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Reviewed Chapters 1 and 2 of PMD: Refracted Differences. +2 chapters +1 theme total change: +3 blitz total: 19 I've also finished another art prize, which should bring my total to 19 + 2 = 21. Passing 20, I'd like another spin of the wheel, please!

Hey there! Read chapters 1 and 2. Here are my thoughts. It seems the first chapter is marked with a numeral but the second with a word, which I'm guessing you didn't intend for. Stray capital. I also think this could use a colon instead of a comma (It was of a Pokemon I did not recognize: a...

I forget how much it was established in the story, but eevee evolve by interacting with stones, and I think Mila mentions a "pilgrimage" to a known location with a large Water Stone. I would say it's at least 2m x 2m x 2m and that lapras are just beeg and strong. I thought of it as basically a...

Thank you both for the reviews! Very glad you enjoyed it and found it funny. I love writing comedy, and I love even more when I hear it lands. Well, this is a bit awkward. You see, I happen to have a Scottish friend who already writes all his chat messages in Scots, and I got him to write out...

oh my freakin goodness i actually read and reviewed something within a day wow A Very Rough Day +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 16

Scouring through the forum for Blitz Week 3 challenge eligible fics like the little rat I am, I came across this and took the dive. I'm happy I did! This is a nice oneshot - even with that very, very hatable Mawile - about how much a close friend can really turn a day around. This feels like a...

Been slower this week, but still truckin' along. TCATS - Chapter 18 +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 14

I'm back again! And about time, too. I'd been considering moving over to FFnet to continue for a while, but never found the proper moment, but now that the story's continuing here, I've got no excuse. Chapter 18, here I go. GeL security footage of Curio being bathed GeL security footage of...

Dragon's Dance, Chapter 2! +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 12

It's been 3000 years but here I am for chapter 2! Aw. This is really touching. and i freakin CALLED this lmao no regrets The word choice of "shriek" was a bit too visceral for me and I thought someone actually shrieked until I read more carefully. Ah, nice. I really like this part -...

Well, it follows the same logic as my other PMDesque fics, in which ferals and civilized pokémon are different species altogether, with a feral and civilized variants for every pokémon species we know. Feral pokémon are non-sapient or, as the exact threshold for sapience is debatable, much less...

I have not, but that is a good idea. I used to be afraid of drawing humans and unfamiliar poses, but I may have the courage to tackle it nowadays. The quote "it doesn’t break beautifully" is the core of his argument. He thinks birds are more beautiful intact than broken, since they've got...

Oh my goodness I am being spoiled with all these reviews. :O Mass reply time! Plant matter in general I think was my idea. I hear crabs are pretty much nature's garbage disposals, but to make the famine more sensible, I'm restricting it to flora. Ah, it appears that I wrote this section...

Reviewed Chapter 1 of A Home Far Away! +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 8 And through my art prize contribution, I should get +2 to my score, bringing it to 10. I'd like to claim a companion Pokémon, but I haven't managed to decide what mon I'd like yet - I'll need some time to...

Hey there! Read Chapter 1, here are my thoughts. This felt like kind of a strange question to ask...? Were I to find myself in that scenario, I'd assume it was trash someone threw away, and its origins wouldn't really interest me any more than a stray glove's. This feels kind of off here...

finished art prize for @windskull of muse the absol! click to view on deviantart.

Reviewed the prologue of PMD: Path of Valor. +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 6

Hey! I'd been wondering for a while if I should check this story out, since I know Guiding Light didn't go so well for me and I kind of felt bad about that. Now with the Blitz, though, might as well! I've read the prologue, and here are my thoughts. ohhh god i'm going to read all the following...

Well, I'm sufficiently far enough in the story now that I can decide to split the rest into two for a total of three parts. The final may be shorter than the others, but I'd rather have it that way than have the second part be much longer than the first. Anyway, rated PG still. This part...

logging another one! Iktsuarpok +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 4