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Logging a review for White Swan Black Swan https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/white-swan-black-swan.551/post-32271

After deliberation, can I request a Crobat sprite?

YYEEEE I can't wait

In which I show that Koa is doing Just Fine -Ever since the battle at the Worldcore and recovering in the infirmary, he's been avoiding everyone. Particularly Brisa. He's skipped out on their training sessions, and has made a point to not be around her much -He's also been mysteriously absent...

In the darkness of the infirmary, Koa lay, drifting in and out of sleep, never quite awake, not quite properly asleep. His injuries had healed and he was set to go home tomorrow, but he could relax. The battle at the Worldcore kept flashing through his mind, and his training with Brisa. What...

"Of course!" Koa replied, hardly hesitating. "I mean, I think we would be. Although... Pokemon from my world aren't like you, not exactly. They love to battle and they don't really live in castle's like that or anything. And we can't speak their language." He took a moment to muse. "Its weird...

It felt nice, to actually have a real discussion about something they both liked. Though he also was a little unused to it. He'd spent so long focused on his goal that he'd almost forgotten what it felt like to think about why. Koa took a long moment to think. He wanted to give Icetales a good...

Too tired to form proper thoughts but they were very pleasant and I enjoyed them lots! Unexpected joys is maybe my favorite! Lovely descriptions!

Koa acquires and reads every book he can get his paws on about Unown and where they come from, what the scope of their powers is, and if there's anything to be known about how they can be controlled or manipulated and who might be able to do that, as well as trying to see if there's anything...

Koa smiled at hearing Icetales speak. Not only was the subject change a relief, but he was happy that at least Icetales seemed to have perked up, speaking about his mother. "Your mother sounds like a wonderful person," he murmured. "I'm not sure," he said, chuckling awkwardly. Not many people...

Koa's chest tightened at Icetales' question, and he felt slightly nauseous, though he kept his face neutral with practiced ease. It was the one thing he could do since he was used to keeping up a calm mask at that sort of question. He offered a shrug, keeping his gaze carefully even. Part of...

Quick review time! Wow! I have to say this story has improved greatly since I last read it. I absolutely love the revisions you made. The dialogue feels very good and colloquial, very natural. I also deeply adore the choice to rewrite the final battle, and replace it with a match against Dorien...

Koa listened intently to Icetales story. He wasn't used to someone opening up to him, although then again he rarely asked people anything personal. Mostly to avoid anyone asking him anything. His heart twisted as Icetales continued to speak. To have to leave everything behind, to be forced to...

Koa perked up. If anyone might understand how to control one's shadows, Icetales would understand. He was about to nod and agree, then he hesitated slightly. What if his training session ended up like his one with Brisa? "I... I'd like that," he said slowly, offering a smile to the regal...

While in the infirmary, Koa decides to keep a close eye on Zinc, and her comings and goings. As he continues to recover and be able to walk around a little more, he sometimes follows her discreetly. He's hoping to see if she does anything odd while around Sword/Shield, or if she shows any weird...

Logging 3 hours of writing today and a review I wrote for a Bingo prompt https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/sinnoh-bingo-fics-an-adventure-though-diamond-and-pearl.713/post-32173

I thoroughly enjoyed this, for a number of reasons! (advanced apologies if this mini review is a little rambly/disjointed). First of, the prose was nice. A lot of internal thinking/narration. I've never read DPA but I am fascinated eternally by all things Cyrus, and the idea of him eventually...

The final piece to my wonky puzzle of bingo prompts is complete! https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/tales-of-pokemon-bingo-prompts.696/post-32156 Introducing: Anger Point! A story about a budding psychic trainer who must contest with the burdens placed upon her and the...

"So, who will it be?" Inertia Matsumodo gazed at the assortment of pokemon before her. Espurr, Reuniclus, Drowzee, Abra, and even a Munna and Ralts. A Chingling in the back, along with a Gothita. There was even a single Sigilyph among the group, which was surpising. Her parents had really gone...

Koa nodded emphatically in agreement as Icetales described teamwork. It wasn't far from the things he'd tried to teach his own pokemon. Everyone supported and looked out for each other. Koa shrugged, keeping his expression neutral. It felt harder and harder lately to brush things off like he...