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Chapter 1 Blitz review Yay a xeno fic with humans being the oddball out this should be interesting. Love how we get dropped into the clinic setting as "now what" roosts into everyone's minds. And with their sleep interrupted and moral obligations I'm not expecting the clearest decisions...

Hi nekodatta i'm here for blitz time. Chapter 1 So yay, Turing reference. As a computer history nerd i've got a soft spot for things like that. Also AI stories are a favorite of mine so now that my expectations are laid out, lets go. so Sada and Turo are married? Interesting, and adds...

Chapter 3 Review blitz So this tale might boil down to Sabi gets tricked. She's a kid so it is understandable (i had to go to bulbpedia to get that data by the way). Still it sounds like she is getting blitzed by something nasty. The time skip makes me think of the time gear for some reason...

Chapter 2 Blitz review With a name like mirelands and descriptors like murky i hope Charm has some luck getting to that upper ground...i personally would settle for stationary dry ground as the surroundings put to mind of a fen bog and both those traits are rarer then high ground in a tronce...

Chapter 1 Review blitz Hi erazonpo3 welcome to the forums (belatedly) and to the blitz. So right out the gate we are in Galaxy land archaic version. I'm not surprised that blackjack has combed over this and gotta admit that them dropping a line bopped this to near the top of my to-read list...

Chapter 14 Blitz review Cue the dream. I suspect Eriks gunna develop a fear of precussion sets or maybe the mon version of the band "smash" I see darkrai redecorated again. Wonder why... And if Erik doesn't keep a bead on the blob and darkrai he's earming am a plus in bad life choices...

Chapter 13 Blitz review And drumroll please, the catchathon and namimg results are in. In closing. Shank should not name thier own children ever. I can't suss the signifigence of Mollys names for her team besides they sound pretty. And i'm expecting Eriks team to sound like he's...

Blitz review Chapter 12 Welp Erik confessed. Good on him. I think he failed his persuasion roll comsidering the rest of the cast is giving him "are you nuts" vibes. And Shanks dealing with his unrequited crush... And wrestling with that crush being a few screws loose... And his own plots for...

Chapter 11 Blitz review No date details. Not even a "it went good?" Ah well. And now he has more rude "divine" guides arguing it off. Poor erik they haven't even talked to him yet and i suspect things are going to go bad. Oak-darkrai, well thats better then Dead Oak i guess. From Dark's...

Chaptet 10 Blitz review How'd Erik meet Fira again? She seems familiar with Erik to the point of ignoring the real computer expert Shank. Thats a bold move really considering Shank can empty her bank acconnt and seems to have feelings for Erik. Yeah she's monofocused to the point of ignoring...

Chapter 8 Blitz review Shanks whining after 4 days in? Oh you poor summer child this could go on for months if someone doesn't step in. I can imagine Rocket gambling can get fierce. I'm surprised Shank hasn't tried to fleece the games Mr. My GameCorner Pass! That much activity, and yoga...

Chapter 7 blitz reveiw So hes not waking up to the sounds of digging. Nice. One bullet dodged. Granted consodering Shanks new duds they are in the pyroars mouth now aren't they? Mollys reasonably freaked out but layi g blame in all the wrong places. poor thing. We should be blaming Shank...

Chapter 6 Blitz review Eventually Erik is gotta start asking if this blank place is real. Hes coming here a bit too often. And then Dead Oak is going to be like: yep, here's the rental payment plan. (Passes Erik a sheif of papers) since you keep spawning on my floor. (More papers appear)...

Chapter 5 Blitz review Shamelessly me and Shank would be doing the exact same thing. Shameless fanboying on the inside. Is it safe? Nope. Will it end badly? Likely. Am i still doing it? Yep, I am. Wonder if the Rockets are tossing a pity look over thier shoulders or a I'll shank you...

Chapter 4 review for blitz Well that was answered in seconds flat. Chex evolving is not a good thing. Considering they're running for thier lives amd i think sir farfetched is bulkier then his base forum i agree with Erik, now is not the time. Love that line about subpar fiction. Are you...

Blitz review Chapter 3 Running seems a smart idea... Maybe after recalling the mystery 'mon and finding a crowd to blend in with. Hint hint... But nah...Molly will probably be fine as she's being smart. Shank's grave is going to read "here died an opportunist, cause of death persuring shiny"...

Chapter 2 blitz review And of course the first thing pepper and chex do is scuffle. I mean its canonical mon interaction but how eriks mom is seeing this as am improvment is beyond me. R.i.p mr. Pillow. I am surprised that Chex shared his leek to be candid. I though farfetched were more...

Blitzing again Chapter 1 Word count. 910 Now i gotta ask. How did a farfetched meet a would be chef? Followed the smell to omlets past (and as a farfetched would that be more like going to a murder fest... Specifically a infant avianacide?). On second thought hopefully not omlets past...

Here for the first review of the blitz Lets get started. Prologue review. (Word count 273) Interesting spin on the mon game opening. You gotta admit wjite void is not the thing you wanna wake up to... Or dream up to I suppose... Funny how most people are thinking must hit a" especially...

I'm gunna go for minum personally.