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Chapter Seven Shouts and screams came from the ship and Macro readied his laser as he dashed into the cockpit. He released it back into its holster and shook his head at the two pokemon rolling on the floor. “Please release me,” Download Database said, rather too calmly. “I must shut down and...

Chapter Six Macro’s sleep had been oddly dreamless, and as he woke up it took a moment or two for him to actually remember getting to his room. That pachirisu… Faint light penetrated the curtain and he kicked the sheets off and snatched up his small, pocket computer. Nine AM. He’d slept the...

Wow, I began reading this a while back and stopped. It's nice to see it being posted here, and I hope I can keep up with it :) Recapping the prologue and first chapter is great, since I do remember some of the later events and I'm enjoying noticing things mentioned earlier on that are sparking...

I'm all caught up now! And I'm really enjoying this. It's very sweet. Dang, that's ominous. I'm intrigued to know what this means. My first assumption is she's tried to save a human before? So... the cutest mew ever? =3 Yes. Aww man :( I can't help but think she's going to have a very...

Chapter Five The small tympole ship drifted slowly down into Spool City. Filthy, yellow grime coated the windows that from the outside served as the tadpole pokemon's eyes but from the inside were a crucial means to see where one was going. With barely enough time to kick the ship's hover...

Chapter Four "Cap'n! Cap'n!" Macro's eyes fluttered open and he pushed himself up, letting the light blankets fall off him onto his knees. Anchor stood in his bedroom doorway, scratching absently behind his left ear. "What is it?" the mawile asked as he rubbed a paw over his eyes. "I'm sorry...

Chapter Three Two sacks of laser components. Two bulging sacks. Macro sorted through them, neatly arranging the lasers, barrels, filters, gears, screws, coils and heat elements into piles. There wasn't enough parts to meet the laser types. He'd gone a bit overboard with those. But seeing the...

I'm totally all for a mafia! (I didn't last long at ALL last time XD). It was a lot of fun to follow, and I looked forward to updates to see who the mafia were. I already have a character idea I could use ;) Whereas I prefer full-on RP for story immersion, RP-optional would allow those who don't...

Chapter Two System Ground looked like a toy town from Wildcard Gamma’s exit hatch. Macro held on to one of the neon rails as he watched Wave City slowly move beneath them. From this height he could clearly make out the froth of the ocean as it lapped at the docks and cliff faces. Windmills...

A/N - This is a finished fanfiction I'm posting here upon request =) I'll take all feedback into consideration for later projects (I am currently working on a massive one that I'm really trying to do my best with, so all advice will be taken into consideration for current and future projects)...

I read the first two chapters so far, and I can really see such a huge improvement in your writing since the previous one! (And your writing was good back then already!) This is a fantastic re-write, and you really grow fond of Mew and Kuki's relationship over those two chapters. They're very...

Aww, this was heartwarming. I've not reached this point in TCatS yet, but it was nice to meet these characters. As always, your character creation is amazing. They both stand out and are memorable. Plus, a buneary playing with stuffed dolls is just adorable. I especially liked M. A brooding...

Well this is an interesting premise! I do enjoy PMD stories, so when this popped up in Discord I wanted to give it a read. It's a nice, long chapter too. I do like long reads =D I enjoyed the part with the online chat Babs was reading. The names were quirky and fun. The pokemon are all unique...

A/N - This will be the last chapter for a while, and I have no idea how long it will be. I'm picking up another project to hopefully see out the current Covid19 outbreak, which all being well will also be posted here. (I don't like not having a current project! It makes me antsy!) Please keep an...

I may need to think on this a bit more then. Without creating a fakemon species that he deviates from, I may need to do some playing around with the general premise. There is another 'legendary pokemon' in The End, Reshiram, but I never decided if there were multiples or not (and at the time...

This may be down to having such a big idea and so few words to cram it into. Yveltal's discovery of his stony death beam was down to his corruption from resentment and drawing blood. It was basically an image of death being brought into the world. Regarding your question on the 'punching bag'...

A/N - Some elements of this might be familiar to some readers. It's a story I've only ever brushed over in a much larger piece of work. The Myths and Legends contest prompted me to have a go at writing this, but unfortunately I was well over the word count and couldn't bring myself to butcher...

Ooh fifteen entries! That's fantastic =D I'll keep an eye open for when they drop in due time!

Unfortunately I won't be submitting as I've gone well over 10k and can't cut it down enough. The bits I'll be removing will be posted with the story to the forum anyway, and even then I'll still be over 10k. It feels like I'll be majorly butchering key elements =( and there doesn't seem to be...

My imagination is pretty vivid. Stories play out when I'm reading, like a video. The characters have their own voices, and I can visualize the characters quite well. Some voices get re-used, and I can sometimes trace them back to voice actors/actresses. Locations tend to be places I've...