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Fic: Foregone Conclusion Link to fic: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/foregone-conclusion.809/post-50819 Chapters: 3 Weekly theme: yes!

Hello! I'm here for Blitz, and my plan is to cover the first part/three chapters of this. They're good! I liked 'em. For whatever reason, fics like this where all the characters are pokémon (PMD or no, and this distinctly isn't) don't usually end up hooking me all that much — through no fault of...

Fic title: envy of eden Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-envy-of-eden.351/post-50781 No. of chapters: 3 Weekly theme: no

So Blitz is here! My top priority is getting caught up and finished with this fic, and my plan is to do this in two installments. This is the first, spanning noogenesis through nocturne — so, without further ado: I'm fairly certain you alluded to this (or something like it) in your post-finale...

Very glad that members of this vaunted, right-minded forum are talking about the real battles at the heart of Pokémon: the battle for God, the nuclear family, and the right of a hard-working, honest businessman to distribute his Pez® dispenser as he so pleases (as opposed to the entitled...

Goals for the Blitz: Finish/catch up on: envy of eden, Dragon's Dance, White Swan Black Swan, Hunter Haunted Start: Of Sand and Shadows, Foregone Conclusion, Salvage Probably aim to get a few oneshots in there too Greatly honoured to see my fic pop up on... uh, any list at all, really; I hope...

Hello! Nice to see you here again, even if only temporarily, and I'm once again glad to hear that your original work is serving you well. :> Of your work, I'd still only read the first few chapters of TCaTS (which, really, is my bad; I did like those chapters, and I have been missing out!), and...

CHAPTER SIX: Return from Elsewhere The two ruby eyes, each as big as a distant moon, belonged to a grey giant the size of a mountain. Its body snaked down from above Florence’s platform to… she couldn’t see where it ended. Its many wings arched from the sides of its back like jagged fingers...

Hey! Thanks for the review. :> Thank you! That first line was definitely my intention; happy that that the bewilderment of it all came across. I'm also happy to hear that the imagery came out clearly. Yeaaaaah, dedicating the first chapter to that was very much a deliberate choice, sadly. :P...

Hello! This is the fic I was assigned to review in the Catnip draw. I'm not familiar with Identity, so this is my first exposure to these characters. Going off what you've said about that story, I was expecting this one to be fairly fluff-heavy. This ended up being the case! You've clearly put a...

Heyo! The summary for this one had me interested, and the general premise for this one (fakemon legendaries with blood powers based on the Seven Deadly Sins? 👀 👀 👀) -- plus the impression I'd gotten of Odette from general chatter (small, has capital-p Problems, will crush you if you look at her...

Yo, this is a hell of a comment; thank you so much! :] I'm very glad to hear that this mythos-heavy kind of story is your thing. A fun anecdote, actually; the first time Dragon's Dance got recommended to me, it was after I'd scrapped the first draft of this fic but before I'd started work on the...

Hey! Reporting back for the review exchange, coming off the second half of chapter three. It turns out I remembered everything after chapter two much less than I thought I did, haha; it's something you allude to early on, of course, but it caught me by genuine surprise when Toku evolved as early...

Helix @ Red before the prologue: Anyway! I've heard enough about this story that I thought I'd drop by and offer some thoughts on where I've read up to so far (which is to say, the original prologue and the first two chapters). First off, I know I'm not the first to comment on how vivid the...

Reporting back from necktie this time! I think much of what I wanted to say has been said by others, tbh, but I'll try to add what I can. A big thing that I like about this run of chapters is that the sea of changing perspectives really comes into its own in a different way here: it adds an...

So far, I'm enjoying this! The conceit behind Cash's journey is one I've not really seen tried before, but it's interesting enough that I want to see how things play out there, for both her and Red (and I notice that this is a slow burn, too! 👀). I think so far you've executed that pretty well...

First things first, completely enamoured with the image of middle-aged badass Prim, who's seen enough in her many years and is just too tired for this, showing up and booting the zoroark all "go on! git!" in whatever the Kalois equivalent of that accent is. This is basically what happens here...

Aw, this is really sweet! :] I'm extremely partial to the genre of "lost kids attempt to logic themselves out of being lost", and young Steven Stone is absolutely someone I can buy into being like that. You do a really good job of setting his character up in the first couple of sentences here...

CHAPTER FIVE: No Static At All Connor found himself inside another room. What did the architect in charge have for liminal spaces? Mordred wasn’t there, at least. Nor was the suffocating Malice. He appreciated the respite; it gave him room to look around without feeling like death. He sat on a...