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Koa narrowed his eyes. "What do you mean, hurting? Is your plan going to hurt people?" Still no sign of where this person was. If they were even in the room. As he spoke, he continued to search for any tells. Shadows, the way the sound echoed, even if there was any other secret spots one could...

Koa's head whipped around as he tried to discern the source of the voice, or anything about it. Masculine? Feminine? Even where it was coming from. But it seemed impossible to tell. "I came for tea," he said sarcastically. "You must know why I've come. I heard about your offer at the Worldcore...

After he'd been filled in on what happened at the Worldcore, his mind couldn't help but keep going back to that one part. An offer, to split away from everyone and join the so-called 'spy'. For days he hadn't been able to shake the thought, so finally he got up the guts to go for himself. It had...

He shuddered. So many coils. "Oh its all going to be over?" Koa asked. The words felt bitter on his tongue. Always something, always someone. Still, it wasn't quite like he hadn't know what he might be getting into when he'd come here. Although this was pretty freaky. "Well thats good," he said...

Logging more reviews! Four of Equital's Bingo drabbles, here: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/equitials-miscellaneous-flash-fic-and-short-stories.706/post-33392 At about 900 words it seems

Gosh I made the mistake of reading this at work and almost got a little choked up. All these oneshots were really sweet and adorable, and really nice! I really enjoyed the varying viewpoints and styles, from a wild pokemon, to humans, to legendaries to the fairytale vibe of the final pieces...

"Well thats a relief," Koa said. It really wasn't. In fact, it sounded like a nightmare. "You sure do good protecting the Tree then. I hope there's no way to disable or get past the projections though, is there? I wouldn't want the spy to try that. Although if you told us more about your lovely...

"Ah right," Koa replied. He'd already heard about the incident with Raven. "Has anything else unusual happened, maybe before that? Do you remember a strange dark red storm or anything like that even?" He paused, then added. "You know, I heard there's more than one spy, maybe you saw something...

Koa forced himself to relax. "You're right, Xerneas," he said, dipping his head. "We do need to stop the spies. A lot of us are pretty stressed about it. That's why we came to see you, actually. One of the reasons. Do you have any ideas about who the spy could be? Maybe someone you've seen that...

"Oh sure, we'll be leaving in just a second," Koa retorted glaring. He tensed eyes scanning for any dangerous. Inside, his fear rose, a voice screaming in his head that this was wrong, so wrong. This wasn't right. His heart stuttered in his chest, but he didn't show it, staying focused. What...

Koa stared at the sight, agast. He'd heard that Diyem was acting weird, sure. And he knew Xerneas might have something to do with it, but between everything else going on, he'd pushed that to the back of his mind. But now that it was here in front of him, it was hard to ignore. "Okay, what the...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/heroes-after-all.46/post-33307 Review for chapters 4 & 5 of Heroes After All!!

So I can't actually remember if I reviewed 4 or not but I wanted to reread anyways cause I liked it, so here I am with chapters 4 & 5! You've got a good balance of plot and pacing, switching between the two viewpoints of Riolu and Aaron. Both stories feel relevant and meaningful, and it builds...

Logging another review for WSBS! https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/white-swan-black-swan.551/post-33303

This is a speed review and I'm at work so I won't go super critique. Even so I thought this chapter was quite good! I really enjoyed it and I think the pacing is moving nicely. The tone across chapters feels consistent and each chapter reveals a little more about the world, Odette and this...

Koa's eyes lit up at the suggestion. A Colosseum fight sounded like fun. He'd never had the chance to properly spectate on those before. Smilling, he nodded in agreement. "Yeah, I'd like that too." He hadn't found out much, but perhaps he had made a new friend, which was more important to him...

"Okay... well thank you guys for all your help. If you remember anything else, let me know." He paused, ready to turn away, then hesitated. Something about the Mew's attitude rang true with him. He couldn't just leave like this. Like this was some kind of interrogation. Not when he knew how it...

Koa nodded absently. "Sorry for bothering you guys," he admitted. "I've had this stuff on my mind awhile and I guess everyone on the team is still worked up about the spy." He let out a sigh. Perhaps it was best to leave them in peace. One thing did bother him though... "Shield.... Back on...

Didn't he know what that felt like. Trying not to think about everything that bothered him? "Well, at least Telum is still out there," he murmured comfortingly. "Maybe there's a way you can go back."

Koa relaxed a little and nodded. He probably wouldn't get any other good information from her anyway. "Yeah, sure. Can you tell me about Telum? Not like... anything scary if you don't want to, but the cool parts. Stuff you and Shield did, or just things about your world?"