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[/spoiler] Sep. 1999 “Don’t let up, Riptide! You have the type advantage! Use water gun!” No water gun comes. It’s nothing like the fights on TV. Silver can’t quite tell where the totodile ends and the cyndaquil begins as the pokémon roll over the crunchy brown grass, a writhing, biting...

NOOOO I DON'T WANNA BE AN OSTRICH!!! being an ostrich is fine actually. i don't care anymore --- sorry this is horrendously late. i could make excuses but instead i'll just review extra chapters. --- prologue - i see that in your review guidelines you request summaries of the chapters to...

gonna give this one an 8/10 as well. absolutely banger of a first line. i really liked the bittersweet, wistful feeling of this song—not in the sense that it's sentimental, but rather in that it's specifically unsentimental in its detached, wry delivery of what is actually a pretty bleak...

8/10. really good stuff, it's kind of giving The Strokes... the guy has a nice voice, a little understated but fits the sound well. the vibe was good, a little crunchy. none of the instruments really stood out—i'm curious what this group sounds like a little more stripped down, definitely going...

i'm weirdly nostalgic for this old forum game right now and love talking about music, so why not give it a shot? in this game, all you have to do is listen to the song in the post above you, post a rating (and optionally your thoughts), and then link a song of your own for the next user to...

you are on these reviews so quick, damn. thank you! some excellent excellent here and definitely some stuff to think about. i’m learning quickly the power of tiny chapters, they’re so comfy and easy to edit. this is good advice, thanks. i went back and forth on injecting another chapter before...

the citizen, i. - it feels really good to be back in this fic. i mentioned it in chat, but it's such a hard one to review because i don't want to pull myself out of it at all to react or even think—i just want to burn through it to the end, but that doesn't make for a very good review. your...

[/spoiler] Aug. 1999 Gemma’s nose is bleeding, elbowed by a police officer when she’d tried to squirm out of his grip. Her back hurts from sleeping outside. Shoulder hurts where the cop’s hand is digging into it, pushing her into the professor’s office. She grunts as he shoves her into a...

this is going to be a crazy hectic year for me IRL, so i'm reluctant to make any major commitments to shaking up my writing game, especially after my last couple years of resolutions have gone soooo well. but there are some things i want to change… write more - ok, i always do this one, but i...

uh huh. --- this review will mainly comment on the new additions to the story. the changes are really great, first of all. the story feels a lot more complete over all—there are some loose ends still, like how the story breaks or what maddy does with the money, but maddy's arc feels like it's...

RETURN OF THE BIMP LET'S FUCKING GO :letsgorb: -- 0 - hey jeeps! i apologize again for dropping the ball on betaing this—i underestimated how much i had going on fr fr, but in any event i'm sooo glad to sink my teeth into this fic again. the work you put into this rewrite definitely shows, and...

Mar. 1999 “Well done. Very well done.” He’s talking to Ariana, of course. He never sounds so proud when he’s talking to Gemma. Ariana was a good battler, to be fair, but Gemma hadn’t watched her fight. Couldn’t. The pidgey that Ariana’s oddish had defeated is an indistinct pile of claws and...

Oct. 1996 The television comes to life in the dark, snowy signal noise painting Gemma’s face with its pins-and-needles light, loud static crackling from the speakers. The light and sound might as well be a blaring siren in the living room, and she has to shake herself out of her momentary panic...

tarnishing A young trainer strives to become Pokémon League Champion the real way. How far can hard work and grit bring you? CW: Language, abuse, gore and graphic violence. - - - Chapter index Oct. 1996 Mar. 1999 Aug. 1999 Sep. 1999 Jun. 2000 Dec. 2001 Apr. 2003 Sep. 2005 Jan. 2006 Jul. 2007

The Gardevoir's Wish One-shot / 5.6k words / Rated T for language and mild crudeness - - - South of Fallarbor and about fifty miles east of Meteor Falls there is a clearing in the deepwild, and in that clearing stands a single inn several days’ hike from any other human habitation. The woods...