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  1. Umbramatic

    Pokémon Places We Call Home

    Chapter 3 Review! I love your prose, it can have a playful energy to it sometimes. Nip and Haru's dynamic is great, even when it brings up HORRIFYING MORAL DILEMMAS. Especially when it brings up HORRIFYING MORAL DILEMMAS. Also I love Mandi. Mandibuzz needs more love. ...Also a Lucario...
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    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    AT LAST Little God Base Score: 3 Wordcount: 2 Theme: 4 (have reviewed earlier this event) Total: 9 Running Total: 132
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    Pokémon Little God

    Chapter 2 review! Oh boy now we've met Mew. First off RIP Titan. Second off my theory Mew is actually malevolent or at least fair-folk-like still stands. It just gives off that VIBE. Your description of that VIBE is really good by the way, it FEELS alien and wrong. Cool we get more than gen 1...
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    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    MEMES SON The Legendarian Chronicles Base Score: 3 Wordcount: 2 Theme: 4 (have reviewed before elsewhere) Total: 9 Running Total: 123
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    Pokémon The Legendarian Chronicles

    Disclaimer: This is a review of Chapters 26-27 Chapter 27 in a shellnut: I should probably start with Chapter 26 though. It was the chapter I last left off on for this fic, on ye old far off-land of Serebii, and it was a good point to get me reoriented with the fic. Starr had just joined the...
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    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    KICKING IT IN FOR THIS WEEK Hands Of Creation Base Score: 3 Wordcount: 2 Theme: 4 (have reviewed before on this site) Total: 9 Running Total: 114
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    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation

    I alas only had the time and energy to review one chapter tonight but I am GLAD it was Chapter 7, because this is where things get deliciously weird. I love Star. I love those sorts of nonchalant Legendaries (-glances at his own fics-) and her personality is great. Owen's whole existential...
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    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    ONE LAST REVIEW BEFORE THE THEME SWITCH Professor Birch's Last Day on Earth Base Score: 3 Wordcount: 2 Theme: 4 (If I haven't reviewed Walrein here I have reviewed him elsewhere) Total: 9 Running Total: 105
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    Pokémon Professor Birch's Last Day On Earth (TWWWOS #2)

    Oh my god. This entire fic. Plot twists to end all plot twists. Every new one just made the whole thing even more goddamn hilarious. It was incredible. There are so many tiny good moments here. ""Flesh May!" "Don't call me that"" for instance. And the gradual unfurling of the entire plot is a...
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    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    -panders to the event runner- kunāne Base Score: 3 Wordcount: 2 Theme: 4 (I have reviewed another story of the author's here) Total: 9 Running Total: 96
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    Pokémon kunāne (oneshot)

    Well. This is another case of: Not gonna lie I was expecting something bad to happen but I wasn't expecting "you're dead" but from there the feeeeeeeeeels (and some morbidly funny moments). There were some really neat nods to Hawaiian culture in here - somewhat surface level but they work...
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    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    i was in an interesting mindset with this one Ai Shiteru Yo & I'm thankful you found me Base Score: 3 Wordcount: 2 Theme: 4 (I have reviewed another story of the author's during the event) Total: 9 Running Total: 87
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    Pokémon Sun: Ai Shiteru Yo & I'm thankful you found me (Twoshot in one post)

    Oh boy. The object of much fandom discourse. Human-Pokemon relationships. Now see, I have experience here. I have written human/Pokemon OC ships in RPs, including some very weird ones - the most prominent were human/Volcarona and human/Metagross. HOWEVER. All of those involved the Pokemon...
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    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    HERE WE GO Thousand Roads Mad Christmas Mash Up! Base Score: 3 Wordcount: 2 Theme: 4 (I have reviewed Del elsewhere) Total: 9 Running Total: 78
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    Pokémon Thousand Roads Mad Christmas Mash-Up!

    Oh boy. Oh BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOY. I was waiting for this to finally be a thing, and it delivered. I suppose I am obligated to talk about Stoakes. He had a bigger/more important role than I thought he would, given IIRC you haven't read Tales Of Arrival. You handled him well! He totally would set...
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    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    MOAR Bad Idea Base Score: 3 Wordcount: 2 Theme: 4 (I have reviewed Sike elsewhere) Total: 9 Running Total: 69 (nice)
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    Pokémon [ONE-SHOT] Bad Idea

    Oh boy. This fic, the meme, the legend. It's always good to see Karo, and best of all in his natural element: being a troll. Are Aron normal prey of the Nosepass line in your universe? They contain a lot of iron at least. And can be trapped with Magnet Pull as shown here. Squirmy little buggers...
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    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    Leetle one for now. Little God Base Score: 3 Wordcount: 2 Theme: 0 (turns out i've never reviewed a negrek fic in my life. this is my theme song) Total: 5 Running Total: 60
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    Pokémon Little God

    DISCLAIMER: This is a review of Chapter 1 I PROMISED myself I would READ and REVIEW more of YOUR SHIT and now I AM This feels... Very G1 flavored. What with the real world locations and the actual goddamn animals showing up. I wouldn't be suprised if someone mentioned Indian Elephants, and...
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    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    MORE! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! Outside The Frame Base score: 3 Wordcount: 2 Theme: 4 (have reviewed Neb elsewhere) Total: 9 Running Total: 55
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