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Ah didn't realize Chibi was currently "it", but I reviewed chapter 7 of LC about two weeks ago. Requesting a review for Casting Off!

I'd like to sign up as well. Will pick the Victini bag.

Chapter 7 It’s sweet to see Jade caring for her team like this, even if Chibi makes a pretty good point. You can’t keep your Pokémon out of harm’s way if they get blown up by a bomb. I can tell you did a good amount of research into ships for this arc, so props to that. I know you said in...

Hey, happy to see you back! Your review was a treat to read, just like your first one was. :D I made some edits based on your feedback, though I’ll respond to a few things more in detail: That’s definitely not meant to happen, so thanks for pointing it out. I did my best to avoid it after you...

Alright, back for chapter 5 and 6! Looks like the first of the two is indeed a breather as I expected, which is definitely nice after the craziness from the last few chapters. Anyway, let’s get right into this: Chapter 5 First paragraph of the chapter and Specer’s already here with the snarky...

I'm more than happy to submit my story! <div class="charatitle"> <span> <p>Casting Off</p> <p>Chaptered • Complete • Adventure • G</p></span></div> <div class="charahover"> <p>A three-shot about a young Cranidos joining the navy in order to fulfill his desire to go on...

Chapter 4 Pretty interesting how TMs work in LC. Since canon is so vague about TMs are applied, it’s always fun to see what different interpretations authors have. Even more interesting! I see LC subscribes to the “Pokémon don’t instantly master TM moves” school as well. Well that’s not...

Well, Eevee has always been a personal favorite of mine, so I could see that happening. Then again, assuming I won't just become a random Pokémon but one that actually suits me and I'm comfortable with, it might very well be something else since the perspective of being a quadruped for the rest...

(Crossposting from Serebii) Heya! Been a while since last time, but here to review chapter 2 and 3 just like I said I would. Chapter 2 Well you did just see them doing something illegal, Jade. Whelp, that escalated quickly. From kidnapping to worse. Though given that Jade saw buildings...

"Though if Dave is the final Mafia member... what do we do next?" Cabot asked. "How do we get everyone back who disappeared?"

Cabot blinked and stared blankly at Dave. Throughout most of his stay here he was convinced Dave was innocent, yet he turned out to be as crazy as Psyduck! Had he been like this the whole time? Did the Mafia brainwash him on the third night? Regardless of what had happened, it was obvious who to...

Alright, here's Casting Off's final chapter. Originally this was posted on July 15 2018. As the weeks passed, Basic Training went by in a hazy, lengthy blur for Cabot. There were exercises to be done, a rekindled (if friendlier) rivalry with Niilo and his companions to indulge in, and...

Once again, thank you for all the kind words! I'm always happy to read what particular aspects people enjoyed about the fic and it truly makes my day. Well, the thing you gotta remember is that for the timeframe you're talking about, he's been at Basic Training for only a day or even less...

“I’m just so confused…” Cabot murmured. ((It’s not any easier for us authors either I’m afraid. After you got accused it seemed obvious that Hecto was the last Mafia member, but I’m honestly not sure anymore.)) “Well… maybe you could say what my role is then?” the Cranidos asked. “I’d still...

((Now that we're theorizing, I think there's something important I want to share that I initially wanted to bring up while cross examining Hecto. Namely why I don’t believe in the possibility that Hecto is a Naive Cop. I did some research into the role myself, and it seems to be rarely present...

"I mean, I'm not sure how much better I feel if you're still suspicious of me Hecto... but thank you for not voting for me at least." ((And I suppose I can see the argument Noah is making, or at least regarding this particular question. I still have other reasons to be skeptical about whether...

Cabot looked at Loki and Lachlan in confusion. “Wait, so is one of them a member of the Mafia after all…?” ((I’m… admittedly not sure myself. I certainly didn’t expect this twist, but I agree that it’s doubtful we have two doctors. Dave might have a point that Loki is neither with the Mafia or...

“I mean I don’t think I gained any special powers since I got here,” Cabot murmured as he fidgeted with his claws. “I just go to sleep every night like I thought most people did…” ((You do have something though.)) “Wait, really?!” ((Everyone got a fancy role here, so of course you’re not...

((We never were given a solid number, however I theorized a while back that there were only two Mafia members plus one that would get recruited, which I still stand by. That said, I’m glad you accept my terms Hecto, and I think we’re ready to begin in that case.)) Cabot looked down and let out...

“W-Wha-?! M-Me?!” Cabot spluttered. “But I’m not part of the Mafia!” The Cranidos nervously looked around the room and noticed to much of his horror that instead of the skeptical faces he had expected, most seemed intrigued by Hecto’s arguments while some even nodded along in agreement. How...