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Chapter 1 Blitz review Someone released our prospective protagonist on smogen. And we are at the dreaded hm tm make and break build up of a team. Dismay feels like a legit reaction. Especially when finding our trainer p.o.v. is a working class soul. Though Gemma seems nice enough to supply...

Hi spiteful figure I'd review your newest piece for the blitz before I tackled fledglings to unclog the tag so here we are. Aw our p.o.v. was a test subject kiddo. Man thats a rough set of nightmares to be facing down. Seems like they have someone to wake them up. Assuming the call of the...

Blitz chapter 2 review So we got another p.o.v we're exploring? Alright lets go. Someone sounds hungry. And in less then five lines we kmkw, hungry, sweet tooth, and klepto. Nice. From the floating line i suspect we got a ghost type lets see. Called it. Hello shippet cliff hamger from...

as you post more i'll keep an eye out. Its an interesting premiss amd the fact the protag kinda did it to himself is fitting and adds to its alure.

chapter 1 review for the blitz. Ohf precog is a blessing. Many societies would argue but it'll be interesting to see how mon tackle it. Definitly the sight beyond thier egg is a case of alien sky. Still its a pretty one... But if this sight also forshadows the mons death it sounds like...

Hi here for the blitz, lets get started Chapter 1 review I have to admit the title caught my interest. Lets see how the tale holds up. Well thats a crash in hello. Well Az and Elec are crashing through the brush thier persuers are bashing through everything else by the sound of it. They are...

Review chapter 1 Blitz event Figure I'd try a non-mon piece this time. And so we start our avenue dwelling on the war like nature of humanity? I doubt this will be a slice of life piece. And we go from abstract to a pitched battle. With ghosts from the sky and spirit allies? Reminds me of...

Part 3 Blitz review Well at least hes not totally plowing in fully stupid. Only partially stupid. Nice to see hes found the turn back sign and dickering a tiny bit. Still sorta Tish had lied to him. Wonder why she didn't. And you can see the utter self destruction in play. Obsession is an...

Chapter 2 blitz review Back for mr. Ramlbes part two, and i am guessing this is where the title starts to drop. As in the actual sabatical begins since chapter one seemed a "last day of work" vibe to be honest. Amd we hit the brick wall of "how am i going to stand out? When each region has a...

hi here for the blitz Chapter 1 Another hard hitting question intro. Seems to be a theme today. This lads gpt a case of cold feet by the sound of it amd breaks off enough the beaten path to do something about it... Only to find mortal peril i guess? Makes for an interesting hook to say the...

Well my old trick of copy/paste via reply is not working so appologize if this review reaction gets out of order i guess. Review blitz chapter 1 So i suspect Maxim is our p.o.v. character. Interesting that from the questions they are asking, what they did, and why and how it's phrased... All...

Hi kiba i am here for the blitz, lets get started Chapter 1 Ah the question of the ages. And a title drop all in one stab. Nice. From the four floors down line i am going to say i suspect that we're in a mystery dungeon. I have to admit at the "rich trees" line I kept imagining animal...

Corinthians 15:10 part 4 The ride was made in silence, Surge pulling out and prepping his guns while Giovanni stared out the window, watching the world roll by. It wasn't much of a view, a smokey grey landscape courtesy of tinting and Reflect and Lightscreen being imprinted over the glass...

Chapter 1 Blitz review Yay a xeno fic with humans being the oddball out this should be interesting. Love how we get dropped into the clinic setting as "now what" roosts into everyone's minds. And with their sleep interrupted and moral obligations I'm not expecting the clearest decisions...

Hi nekodatta i'm here for blitz time. Chapter 1 So yay, Turing reference. As a computer history nerd i've got a soft spot for things like that. Also AI stories are a favorite of mine so now that my expectations are laid out, lets go. so Sada and Turo are married? Interesting, and adds...

Chapter 3 Review blitz So this tale might boil down to Sabi gets tricked. She's a kid so it is understandable (i had to go to bulbpedia to get that data by the way). Still it sounds like she is getting blitzed by something nasty. The time skip makes me think of the time gear for some reason...

Chapter 2 Blitz review With a name like mirelands and descriptors like murky i hope Charm has some luck getting to that upper ground...i personally would settle for stationary dry ground as the surroundings put to mind of a fen bog and both those traits are rarer then high ground in a tronce...

Chapter 1 Review blitz Hi erazonpo3 welcome to the forums (belatedly) and to the blitz. So right out the gate we are in Galaxy land archaic version. I'm not surprised that blackjack has combed over this and gotta admit that them dropping a line bopped this to near the top of my to-read list...

Chapter 14 Blitz review Cue the dream. I suspect Eriks gunna develop a fear of precussion sets or maybe the mon version of the band "smash" I see darkrai redecorated again. Wonder why... And if Erik doesn't keep a bead on the blob and darkrai he's earming am a plus in bad life choices...

Chapter 13 Blitz review And drumroll please, the catchathon and namimg results are in. In closing. Shank should not name thier own children ever. I can't suss the signifigence of Mollys names for her team besides they sound pretty. And i'm expecting Eriks team to sound like he's...