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So we get gio's back story. I called it in that he was from mundane land. And for simplicitys sake we are sticking with gio as his real life names too much of a mouthful to bother with and old habbits die hard. So emmet not only got shunted along to arceus timeline world but modern l.a. as...

Yes shank, ask the million dollar question. Why a leaf stone? Why a leafon? (I mean really a grass type, not that i have prejudices but i guess i do.) Laughs. I see i triggered some lantant despicable me vibes her. Fish gun anyone? Love how salts just rolling with it and i hope erick...

Review blitz full story comentary Honestly, I've dipped in and out of this story and series since i joined the site. I like the premiss of evil red. And a protag dealing with the aftermath of a deeply psychological scarring experience by latching onto a malovent god figure to cope and a...

Chapter 2 blitz review Hi so this isnt a one-shot now? Whoops... Alright lets hit this up for chapter two i guess. So we have initial contact. I wonder what feels off to make the ai move so gingerly as after last chapters revelation that Turo is as oblivious as Sada would like. Yeah sada...

Welcome aboard. Don't know if anyones flagged you yet but we're in the center of a review event. Feel free to join in, meet other writers, and maybe win prizes. Blitz info Or heck if you have some chapters feel free to toss them on the forum and get some feedback. Its basicslly a feeding...

a shame i noticed this first... Its such a nice wish i need to corrupt now... (I'd like my plush back) Granted. You get the whole shebang. Mysterious voice. Colorful void. Orange scarf. Personality test that routes you to a fitting mon youre happy to inhabbit... The light brightens...

Chapter 6 Review blitz Ohh we got a report hitting the bad guys desk. By strutting i am guessing yurliks a bird type. Possibly a serving dark type murkrow? A honchkrow actually considering it had to haul the dead bits and bodies. That must of been an adventure. So ghost types are serving...

Chapter 5 Blitz review Tinker this might be foreshadowing... Maybe time to pack a getaway bag and... Oh wait tinker nailed you to mischief... Nevermind. Cleo: you really can't stop eating, and must only eat your favorites... Because of this new confuz status. Sparks: yep! Yeah cleos...

I vote host one last harrah at the waterfal, prioritize fire type guests because why not. (I mean if we are getting exiled lets hoop it up one more time)

chapter 4 Blitz review Just one worrying development? Why such a low amount? i'm sure spark and cleo can think of like nine at this point. The first one that leaps into my mind... The area around them being on fire. I suppose its an odd tangent but in irish mythology's cait sith was a...

Heh so gios a refugee from the real world. I wonder how long hes been stuck since hes practically coming unglued by this hitch in the plan. I mean opening fire on a fire type? Beter hope oh-ho doesnt counter with a flamethrower considering the gasoline that keeps a chopter afloat... He stole...

Chapter 3 reaction Review blitz I doubt cleos peace and quiet hikes gunna hold up anymore.... yep. No sleep and no peace though for now mischief still seems benign tjier paranoia is costing them. And i wager her chatters all day long to further drive them up the wall. mischiefs word choice...

Blitz review Chapter 2 And we are back with cleo. I wondered how much spark knows what went doen between cleo and the guide head... From his chill reaction this morning i suspect nothing. Granted "quite a spread" from something the size of a yarn ball is like theee berries on a plate...

Chapter 20 Blitz review The flash backs a good way to bring people up to speed on the previous seasons. I means theres been over 200 episodes and as someone who tapped out of the anime season two it helps so much. We flip from exposition to back to interpol and musing on how the public...

well the field on fire was kinda drab so you set tinfoil wrapped popcorn bombs with the second one to liven it up... Wasnt your fault society didnt appreciate your mass holiday outdoor cooking event.

Hey as theres two petes we are off the hook. Also if moma closses we got ice type advantage. We should chill like a piloswine and let this blow through... After all whats the psychic going to do... Claim there was an act of arceus that whisked her kid into another mon. Guess she was notified...

Chapter 19 Review blitz Its interesting to see the world building in play. Yes gym leaders are athletes. But so much more. I imagine clamps will be slapped down after all this boils over but for now theyre all but untouchable. Which is part and partial of interpols problems. I suspect per...

Were gunna need that escape right about now... But the keys are across the room from the picture... Still mr. Shellshocked might have a spare. Thief time and then tailwind out?

Chapter 18 Blitz review While not smooth as there are so many civilians and security needing medical treatment and therepy, plus lat' belly flopping in the streets to off grunts, i suspect that alolas using guz' to sweep the damage under the rug but theres so many holes in the plan and my...

Persian reaction Blitz review I figure i'd close my blitz pokedex run in my favorite cat'mon. I mean really is it no surprise (gestures to avatar, banner, and first 'mon on my companion train) No latin name huh, ah well. Laughs. I love how the kings all "take the bloody things!" And the...