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Reviewed chapter ten of the envy of eden.

Reviewed chapter ten of the envy of eden. +1 1048 words +1 theme

Ah, Zoroark! Lovely. Also love to hear about what stories the humans tell as a contrast to what the Pokémon do. You've got an extra word in here. haha, nice Ha, neat. I love how abstract and mythological this is, this notion that Zorua has the power of lies and a human could learn from it to...

"I haven't. But I remember Dave telling me about this game after he was in it. It's not a real memory but it must have been put there by the gamemakers, to explain how it works." Did this mean the Delphox wasn't responsible for the memory modification? "He had almost the same ability, to talk to...

"He already said that it was only yes or no."

Mia watched them squabble back and forth. Why was everyone so stupid? She had already pointed out the problem twice. "Why do you all think that Squirt knew who killed him? If he didn't know, then if he could only say yes or no he would have said no, but it doesn't mean it wasn't them. In this...

Mia narrowed her eyes at him in irritation. "So what things could he say? If he couldn't say if he didn't know, then he would've said no even if it was one of them." She glanced at Jesse's chalkboard. "Why aren't I on the list?"

Mia frowned at Lee's information. "If Squirt was behind the door, then he's not really dead," she said. "Why wouldn't you open it?" Of course, this was a game where a lot of things didn't make sense. Dave in his game had been able to talk to ghosts, even though ghosts weren't real, and made no...

Turn 6: - Double Dip Sitrus Berry and Silver Spike @ Groudon - Double Dip Protect Orb and Cautious Seed - Assurance at Groudon; if Groudon and Shield have been defeated, Radiant Guard Brisa instead. - Run Away to back row

Turn 5: - Taunt x3 on Shield

They hadn't learned very much from this at all. The day seemed to have been a waste of time, in terms of figuring out the game. No one had done much. Voting to kill someone today would be no better than random chance. Meanwhile, according to Dave, during the night the 'mafia' would strike, and...

Mia narrowed her eyes. "What would happen if they lied in the dating game?"

For turn 4: - Taunt x2 on Shield - Assurance on Rayquaza

Read and reviewed one chapter of Pokémon: Legendary Adventures.

Reviewed one chapter of Pokémon: Legendary Adventures. +1 1070 words +1 theme

Hey there! I'm glad to finally get around to checking out this story, and deeply amused by the multiple hilarious similarities to my fic. :P I realize you said chapter one isn't very representative and you'd like feedback to be less focused on it, but unfortunately it's all I managed to read...

He was being frustratingly vague. "What did you do?"

While everyone else zeroed in on the nonsense about ending worlds, Mia was far more interested in the bit about invading minds. Could the Delphox plant memories?

"That doesn't make any sense," Mia said, and was about to begin to explain, but was immediately interrupted. She frowned. "That doesn't make any sense either. People have knives. And if you really needed a scythe, you need it less if you're dating a Scyther, because they could do it for you."