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Blitz review Chapter 1 You know i wonder if everyone else hears these mysterous wake up in a void voices as james earl jones' mufasa? Candidly i do. Well thats one way to fill in a featureless void. Faceplant into the features. At least he knows what he is... A lot of mon protags get...

This reminds me a bit of the old genescect villians piece from way back when. Interesting to see a mon reared in a world that seems benign but drops hints that it isn't.. The constant resets, the sheer trauma of the p.o.v. 'mon, all are wonderful little tells. The interspacing of download and...

The dancing lilly pad mon lilcolo?

Blitz review Prologue (1/3) Hi chibi here for the blitz review, figure i'd poke at a long fic and may i say kudos with staying with this tale twenty years i wager its going to be a ride heck of a ride. Laughs. I'm imagining lugia in a nest of coral arranged like a blanket, a crude do not...

Review blitz Fic leaf boat An: hi very belated welcome to the forum thought i'd poke in and give you a review. A Latios xeno fic, nice i've come from another jetdragon piece recently lets see how yours pans out. The opening blurb it seems like Lat is remembering to create... That he's over a...

chapter 12 Corinthians 15:10 part 6 Readers note: set pre-Transversal, pre-Manga. Giovanni centric, focusing on being Rocket. What's the difference between a cornered rat and a mad man? One has access to munitions but both are equally rabid. Don Marchetti was no strategic genius. What he was...

the pig fire type starter... tepig?

Chapter 1 Blitz review Someone released our prospective protagonist on smogen. And we are at the dreaded hm tm make and break build up of a team. Dismay feels like a legit reaction. Especially when finding our trainer p.o.v. is a working class soul. Though Gemma seems nice enough to supply...

Hi spiteful figure I'd review your newest piece for the blitz before I tackled fledglings to unclog the tag so here we are. Aw our p.o.v. was a test subject kiddo. Man thats a rough set of nightmares to be facing down. Seems like they have someone to wake them up. Assuming the call of the...

Blitz chapter 2 review So we got another p.o.v we're exploring? Alright lets go. Someone sounds hungry. And in less then five lines we kmkw, hungry, sweet tooth, and klepto. Nice. From the floating line i suspect we got a ghost type lets see. Called it. Hello shippet cliff hamger from...

as you post more i'll keep an eye out. Its an interesting premiss amd the fact the protag kinda did it to himself is fitting and adds to its alure.

chapter 1 review for the blitz. Ohf precog is a blessing. Many societies would argue but it'll be interesting to see how mon tackle it. Definitly the sight beyond thier egg is a case of alien sky. Still its a pretty one... But if this sight also forshadows the mons death it sounds like...

Hi here for the blitz, lets get started Chapter 1 review I have to admit the title caught my interest. Lets see how the tale holds up. Well thats a crash in hello. Well Az and Elec are crashing through the brush thier persuers are bashing through everything else by the sound of it. They are...

Review chapter 1 Blitz event Figure I'd try a non-mon piece this time. And so we start our avenue dwelling on the war like nature of humanity? I doubt this will be a slice of life piece. And we go from abstract to a pitched battle. With ghosts from the sky and spirit allies? Reminds me of...

Part 3 Blitz review Well at least hes not totally plowing in fully stupid. Only partially stupid. Nice to see hes found the turn back sign and dickering a tiny bit. Still sorta Tish had lied to him. Wonder why she didn't. And you can see the utter self destruction in play. Obsession is an...

Chapter 2 blitz review Back for mr. Ramlbes part two, and i am guessing this is where the title starts to drop. As in the actual sabatical begins since chapter one seemed a "last day of work" vibe to be honest. Amd we hit the brick wall of "how am i going to stand out? When each region has a...

hi here for the blitz Chapter 1 Another hard hitting question intro. Seems to be a theme today. This lads gpt a case of cold feet by the sound of it amd breaks off enough the beaten path to do something about it... Only to find mortal peril i guess? Makes for an interesting hook to say the...

Well my old trick of copy/paste via reply is not working so appologize if this review reaction gets out of order i guess. Review blitz chapter 1 So i suspect Maxim is our p.o.v. character. Interesting that from the questions they are asking, what they did, and why and how it's phrased... All...

Hi kiba i am here for the blitz, lets get started Chapter 1 Ah the question of the ages. And a title drop all in one stab. Nice. From the four floors down line i am going to say i suspect that we're in a mystery dungeon. I have to admit at the "rich trees" line I kept imagining animal...

chapter 11 Corinthians 15:10 part 5 readers notes: Surge and Giovanni talk. The depravities of the League are touched upon as Surge realizes just how scewed up the situation is. The ride was made in silence, Surge pulling out and prepping his guns while Giovanni stared out the window...