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Remember how I promised I'd post that special POV after the iron island arc and then never posted anything... oops. Anyways, it was written but I wanted to try and polish it, plus I got busy. Without further ado, I present to you... Iron Will Keep moving... I will not fail. Zeraora drew...

Ended up reading the 'thief' arc and then forgetting to give commentary lol A good set of chapters!! I think the thief arc was in particular a lot of fun, it was cool to see the worldbuilding and crime solving actually at play, and see how various pokemon moves and powers get used...

Was bored, figured I'd do some quick replies For a long time I was allergic to adding any pokemon that were my top favs to my story because... it would be??? bias of me??? Idk I had a weird hangup for so long lol. Listen I needed to contrive a reason to have Koa go places :mewlulz:. In all...

Chapter 16! I'm sure a chapter named 'Thief' has nothing bad happen, right? Right? I loved that you brought back the Poliwrath character and that he got a chance to shine here! This was absolutely adorable. Golly, I gotta remember to try and add stuff like this too, its very nice. I like this...

The infamous self-indulgent band chapter! Chapter 14 I have so many THOUGHTS about this one, this one was fun! Chapter 15...

Chapter 13 I absolutely loved this whole exchange, especially getting some Kirsten POV!! (I hope there will be more in the future?). It's honestly fantastic to see a champion actively doing things, which works a lot better in fic than in games (go away leon, and let me handle this). Kind of...

Okay chapter 12! Judging by my react its actually this one and not 13 I stopped at! So Now I'll be caught up thoughts wise. A spicy chapter as the group continues to deal with the ghost issue from last chapter! yeah, ALEX smh, shoulda known better lol Anyways I don't have a ton of specific...

A quick run through of Chapter 11! I've been skimming these bc I definitely read at least 11 and 12 so I wanted to drop some surface level thoughts. I like this little detail, its a cute way to show their relationship and his awareness of her needs! I'll take "words you'll eat in a few...

I decided I felt like reading back a little and picking up where I left off for reviews so, here we go with Chapter 10! Just quick thoughts. So all through the fight it seems like you swap capitalization for pokemon. Which, big mood, I was stuck here and kept forgetting which variant I used...

Thank you so much for your reviews and comments! I really appreciate all of them. A few quick replies: Lost Tower: Yeah at the time of writing I was definitely going more game-y as an approach. If I were to provide a lore answer... Probably ghosts gather there because of spirit energy, but the...

The Mawile and Houndour were still going at it, everything Houdour said only made him more concerned. He wondered for a moment if it was possible any of these people were from his world. Marcel's gaze shifted to the newcomer. "Are you another human as well?" And then all of a sudden, another...

Marcel stiffened, his gaze locking onto the Houndour. A killer... unconsciously his hand clenched into a fist. There was no telling why - perhaps it had been justified self defense. Or something more sinister. But he couldn't act yet without knowing more. He'd have to keep a sharp eye on the...

Definitely sounded Kalosian, something he made note of just in case. He still didn't trust her but she seemed experienced in all this, if he assumed she was real. He rubbed his chin as he considered her words. "My initial theory was some kind of dreamscape or psychic hallucination. But this...

Before Marcel could ask anything else, the Charizard was gone, to his disappointment. His eyes narrowed as another figure emerged from a house, a Servine wearing actual clothes. But if he said they came from a far away place, either it was another piece of the dream, or something much much...

Marcel decided he didn't like or trust either of these two. The Houndour sounded outright dangerous and the Mawile girl seemed not all there. Then again, they could either be dream constructs or psychic apparitions. But dreams were supposed to be based on the dreamers subconscious, right...

Marcel jolted awake, blinking, taking in his surroundings. A rush of information all at once that he rapidly sorted through. He wasn't in Orre anymore. By all rights he appeared to be on some kind... it sounded like a train? Sky rushed past overhead and he sat up, sweeping the area. He was...

Name: Marcel Benedetti Age: mid 30's Gender: Male Species: Machop Misc: Marcel is from my spinoff, Blood is Thicker Than Poison. He's a detective from Orre who is very kind and a stubborn pragmatic optimist. He's not naive but he also believes deeply in the power of kindness and good but also...

Scoliopede! All of it's line actually. I always forget about it when I think about bugs, since my brain defaults to flying bugs, but it's truly a fantastic pokemon, the whole line is a gem. Little bug, rolpoly bug, and then a sick horse bug. Peak.

Q: So what's Blood is Thicker Than Water about? A: BITTP is about the loyalties that we have, where we put them. It's about trauma, healing, and the hold toxic relationships can have over your life, how they can warp you and change you little by little. It's about learning to grow and change...

Seconded, and I wasn't even in this one! (Or was I :copyka:?)