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Hi! Here to review the Auld Lang Syne chapter for catnip, and also Blitz but editing this after the fact, this took me a bit longer than I had anticipated. More broad thoughts are in the line-by-line section but a brief overview of my thoughts: - The plot of this was somewhat endearing; I had...

Heya! Here for Blitz; reviewing the prologue and chapters seven + eight. (My intent is to get this finished before Blitz is over; I had planned to do nine as well, but it turns out I was rustier at writing reviews than first thought and ended up spending entirely too long getting this done. I'll...

Thank you all for the comments; they were very insightful! I'll try to implement some appropriate line-by-line changes based on the feedback whenever I am able, which'll hopefully be before the end of the week. As for chapter two: I can't say when that'll be at this point, but hopefully...

0. I’ve seen it all I’ve seen it all; every so often some poor soul will tell you they know everything there is to know like they’ve scouted out every angle and consulted every source and unearthed every secret in all the world but I believe I speak with authority when I say that I have seen...

(artist: seaquestions) (...formerly known as Hey, Space Cadet!. Title taken from "The Rip," by Portishead.) Summary: Content Warnings: Broad strokes for the story as a whole: queerphobia; references to settler-colonialism; references to intrusive thoughts and non-graphic discussion of...

About to start redrafting and revising these six chapters, which gives me a handy excuse to finally reply to the feedback y'all have given. Before I do that, some little author's notes on my progress and my intent for future chapters/revisions: It looks like I'm going to end up condensing the...

Hello! I'm here to tell you how much I enjoyed chapters four and five of this one, which I had wanted to get read later in Blitz and then sadly became busy -- but, happily, I still get to talk about them anyway. They're really good! I appreciate the balance you strike here: we're still in the...

Level of prize: level 2 Type of prize: misc. (drabble/flash fiction) Preferred method of contact: fine with either Discord DMs or a PM through here!

Fic title: Delivery Deferred Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/delivery-deferred.983/#post-52490 Chapters: one Theme: yes Fic title: Wandersword Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/wandersword-redux.606/page-2#post-52525 Chapters: one Theme: yes I...

Heya! Saw you had a new chapter out, and what better time to leave thoughts on it than while Blitz is ongoing. Congrats on the update! Most of my thoughts about what I thought really worked here are expressed under the cut, but just in general, this is a great elaboration on both the dynamic...

I'd been meaning to get to this in an earlier week of Blitz, but what the heck, it still counts for this one's bonus. And I'm very happy I got round to it, because as has been commented on by everyone else, it's a delightful little read. You do a good job of evoking the sort of world this one...

Among other things, college has gotten in the way of my ability to get basically any reviewing done for the last two weeks, though I do want to get to 65 points total by the end of the event and plan to get back on the horse before the timer runs out. Absolutely delightful to see everyone light...

Did not get much reading done this week, but my rec is Butterfree! I thought this was an excellent story about growing up, accepting and trying to mend the mistakes of the past, fixing wrongs made with old friends, and ultimately working towards a healthier relationship with people you...

Fic title: 26 years Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/26-years.757/post-51714 Chapters: 3 (technically covers the first four chapters, but chapter 2 shares a post with chapter 3 and just barely crosses the 250 word mark so I don't think it counts?) Theme: no

Hello! Here for Catnip, but also, I'd heard enough about the premise that I'm glad I was able to check it out at some point. Reporting back from the end of chapter four. You know that I am, of course, a sucker for disorienting and deeply abnormal things happening to poor, unwitting protagonists...

Fic title: Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Path of Valor Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pok%C3%A9mon-mystery-dungeon-path-of-valor.370/post-51704 Chapters: 3 Theme: no

Heyo! Here for Catnip; going over the prologue and the first two chapters. As far as story openings go, I liked this a lot, and didn't really think I had any trouble following what was going on. In the prologue, three legendary birds have to guard the Needle as per the assignment of Queen Isola...

Ah geez, Blitz has really left me spoiled, hasn't it? :V Here are some review responses. Just in general: there are changes suggested by some of you that I still want to implement that aren't addressed here, but I have noted them and will be sure to put them in when I eventually revise these...