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Chapter 16: Broken Expectations Celebi. In front of him was Celebi. The great messenger of time. Prophet of doom and fortune. Struck down as if little more than prey. Fear struck at Nip’s chest like burning claws. His fur bristled, but he couldn’t look away from the horrifying scene. He felt...

Review reply megapost, some very belated! As always, thanks to everyone for all your comments, praises, and criticisms. Even if I don't reply to all of it, I really appreciate it.

I reaaaallly need to get caught up on your fic. Right now though, I'm just going to be covering chapter 13 for Catnip. I like that Arcanine can pick up on a psychic intrusion on his mind. To me that gives me at least one of two implications, and possibly both: 1. That being around someone as...

Did a review of Fledglings (off site due to not caught up here). 3 chapters/922 words. I've reviewed before, so 4 points.

One more! Eternal Shadows. 1 for length (320 words), 1 for theme

Hey bench I've been meaning to read the story for a while unfortunately I haven't had a lot of time so hopefully I'll get to the rest soon but this is just going to be a review of chapter one. To begin, I really like the way you've adapted the personality test into your story. It has this very...

Logging one review for dream eater. 1 point for length and 1 point for new fic. I may or may not be able to squeeze one more before the deadline, we'll see!!

Hey Zion. I remember reading this a while back and never reviewing it. Well, I reread it and I’m fixing that now. First off, I love the surreal feeling of this scene. I think you capture the feeling of dreams and nightmares quite well. There were some really, almost poetic visualizations in...

"Gone," blue reported, flicking his tail over to the hat and scarf. "Probably dead. What's not clear though is if he was murdered-" he gave the other Pokemon a hard look "-or if this was an unfortunate accident. Regardless, I suggest we start investigating immediately." Oh how he wished Yellow...

Blue crinkled his nose as he looked over the absolute farce of a mew. He hated it when gods behaved like irrational children. HIS new would NEVER. He ignored her and instead approached the oshawot, gently flicking him with his tail. "Hey, listen. It's going to be okay. We'll figure this out...

The End. (2 chapters, 580 words. +1 point for theme)

Been a while since I read any of your stuff. I remember liking what I read before of your Sonic fic, so let’s see how I feel about your pokemon works. This review will cover the first two chapters. Chapter 1 So one thing that I really liked about the opening of this chapter is that it’s not...

Wrote a review of the first three chapters of PMD: Stargazers (note that the third chapter is off-site, but I included it in spoiler brackets). Total review length is just shy of 800 words, so that should be 3 points +1 for theme adherence.

3 chapter review for Fighting Nature, about 950 words. Meets the weekly theme, so 4 points.

Hey there Cynch! This is gonna be a review over the first three chapters, since that seems like a good break point. Let’s jump right into things! Chapter 1 I like the dynamic you’ve got set up with Sid and Raskin. They really do feel like friendly roommates. The entire opening passage, and...

The vaporeon stepped inside, casually looking the building over with a cool, neutral expression. His gaze landed on the TV, and the end of his tail twitched siltly. "What strange technology you have. Perhaps it would be worthwhile for me to look it over later. My society is always looking for...

A 1600 word review for Liberators of Fate 5 Chapters, so 5 points. +1 for weekly theme.

Hey there Navar! This is a review of chapters 1-5. I’ll go over some thoughts on each chapter, then my overall thoughts up to this point! And like I said when I talked to you before, I’m going to focus on story and plot, but I’ll also point out a few spots in the prose that felt particularly off...

Q. So what's Places We Call Home about? It's about making mistakes. Terrible mistakes. It's about confronting your past, and learning to acknowledge your trauma without letting it dictate how you act now. And on a related note, it's about acknowledging both your own feelings but others as well...

It's been a bit, but I'm back with a review of chapters 1-5, which is probably how I'll be handling reviews for PoV going forward. Chapter 1 Chapter one seems to be setting things off at a brisk pace, quickly setting up the framing of the story from Yuna's pov. (Side note and crazy theory here...