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Three chapter review of FIghting Nature

3 chapter review for Fighting Nature, about 950 words. Meets the weekly theme, so 4 points.

Hey there Cynch! This is gonna be a review over the first three chapters, since that seems like a good break point. Let’s jump right into things! Chapter 1 I like the dynamic you’ve got set up with Sid and Raskin. They really do feel like friendly roommates. The entire opening passage, and...

The vaporeon stepped inside, casually looking the building over with a cool, neutral expression. His gaze landed on the TV, and the end of his tail twitched siltly. "What strange technology you have. Perhaps it would be worthwhile for me to look it over later. My society is always looking for...

I can't remember who in the thread suggested it (and I'm too tired to look back right now lol) but I think the idea of adding a straw poll up, maybe around the time the boss is revealed, would be a good way to approach it. I'm definitely for trying out the extended schedule (which I think we're...

Reviewed 5 chapters of Liberators of Fate

A 1600 word review for Liberators of Fate 5 Chapters, so 5 points. +1 for weekly theme.

Hey there Navar! This is a review of chapters 1-5. I’ll go over some thoughts on each chapter, then my overall thoughts up to this point! And like I said when I talked to you before, I’m going to focus on story and plot, but I’ll also point out a few spots in the prose that felt particularly off...

A small whirlwind of ice surrounded Nip as he launched himself at Groudon, aiming consecutive spinning kicks at the behemoth's chest. As he landed, he did his best to ignore the blistering heat, even as the smell of singed fur reached his nostrils. He dashed forward, his claws coated in shadow...

Nip Turn 6: Triple Axel Groudon Shadow Spike Groudon Shadow Spike Groudon

Nip Turn 5: Psych Up Dave's speed

Tenatively logging turn five as *Psych Up*on someone with max speed, but if the the other plan goes through I'll swap it out to shadow spike. Or they can override if needed.

Turn 3: 3x shadow spike. 4x if I'm given an extra action.

Ooops last minute change of plans Swapping: hex adept for critical shot (already paid for) selling 2x iron thorn and 1x silver spike buying 3x blast seed New turn 1 actions: 1. PU highest speed 2. Double dip 2 blast seeds on rayquaza

Turn 1: Psych up , copying starr's speed(or whoever has the highest speed) Assist: simple beam on rayquaza

One more change for you (sorry it's kinda last minute!!) Purchasing hex adept, replacing calm spirit

Nip let out a low growl, shifting from foot to foot. He'd had little time to get used to his new evolved body. But that wasn't important. He'd fought with worse conditions. He flexed his claws and let out a low hiss. Shadows weaved around his claws as he sized up the line of enemies — and the...

I think this got missed from my previous log, since I haven't gotten any exp. Anyways. Logging - One hour writing - One hour drawing - Two more reviews at the same place as above. That should get me through the second wave of challenges + two of wave 3 when combined with above Stats Make sure...

Nip was too busy being mad to have a bad feeling.

"How dare you suggest I would do anything to harm Xerneas' domain!" Nip said, his voice coming out in a low, guttural growl. He started to creep forward atop Bahamut's back, ready to leap forward and tear the lucario to shreds for daring to call his honor into question. But the necrozma's words...