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Chapter 40 – Regrets and Reconciliation Gawen watched silently as Demitri and Mispy recalled their past, or at least a small portion of it. They remembered bits and pieces of their first lives. Perhaps not all of it, but enough to understand exactly what had happened to them, and why they had...

ACT II – A Stubborn Ego The Hall of Origin was made of pure, white, shining tile. Light shined from above, radiating off of tall ceilings. The light bounced off the walls and illuminated the floor. The passageways were so wide that an entire squad of Owens could march, wing to wing, and have...

As much as Owen is strange, this is one thing normal about him. All Charmander, and all Pokemon in general with their elemental attributes, are aura-based in how they're emitted. It's sort of touching upon that anime logic of a Ponyta's flames only hurt if they want it to, and so on. The thermal...

Special Episode 3 - When the World Was Small Bright lights lined narrow hallways of concrete and metal. White walls surrounded polished floors of marble tile. Every sound echoed for ages across the labyrinth. A youthful, albeit deep, voice echoed from the inside of one of the many rooms that...

Whew, that's a lot to reply to. I handled the others in DMs, but since you're offline at the moment, I'll just toss them here and you can respond as you like in whatever medium. Should probably do some of these in public anyway so it doesn't look like I never reply~ That's precisely it...

Hiya Kint! Wound up reading the prologue (I think?) and the first chapter. Overall, I thought this was an interesting AU take, and two differences from the canon that I spotted seemed to cancel themselves out in such a way that it actually makes the narrative more coherent--which is rare for...

Chapter 39 – Correct “Sooo, can we evolve now?” Demitri balled up his fists, shaking them enthusiastically. Mispy listened, but spent her time prodding at one of the Hot Spot mushrooms with a vine to feign a lack of interest. “Not until we’re sure we can get you in a safe environment,” Rhys...

While disappointed I didn't place, I'm glad that my reviews were largely positive, and all the insecurities I had about my story were invalid. Instead, they found other flaws that I can learn from. Complete win for me~ I'm not used to short-form stories at all, so this was a pleasant surprise...

Chapter 38 – The Enigmatic Healer Manny crossed his arms with doubt, flying through the air with his body parallel to the ocean. “Yer gonna have ter explain that one a second time, Rhys,” he said. “They all got ate, but they’re just fine?” “Y-yes, I promise, they are perfectly safe. More than...

Oh! Wasn't expecting this by the title but now it makes a lot of sense. Well then. -- Heya, Pen! I'm here for Catnip, and I took a look at the first chapter. It felt like a long one, and it was a little slow at the start, but I found myself rapidly going through the latter half of the chapter...

Wow, now THAT is a thorough review, @Pen! I hope I can do the same in return since it seems our fics swapped for Catnip. Very good overall, and I'm going over a lot of this in DMs as requested, but this is all useful feedback that I intend to make use of when I inevitably get back to editing...

Chapter 36 – Team Alloy Owen squinted at the morning light. After being in the pitch-dark Chasm of the Void, anywhere else in the world was a strain on the eyes. He saw the brightest light in front of him, shining with the last remnants of the black sparks of anti-evolution energy. “Gahi?”...

Chapter 35 – The Hunters’ Leader Upon returning home, Owen felt exhausted. Despite not needing sleep, he wanted it. Zena offered for him to rest near the pond inside her home again, and he happily agreed, though he realized soon after that his bed might not be big enough for him. That gave him...

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[[ Diyem sighed, rubbing the back of his head. "Time to go," he muttered, dispelling his shadowban hammer. "I have a world to investigate." ]] Here are the notes that I took. They got a little less thorough near the end and more "in my head" as the number of players went down and I was able...

[[ "Hmm... I see." Diyem nodded. "All things considered, we have a means to test Nip's innocence on the night after this one... assuming I live. If not, there are other ways to investigate things. But for now, I do not trust this claim from Jen." He looked down, pensive, and said, "I do not...

[[ "...When was this?" Diyem asked, rubbing his scales again. "I'd be in favor of voting for Jen as well, if I knew what you were talking about." ]]

I think this would only be appropriate that I pick a Charizard for my partner, both for Blacklight and for mafia right now.(If I qualify, which I'm not sure about)

Chapter 34 – Rest and Recovery With the confirmation that Owen was stable in his fully evolved form, Amia was more than happy to take him to Kilo Village with Rhys and Zena to find some supplies to repair his bag. Anam, missing the warmth of the sun and the outdoors that the headquarters simply...

[[ "We need a plan," Diyem said flatly. "The mafia are likely down to one or two members left. My personal guess is one on their lonesome, but that may not be the case. My two primary suspects right now are Nip and Jen. Nip claims to be bulletproof. Jen claims to be a tracker." He glanced at...