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[This post is reserved in case I may ever need extra space or want to organize things into two major sections] Also, this is a place where I'll ask explicitly: Tell me what to add, what things to move around, corrections, clarifications... everything! Especially from beginner readers who need...

Hey everyone! This is a simple guide specialized toward readers who want to get into a PMD fanfic, but don’t know enough about PMD to follow or, more importantly, feel like they wouldn’t be able to enjoy the work as much if they didn’t know about the basic canon. In this guide I will be going...

Oh that was fast! Okay uhhh I guess that means it's my turn next. I've got a drawing, now let's get to reviewing. @Umbramatic ! You've always been asking for a kick to get into HoC again, so this is it. I'll be grabbing your review for whatever chapter you're next up to read, or whatever you...

Alright, I procrastinated way too long on this. Let's rev up that analysis machine! @Persephone You currently hold the record for the weakest team on the entire sheet, with a staggering team score of 625! Mel and Repeat, who are dubbed as "not good fighters," have a team score of 746, by...

Aaaaaaaa Okay well, I guess it's time I get to selecting my prize! So, for mine I've pretty much been eyeing this person for a whiiiile but never really got around to actually asking for anything (partly because I don't know when commissions open or anything like that) So I guess with that out...

And done, personal goal achieved! Read the latest chapter of Soul Dissonance. Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >500, 3 Total: 10 Final total: 307

Ahhh yes, chapter one! Nice! Don't go rebooting this again, now. And so we see Marni. Full disclosure to other readers, I'm already pretty familiar with Marni because of some campaigns that we've done together, but it's nice to finally see her as she's intended! Overall, this was a nice, slow...

And caught up on Land of the Roses! Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >500, 3 Total: 10 Grand total: 297 Tomorrow morning I gotta find one more thing to break 300. Like I said... somewhere... That's my silly goal.

(6, prologue II) Wow, chapter 6. What a dense chapter—I think more happened in this chapter than all the others, aside from the interview itself. Not only do we get to the farm, talk with the farmer, get info, and then investigate the cattle feed, but we even get an introduction to the R-Kit...

Next goal: Catching up on Land of the Roses Almost there! Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >500, 3 Total: 10 Grand total: 287

(4~6) I’ll echo Kint’s thoughts on a few of these chapters—this feels like one elaborate test for Andrea and part of an extended interview. I mean, that’s more or less what I thought the moment they asked her to come along with them as some kind of unpaid intern, but it was still curious that...

All caught up with Seiren! Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >800, 3 Total: 10 Running: 277

(8-10) I ended up reading all three of these chapters at once, which, at the time, made me completely caught up with what’s been posted to TR! I think I actually have something more useful and constructive this time around, now that I’m entirely caught up, too. First: I think Akai got exposed...

Catching up on Seiren... Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >600, 3 Total: 10 Running: 267

(6, 7) I don’t have a lot to comment on for these two chapters in terms of specific scenes so much as key moments. First off, most of the exchange between Shirlee and Akai, and particularly his phone, both went on for a while but didn’t really give off the impression of dragging, at least not...

Okay here we go. Two more to top off the week! Broken Things Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >300, 2 Total: 9 The Origin of Storms (all caught up on TR!) Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >600, 3 Total: 10 Running total: 257

(11, 12) And now I’m all caught up with this story on TR! As of now, at least. I’d like to point out that Karo is a funny one to meet—I think I forgot to mention this in my last review, but he’s a nice dose of comedy that I think was really needed in this story so it’s not too heavy. I think...

(Chapter 2) Coming back to this, I'm kind of surprised that we're only one chapter in and we've already switched perspectives... in a story that's in second person. I still hold by the fact that this is an extraordinarily weird design choice. I guess that's all I can really say about it since...

Getting a few in now and hopefully a few in after I wake up, but... Another for The Origin of Storms Base 3 Weekly 4 Words >600, 3 Total: 10 And for Seiren again Base 3 Weekly 4 Words >600, 3 Total: 10 Running total: 238

(7 ~ 10) And a change of pace we had! I don’t really know where to begin with this one, so I guess I’ll just start with what happened right after this—so, a human! An actual human! To be honest, I’m kind of surprised at how muted this scene was, all things considered. You’d think the reaction...