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I keep forgetting to respond to some of your responses, where you've asked for clarifications or I had further questions etc.; going to do so now before I get to the chapter. Sorry about the delay! Anyway, chapter seven! I'm so worried about what happened to Lucky. It reads a little funny...

Huh. Is this just his arrogance or are dragons actually Just Different? Why? I'm not sure I follow this. People believe he's a freak without a human heart, that there's no way a human would want to separate humans and Pokémon etc., so it's like he has a Pokémon heart instead (or something...

Love this, how the narrator takes pride in their intelligence, and Timothy hurting others to get to them is smart in the ways that didn't matter. The opening with this kind of bureaucracy over releasing them going on is nicely grounded and feels very real. Mina's background distress is well...

Oof, this one's Amara, preparing for retroactive heartbreak. Love the mythology throughline here, though it's interesting you suggest her father's human told him this story - it definitely sounds like a myth the Zebstrika would come up with, centered around them. The way that it creates a...

Chapter three time! I really enjoy the POV details here, Carnel unsure how tall most humans are supposed to be, their poor eyesight given they live in a cave. Gives it a lot of immediate flavor. I also like how Carnel's main concern is this migration and the environments that they're used to...

Hoo, boy, chapter two. This was something. I thought you picked a fun choice of POV with a camera drone Rotom, and the fight was intense! Everything continues to be beautifully written. Everyone once again completely fails to meaningfully address the opposing point of view, as people do...

I am here again, having read chapter one! God, your prose is beautiful; I kept wanting to highlight bits. I think you did a fascinating job of characterization here: Vaselva genuinely loving Hilda but doing so because other people took her away from her mother and presented her with a purpose...

Here for Catnip circle! I thought this was nicely written overall, and I enjoyed seeing a pretty different sort of one-shot, focusing on character relationships in a PMD world where an apocalypse is looming. The atmosphere was pretty soulcrushing, and you did a good job showing Oli and Sadie's...

Chapter one at long last! I enjoy the opening scene a lot and how you portray how the experience of the tank would be pretty nightmarish, the panic of thinking she's drowning (relevant to my interests). I love the last two lines in particular, implying this keeps happening, and every time she's...

Here reading chapter two! Finally! Look at me actually keeping up with a fic! I enjoy the depiction of Pokémon working mundane non-battle-related jobs here early in the chapter; just feels very normal as part of the world. "You complete raisin" is a fantastic insult. I'm so mad at these kids...

Welcome to Thousand Roads! I'm here for Catnip Circle, reviewing the prologue. I think you've got an intriguing start here - I don't read much PMD fic so I'm not really familiar with the trends of the genre or exactly how original any given thing is within it, but I liked how the human...

Here for Catnip Circle, reviewing the prologue! I think the imagery here is really lovely, this frozen tableau of a grand battle, and the specific details you name convey something stark and beautiful - Hilda's expression and dust-smeared face, Reshiram's eyes having the intensity of a dying...

Thanks for an insightful review! Mmm, yeah. I've never been entirely happy with the development of the narrator's relationship with Pidgey. I set about editing this basically deciding I wasn't going to add more scenes or majorly flesh it out, because I wanted to actually get a thing posted...

This is a one-shot I wrote in 2016, which won first place in the Worlds Collide contest on the Serebii.net forums. It was very much written simply to write something for the contest, I wasn't super-happy with it, and it's still a pretty ridiculous premise that's not being explored all that...

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I'm glad I actually got off my ass and read this! Will do my best to keep up and review (but, fair warning, I always say that and I'm still behind on reviewing all my favorite fics). I had somewhat mixed feelings about the prologue at the start - well-done battle but I didn't really get a lot...

1) Ash betrayal, evil team and isekai 2-3) I'd prefer not to write until August because I'm doing Art Fight through July, which means I necessarily can't be the first writer either.

Like, where did their suspicion of Tanuki go? Yesterday they absolutely seemed way more suspicious of Tanuki, and tracking Tanuki to someone who died would be much more ironclad evidence than tracking NonAnalogue, who hadn't claimed anything.

Equitia does list NonAnalogue as a scumread here; however, I don't think they've brought up NonAnalogue at all before or since, except in the claim post where suddenly NonAnalogue is supposedly their biggest mafia suspect. I feel good about my vote.

windskull defends NonAnalogue here, buuut to be fair it’s a totally valid point that there wasn’t all that much to the case on her at this point... hrmmm.