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Mia narrowed her eyes at him in irritation. "So what things could he say? If he couldn't say if he didn't know, then he would've said no even if it was one of them." She glanced at Jesse's chalkboard. "Why aren't I on the list?"

Mia frowned at Lee's information. "If Squirt was behind the door, then he's not really dead," she said. "Why wouldn't you open it?" Of course, this was a game where a lot of things didn't make sense. Dave in his game had been able to talk to ghosts, even though ghosts weren't real, and made no...

They hadn't learned very much from this at all. The day seemed to have been a waste of time, in terms of figuring out the game. No one had done much. Voting to kill someone today would be no better than random chance. Meanwhile, according to Dave, during the night the 'mafia' would strike, and...

Mia narrowed her eyes. "What would happen if they lied in the dating game?"

Reviewed one chapter of Pokémon: Legendary Adventures. +1 1070 words +1 theme

Hey there! I'm glad to finally get around to checking out this story, and deeply amused by the multiple hilarious similarities to my fic. :P I realize you said chapter one isn't very representative and you'd like feedback to be less focused on it, but unfortunately it's all I managed to read...

He was being frustratingly vague. "What did you do?"

While everyone else zeroed in on the nonsense about ending worlds, Mia was far more interested in the bit about invading minds. Could the Delphox plant memories?

"That doesn't make any sense," Mia said, and was about to begin to explain, but was immediately interrupted. She frowned. "That doesn't make any sense either. People have knives. And if you really needed a scythe, you need it less if you're dating a Scyther, because they could do it for you."

Mia narrowed her eyes. This didn't sound like Dave's game. Things going on that weren't done by the players. Or was it? What were these machines about? Was someone controlling them, or were they a game mechanic? They should probably find out more. It also sounded like a way to find out more...

Everything about this was strange. Mia had appeared on the mountain and could not remember how she had gotten there; she had a memory of packing a suitcase, but why would she do that? Something was changing her brain, same as it had apparently changed all the others. But according to everything...

Reviewed chapter 1 of The End: Rekindled. +1 chapter +1 theme (read part of previous version but did not post reviews for the author) 1587 words

Hey! I've been meaning to check out this rewrite, so I was thrilled to roll it for Catnip. I never finished reading The End back on Serebii, but I think I got something like 25-30 chapters in, was enjoying it a bunch and always wanted to keep going and finish it; the rewrite seems a perfect...

Negrek I can’t believe you would rip off my fanfic in this manner, just straight-up borrowing the Mewtwo power series. >:(

Hey there! I'm here for Catnip, reviewing chapter one. Ah, I see you're going for relatability in the first sentence. I enjoy the opening setup scene here, showing a bit of Raskin and Sid and their interactions. It feels like a very normal human-esque roommate situation. This struck me as a...

Hello, everyone! This is a one-shot that I originally wrote in 2012 and have just made some significant revisions to. It means a lot to me to convey what I'm going for correctly in it, so I'd really appreciate any kind of feedback! Butterfree “Metapod, just a bit more! Hang on!” And at...

When did you first get into Pokémon? The year 2000, age ten, when my cousins foisted it upon me after I'd been determined it was stupid. What made you get into it? The aforementioned cousins made me play Yellow, and I realized quickly that oh no I kind of loved it. What captured me first was...

This confuses me a bit. First you call the sounds of the Pokémon in the Pokémon Center "chatter"... but then you say the good thing about gyms is the only hisses of pain are your own, which is odd both since "chatter" doesn't sound at all like it refers to hisses of pain, and also why would gyms...

Ooh, is this N. Are we going to see Carnel again. The POV here is a lot of fun; very alien, especially with them being so unnerved when flesh creatures contort themselves into different shapes. Gathering this is Klink. Love this bit of N going a bit above and beyond, because of course he...

Name: Mia Kerrigan Species: Scyther Pokémorph Appearance: Looks like a thin teenage girl in baggy clothes, but her face is elongated, her head has three spikes poking out of her green hair, her feet are Scyther feet, and she has blades running along her forearms, growing out of her ulnae...