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Review reply time!! Rounding up all of chapter 1! If I forgot anything or you have a further question, hit me up on the discord! Two main notes! First, did you know that the image of Raga outside, waiting with ash piled on her back is based on this gorgeous fanart? (Also from Hawkosa). Two...

Chapter 2: Elegos (Greek: poem or song of lament) [Art credit: chibipika] "Alright, Raga! Dragonbreath!" At the sound of her trainer's command, Raga felt the telltale surge of power within her. She fluttered her four wings, buzzing in a rapid circle around her opponent, a Garchomp. His...

Do Psychic Pokemon Dream of Magic Sheep by @SparklingEspeon (Great PMD story btw, everyone should read!) Two kids find a smart phone they don't know how to use and skip school to play in the woods. Perfectly ordinary woods. Nothing bad happens.

This is just a really quick review. Very good chapter 2. We get to get a further glimpse into Odette and her life. We can clearly see there's something *off* about her though. The way she got so irrationally angry and responds to little things with a full on meltdown. I also really liked the...

Review reply time everyone!! First up, thank you to everyone who reviewed. Especially @IFBench and @Navarchu. Your memey and/or fun reviews really make me smile and lift my spirits. I tried to address everything I could, but due to length and time constraints, I'm just touching on some bigger...

Authors notes: So this is a little short story I wrote for a prompt some time ago, and I really fell in love with. It was one of those prompts where they just give you some random words and tell you to use them all in a story. This is the result. I want to one day turn this into a little...

So its pretty hard for me to wrap my mind around everything right now, but I just want to say, chibi made a really good point. We do need to ask what we hope to achieve with review blitz. I personally agree with this philosophy. I am a bit tired of the 1000+ reviews on chapter 1. Which still...

Oh! Also, I personally prefer some kind of nomination system. Like maybe everyone who participates could nominate one or two fics, like someone else on here suggested

I personally feel fine getting the ball rolling on picking a fic or at least discussing a way to pick. Maybe we could aim to start in feb?

Chapter 1: The Perfect Plan for the Perfect Team! Ruined by a Zubat? Chapter 2: A Shocking Encounter! New Friend? Chapter 3: Crushing Defeats and Hard Lessons! Zubat Forgives Koa!

I tried

This is semi related but it's funny you mention writing a thread about reviewing critiquing because that may or may not be something I'm working on...👀 I do want to say I really liked the topics and bonus stuff, I thought those were very good.

I personally feel like for an average fic though, 250 is a good baseline. It worked well for me and I think has a balance between length and content

I agree with dragonfree. 250 is not much but I do think scaling review length to chapter size is fair. To be honest, I'd feel very annoyed if I wrote 8k words but only got a fifty word review so I think I'd expect a proportional length review? In the sense thay if someone is taking time to...

I have uncovered the truth about @Chibi Pika 's LC. Jade's mom. Her true identity. Ever since I started reading LC I wondered... why does Jade not think about her mom much? And then when that incident at Viridian occurs. And Guess who's there??? Ho-Oh. Coincidence? I think not! Ridiculous...

SQUEEZE https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/different-eyes.323/post-20015 397 words, +1 theme!!! DIferent EYES WOOO

HHAHH I CAN DO THIS CHAPTER 2. This will be somewhat brief but I'll probably leave more thoughts another time. First up, chapter 2 is great. I can see a lot of the pacing and structure improvements you made. I think they're excellent. This version of the story is much clearer and the revisions...

Reviewed 26-31 of LC!! 1195 words, +1 theme https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-legendarian-chronicles.48/post-20006