triggers Green, and the fall out leaves them both at each other throats. Green’d been walking ditty, who kept changing shape as they went down the street. Starting as a four-legged rattata, drifting to two-legged bunny ‘mon Green...

review reply for chapter one Wow, thanks for leaving such a thoughtful and detailed review, it means a lot. here's my reply, roughly line by line. About Gio: I'll admit writing him is a challenge. Minor spoilers is that he's changed a bit, but not as much as he's thought -he actually admits...

She’d taken her run to the box pile, zipping and dodging about, chasing Nido and being chased, ignoring the grumbled complaints. There were more, and they were spread wider, taller, machamp and ‘kaun’s doing most of the lifting, their trainers watching on, consulting clipboards and...

Hi, reporting from catnip here with your review of chapter one! (in response to the -poem?- opening and recording bit, plus Tobin and Brit’s starting interactions) And here we meet Tobin and Brit, nearly right off the cuff, I’m getting obsessive vibes off of Tobin (and a bit creeper vibes...

AN: Sorry I needed a fluff chapter from before. The next few are going to be rough. Green has a bad flashback, triggered by her feeling unsafe, and it gets ugly in her head and out of it. Reality get a bit wierd. TW: flashbacks, discussed violence, brainwashing. “Don’t forget your MP3...

Boxes are piling on the beach. Boxes atop boxes, right in the middle of… well it’s not secluded, but it’s a not popular spn of the beach. More rock than sand, enough so Green wore boots. Someone has smoothed the sands, crunched the rocks together, and on these platforms started what looks...

4. What’s its history? (How did it come to be?) Let me tell you a story of something I call the "total grimer colapse" or a TGC.

There was a snowman on Giovanni’s desk in his Viridian office. Clearly crafted by pre-adult hands, the tells were in the size and shape. It’d been set on the center of his desk, one twig thrust through it, to give it arms, some leaves pressed against it to give it “clothes”. It looked a bit...

It’d taken three days, three of battling every “walk” with Nido. She’d had to cut through elementary schoolyards, because she needed to win the fights without Nido getting scraped up. And she had. At the expense of a few little kid’s lunch money. Still, to make things sorta right she made sure...

Green sort of wished she was like Karen some days. Karen could swear without flinching from her own words, without stuttering over vileness, profanities, or… anything. She was fearless like that, and Green wished she’d had enough of that in her to actually say what she was thinking. Or just...

Via forum would be the only way I could participate. It looks like fun. Will the group be drawing from the new graphic novel as well or just using the free-to-download books?

AN: RD. Obviously. Written because Gio can be an utter jerk when he wants to be. And right now he wants to be. I'm probably going to change Green's parent's names but for now, think of the preset names as placeholders until I can think of something to put in. Frank Azule hated it when...

Thanks for sharing this cute one shot. The view from the Leaf' perspective was interesting. The back and forth made a nice rhythm to the whole that reminded me of the near lyrical slant of certian books. I'd say word wise theres one conflict in meaning. When you use " comfort" for how the...

She’d found out about Giovanni’s next power play by accident. Flipping through the newspaper she was skimming the articles at random. Because she was bored, being grounded was boring, and she was only able to read her school books and newspapers for three weeks. So she’d found a way to twist...

Reviewed chapters one and two of "envy of Eden". Hopefully, it's alright. the review I've no stipulations or particularities on what I want looked at in my fic. So whoever takes it, go wild on whatever tangent you want I guess. I have a new fic to offer to the chopping block, it's RD, so...

Alright here per review tag, handling chapters one and two. I'm sorry I didn't see any review preferences so I'm just jumping in and did a line-by-line reaction review. Hopefully, you prefer this style. Chapter 1 So the world ends in an earthquake? And curious how architecture can be a...

CHAPTER 3: The Visit part 2 Her parents tolerated Green’s revelations in silence, not saying a word until Green, tired of saying all the words, had slipped off to get a drink. Something warm, to counter the chill of remembering. Something sweet to spite Mask who’d only offered them the...