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(chapter 3 ~ 5) Ahhh, and HERE we go with the creeping madness. I think I see what you’re doing here. Start things off subtle and show that Akai isn’t totally insane at first and has at least some brief bouts of lucidity to go with. But then we’re a few more chapters in, and suddenly bam, there...

Continuing the trend, we've got another for The Origin of Storms Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >700, +3 Total: 10 And then, of course, I've also returned to Seiren Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >500, +3 Total: 10 Running total: 218

(Chapter 2) Okay so I still want to pet Akai, but he’s definitely a little bit on the weird side. I sort of got the vibes early on, but they were never really strongly or fully out front until now how obsessive he truly was over Helix, let alone his “ritual room” or the, uh, his buddies in...

(Chapters 4 ~ 6) These ones were pretty well connected (and a pretty irritating cliffhanger in the middle of a scene, by the way—I’ve got other things I need to do that I can’t get to it right now!!) that left me easily flowing from one chapter to the next. For being such a lowkey story so far...

Thanks for the feedback again, Adam! Glad you're enjoying yourself and the story's picking up for you. Chapter 20 – Blade and Fist Large mounds of dirt moved on their own, floating in the air. Little particles fell to the ground, collecting near the bottom of this forcefield. The evening sun...

Clearing up the last of my list before the switch to next week... I finally got to Salvage! Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >200, +2 Total: 9 Bad Idea was also a fun little drabble. Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >300, +2 Total: 9 And finally, Damaged Goods. God, we need another Orre game. Base: 3 Weekly...

AAAAAH! Orre! Orre! ORRE! Okay, excitement over, let’s actually take a look at what we’re doing here. So, Wes, Shadow Quilava, I think it was a good choice to just quietly ignore that Makuhita for the time being since Quilava has more symbolism as, you know a starter Pokémon. I also really...

Short story, short review, but I'll just say that in an effort to keep things absolutely focused on a single scene--surely this entire series of events didn't last longer than small handful of minutes--you managed to allude to little glimpses of Karo's personality, and even a bit of world...

(Chapter 1) Alright, time to finally take a look at this! The first thing that comes to mind when reading the first chapter, which kind of feels like a prologue with how distant the prose feels, is that while the actual prose is really nice, I think the distance and intentional vagueness of...

Got a few reviews in to end the work week. First, Misfit's Land of the Roses Base: +3 Weekly: Nope Words: >500, +3 Total: +6 And also, Negrek's Little God Base: +3 Weekly +4 Words: >500, +3 Total: 10 Running total: 171

(Part 1 ~ 2) Alright. I reviewed a few of your shorter works in the past, so this is more of the same! Although this time it’s not a one shot, but a short-shot. So I guess you could say that’s a promotion. In any case, I think this is a cute work so far! Sure, a bit of a foregone conclusion for...

(Prologue ~ Chapter 3) You know, I kinda wish I paid more attention to the sort of writing you talk about in discord, because if I knew this was the sort of writing you did for fanfiction, I think I would’ve hit it up sooner. Compared to the high fantasy tales other works love to do—to no fault...

"Now, this is a fascinating place," an Alakazam remarked, stepping into the coliseum. "So, the only way out is to perform a dare? Or a truth, I suppose, hmm..." The audience in the stands watched curiously. "Hey, Nevren!" someone shouted from the left. "Ah?" He turned, spotting a bright-eyed...

Titles are things that I don't really put an inordinate amount of time in. I have a little bit of cleverness to it, but I guess I put my efforts into the plot more than what I wrap it in. That being said, I guess I have some reasoning behind the names I give things~ I guess we'll get the big...

New Years is a mess, but I was able to at least squeeze in some time for a bit more reviewing. First, expanding my horizons further with Umbra's Heroes After All Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: A smidge above 600, +3 Total: 10 Grand total: 155

(Prologue, chapter 1) Iiinteresting. So, I had no idea which movie you were referring to at first, so I ended up checking that out... Mystery of Mew--alright, so Lucario and aura powers, sweet! I'm a fan of those things, mostly because it can get pretty haywire, but it's so loosely bound that...

Starting off tonight with a bit of Seiren Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >500, +3 Total: 10 I was also curious and also took a look at Windskull's Non-Pokemon work posted here Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: Just under 500, +2 Total: 9 Grand total: 145

I mean, Anti-Bravo works just fine. -- Hey, Wind! I know nothing about this fandom at all, but I do know a little bit about Katamari, at least! So, I thought this was a touching little story. The subject was mostly focused (mostly, I'll get to that later) and it didn't really dillydally once...

(Prologue, chapter 1) Well, based on your judgement, I’ve finally decided to get into reading your work—but for real this time, starting with Seiren! I don’t know what to expect from this at all, to be honest, so despite all the references you make, the only thing I know to expect is that Red...

Thanks for the review, @Equitia and @qva ! I direct messaged you on discord some specifics about the beginning, Equita, since I'm particularly interested in polishing that up to make it more clear that it ISN'T a dream while still not dragging out that opener more than it needs to be. It's a...