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(Crossposting, because I wanted to add a few more thoughts and why not) I really enjoyed this! Jung is a precious bean and I love him! Poor Tupelo though, now I want a sequel where he can somehow find happiness and peace! The subtle use of cues and tells from Lilliane were superb. The way she...

This is certainly going to be a long road for poor Aaron, huh? I appreciate that though, I'm totally down for a protagonist who slowly becomes OP. You have more sprinkled bits or lore stuff in here that caught my eye, like the mention of timelines, how Mew is supposedly a very 'michievous'...

Another fun chapter! This time we get to meet Aaron's fellow squadmates and boy are they characters! You did great giving everyone a quirk and making them feel unique. I definitely wouldn't have trouble telling them apart. Callie is rather amusing to me! Also the mention of a Necrozma Cult is...

I have some thoughts about chapter 1. I'll do my best to compile them. I'll probably keep these reviews short and sweet because otherwise paralysis will make me take for EVER so. First up! I like the opening. You communicate a solid sense of disjointed chaos and confusion. There's a good amount...

Chapter 2 is read! I have to say, I personally enjoy a fic every now and then with short chapters. Given your preferred style I think the length works really well for you! I feel like you have a good handle on only including bits that feel necessary to the story you want to tell. I'm genuinely...

Chap 1 was honestly really fun! I think you did a good job capturing Aaron's character. You keep the child-like eagerness but I can already see that he also wants to do good and make a difference in the world. The start itself was very simple plotwise, but does exactly what it needs to imo...

Forgive my somewhat disjointed thoughts. Anyways you pace this story really nicely, lulls between fights, cool down just enough before revving up. For something intending to be a fast-paced actionfic you do a superb job with everything IMO. Onto more solid thoughts. Another good chapter, a very...

YOOOO A HOENN FAN!!! very pleased, also lovely sprite!

Time to address the finality! The turning point if you will, chapter 36. I've got to say, this was thoroughly enjoyable to finally have answers revealed. Interestingly enough though, nothing here really surprised me. But this isn't bad. I feel like the details revealed here feel like a natural...

Alright, gonna review 33, 34, 35! You're fairly far in the story and your writing and everything is honestly solid, so I probably won't give any hardcore critique, but rather my thoughts on the events of each chapter and how they were compiled. 33: I really enjoy the way you write your fight...

Alrighty, review time! I read all of arc 1 & 2, and reread a bit of the beginning, just to refresh myself. I'll admit, third omniscient is not my usual reading type, nor is slice of life PMD. However, I think you did a good job in those aspects. You definitely are right, I can clearly see that...

It's pretty exciting that I got your fic for catnip! I'm actually all caught up reading so I'm happy to be able to leave a review! First up, what a chapter! I think overall you do a good job pacing and splitting the chapters. Having short chapters is actually refreshing and works very well for...

First of I want to thank you greatly for your commentary and thoughts! I really wanted to communicated the emotionality of the battle, so I'm glad to know that hit home. And thanks for those little line edits! :ROFLMAO: I'll hotfix those little errors soon. I did want to discuss a little...

AAAHH good fic pls write thank you These little shorts bring me such a sense of peace and joy. Mewtwo eating a bagel... learning to overcome his past... the people are cruel they're curious.. bagel!!! I love this thank you

You actually legit made me tear up with happy tears 😭 lov. precious. gud thank you

One of my all time favorite scenes of Legendary Adventures is (semi spoilers)

Legendary Adventures is pretty straight forward. There are Legendaries and it strongly features adventures! Fun fact though, it used to be called New Horizons. because... idk. It was about discovering things I think. I settled on Legendary Adventures after I decided I wanted something that felt...

I discovered some hot new info folks, brought to you by the ever trepidacious Tetra. Today I'll be revealing massive spoilers for @unrepentantAuthor aka Jackie's long-running fanfic, DE, aka Different Eyes. If you are afraid of spoilers, mind-blowing facts or having your world turned upside...

Characters who are Fine, just Fine

No more, the gardener vowed. No more crushed saplings and destroyed berry plants. A great battle was waged, man against whirling purple bug. Dirt flew, traps were dug, and curses shouted. By the end the gardener stood, triumphant above a pitfall trap, Whirlipede trapped within. "You know, if...