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"This is starting to get a little serious!" Namo took a worried step back, but his Pokemon--aside from Hecto--stood in front, ready for the final stand. "Focus, author," Hecto warned. "Your powers are clearly doing something to help them, just like all the other fallers. It's about time you do...

So, I feel that the first scene went on for a bit longer than it probably needed to. We’ve kinda already seen fights going on, y’know? But that might just be my bias against repeats of mook fights/training montages. Definitely in favor of summarizing or having them happen offscreen at this...

Throughout the entire trip and breaks and all the training, Namo did barely a thing besides send basic commands. No, he was too busy staring at his phone, and Hecto began to wonder if this was the usual trend when he lived his normal life, too. Hecto stared at Namo, sparing a few glances at his...

Chapter 11 – Moving In Kricketot chirped in the bushes. No moon filled the sky, but tiny white pinpricks, painted on the sky, took its place. Amia, with Alex beside her, led the way home with Owen and Zena. There was a little spring in the Gardevoir’s step. Owen’s tail and his Magmortar...

Why was being polite such a struggle? Still, he knew he had to get things done. So while Sophocles spoke, Namo found his eyes quietly drifting down to his phone; he was so absorbed in explaining himself that he probably didn't even realize that nobody had his attention anymore. Even Hecto's...

Hiya Umbra! I regret not picking up this work sooner. In any case, here's my stuff. Pick a chapter, any chapter -- I hope it can get you interested enough to keep reading in the future! Hands of Creation

I regret not reading this sooner. The zany humor of gods going on vacation is literally right up my alley, and I can't wait to see where this is going to take me, since I don't think it's going to quite be your simple vacation~ But first, I'm just going to take some time to read the opening...

Chapter 10 – The Hunters’ Mission “But… but Rhys is cool,” Owen said. The Charmeleon had stopped walking the moment Zena told him that Rhys was a Hunter. It simply didn’t make sense. No… no, it did. It added up. But it didn’t make sense to Owen anyway. Rhys was too noble. He was an Elite...

Jade, you gotta study up a bit more on basic attacks. If the Chinese can learn over 1000 characters as the basics of their language, surely you can learn a couple hundred common techniques! -- Alright, so full disclosure: I liked this chapter a lot more than the previous one, mostly because...

"Well, this shouldn't be too hard. Just a hundred words..." Namo sighed, rubbing his forehead. Falling from the sky was pretty rough, but at least he landed on something soft. Even if the Snorlax wasn't too happy about it afterward. Thankfully, he still had his phone, even if it held no signal...

You know, all things considered, I don't think this was a particularly bad chapter as you had been worrying about on discord. Yeah, there was definitely a tonal shift, but I think whatever revisions or adjustments you may have done either now or prior helped to make that shift a bit more...

Alright, time to die. Here they all are. Sorry for the dump, but I procrastinated hard on this due to everything else I've been juggling~ I can't believe I did them all. Sure, I'm a half hour late (my time) but I'll take it. I should probably take a look at what some of you have put here next...

Chapter 9 – Lonely Waters No wild Pokémon resided within these glowing caves. Unsurprising. There wasn’t much food, and it was on a strange offshoot of a Dungeon. Not the easiest place to find, let alone inhabit. Even if they showed up, perhaps the spirits would frighten them away. Owen walked...

Gotta catch 'em all, Poke Bombs! -- So, I don't have a lot of overall thoughts on this chapter -- we're approaching another tense action chapter that can more or less be quickly summarized with its action beats. But overall, I thought it was a clever combination of stealth and actual fighting...

Ahh, that's a fun one! Well, the thing about humans is that they're so far gone that the myths have become somewhat nebulous. Some just know that "humans" once existed, but what they looked like, what they did, or anything of the sort was completely lost to time. One myth is that humans were...

Whoops, must've missed you. I'll edit you in!

Hey all, it's well past the 21st, so I'm gonna start arranging for things on my end. I'll be sending all PMD corpse participants a DM shortly to make sure everyone is on board! To clarify, that will be: @Umbramatic @The Walrein @Keleri @Chibi Pika @Negrek, @DeliriousAbsol, and @Phoenixsong I'm...

I suppose your first half was on the slower side, but I think enough happened in this chapter to make up for it in the second half, all things considered. Overall, I see what you mean about this being more stealth-based than the plane arc. I'm not really sure where it's going to go or exactly...

Ohh why not. I'll step in, too! But only for one. - Anything goes (I'm running the PMD one, so I can't participate in it) - I'm pretty much always free - I'll gladly initiate if nobody else is eager!

Chapter 8 – A Thousand-Heart Secret “I’m a PLANT!” Owen screeched, grabbing his chest and tugging gently at the feather-like arrangement of leaves that covered his body. He yelped when he realized that it was a lot easier to pull them away than he had expected. One of the leaves fell to the...