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I can't really properly quantify in an easy way drawings and art matters for Credits / the prize meter... but I suppose since there are a lot of artists here, I do wonder if people would be okay with, at least for the point/exp side of challenges, "time writing" could also be substituted for...

Thanks again, Pen! Seems there were a lot of criticisms this time around, though I do like that the one part that you had a lot of praise for... was something that had been added from scratch in a more recent edit, compared to the other parts of the chapter that I didn't rewrite quite as...

Wow, this is incredibly different compared to the first time I read through this. An entirely new prologue! Is the prelude from the first time gone/integrated into this, more or less? Either way, I'll definitely consider this one to be a hell of a lot more interesting, since it really gets into...

I completely forgot to mention this. I was planning on elaborating on this when it became relevant, but I guess me randomly mentioning +12 here and there gave it away early. So. There are going to be certain things and attributes that add to what will be known as innate modifiers. These stack...

Veritas City is a world between worlds. A dimensional crossroads where the spirits of many other realms can sometimes find themselves by chance. This city, surrounded by seemingly infinite fields and forests in all directions, is home to mysterious, but friendly, natives, as well as several...

Chapter 46 – Weapon “Is he still sulking?” Jerry said. “Looks like it,” Star said. Owen paced through Hot Spot Cave’s main road, waiting for everybody else to settle in and discuss their next steps. Enet was bathing with Gahi and Amia in the cave’s nearby hot springs—courtesy of Zena and Amia...

Player type: Front Lines 3 Character name: Owen Basic personality: Bright-eyed, helpful, a little insecure, and surprisingly wise. Essentially the Sun Arcana if you played Persona games. Pokémon species: Charmander Starting support build: Boon Talents: Resistance, defense Weaknesses...

This is the thread where you will officially sign up with your character, or just as an Ethereal player! Click here for the character sheet! [SIGNUPS ARE NOW CLOSED] Thank you everyone! The signup form is below:

What can’t be seen, yet festers within us all. The shadows that hide in your mind. The inhibitions that hold back your feelings. What happens when you’re forced to show your true self? The Blacklight will expose the world to its eternal truth. Hello everyone, and welcome to Blacklight...

Special Episode 4 - Revise the Moment Rotwood Fen was a cursed place. The ground was covered in a thin, patchy layer of dark grass. Surrounding this grass was black mud, fungus, and grime, cold to the touch. Rocks were covered in mold and moss, various shades of gray and bluish-black, or some...

A) Count me in for Ash Betrayal. B) I am forever bound to work at all times and am therefore always available. C) I'm open for any positioning.

Chapter 45 – The Balance of Power Everyone, aside from Anam, his spirits, and Nevren, was gathered around at the large, rocky cavern. The warmer air made it difficult for non-Fire Types to fight for long; Step, sensing this unfair advantage, breathed out a frosty cloud, cooling the room in a...

I think I'm going to add a remark that he doesn't behave like one from Alex or something, because you're right, he doesn't. It's intentional but I should probably acknowledge it in-universe more... directly. So, I actually sort of imply this waaaay later on why, but I think that's a good idea...

Hiya Desert! You can thank @zion of arcadia for tossing this story into Catnip for a review, and that's what this is for! Now, overall, I want to say that this narrative style is very prose heavy rather than dialogue, and as a personal preference, that does make things difficult for me to get...

Chapter 44 - Overconfident Owen, Gahi, Enet, and Amia all returned from the Poison Guardian’s realm. They smelled of the toxic swamp’s noxious fumes, but thankfully didn’t take much of it with them beyond that. “Brr—what a cold draft,” Amia said, rubbing her arms. “I don’t think Hot Spot Cave...

Chapter 43 – Holy Poison Owen didn’t know what it was like to slog through poisoned gunk until that day. It was thicker than water, but not quite as thick as mud. Between his scales and his thighs, it had a jelly-like feel to it in some parts, and a vague resemblance to the slime of Emily’s...

Chapter 42 – Royalty “Y’know, it’s kinda hard ter hate this place,” Manny said. “Nice air, strong trees… Could do without all the spiderwebs, though.” Arachno Forest was brimming with life. The trees were thick with dark leaves and strong trunks; very little light reached the forest floor. The...

Chapter 41 – Frozen Over The northwestern corner of the world was covered in a perpetual, thick layer of ice. The white field was dotted with black rocks and sloping hills of snow and ice. The ground wasn’t stable, and there were a few incidents early on where Valle had fallen into thinner...

Hey, Wind! This was an interesting story and I think what really gave it some staying power in particular was the ending. The reveal itself, in hindsight, was a little cliche--kinda like those stories of a hero talking to a child about some event in the past, not revealing that they are that...

Thanks for the review, Pen! Good feedback like before all around. For some clarifications... Yes, this is an early problem that I have, and I think part of it comes with being a little light on epithets combined with having too few physical descriptors sprinkled in, and so on. During my...